new shayari @ pg 76- by me - Page 45

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Aazeen02 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh! such a nice poetry alka di... Vey nice...
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Posted: 11 years ago


Super duper post..๐Ÿ‘Deepe will love it๐Ÿ˜ณ
Great one dear.. keep writing more..

Oh thankyou so much tanu di... M really humbled... But where is deepa di? Was waiting 4 her reply...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rabzonedge

Thanks hey Doc..if possible read my OS too...and give your comments..๐Ÿ˜ณ



oh sure yaar,i wud luv to read ur work๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago
Azeen-both d Poems were just fantastic๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: niniborn2rule

awesome post aazeen...kya baat...

Thanx a lot sayani di... Its gr8 2 see u all giving me more than what I deserve...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SwastikAshNi

<font size="2" color="#FF0000" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Azeen-both d Poems were just fantastic๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ‘</font>

Thankyou so very much bishal bhai...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Azeen you deserve this appreciation Dear..See Mudra encouraged me..And me encouraged you..same way you will encourage someone else..we are here to buck up each other..keep writing love you...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Heya friend I m back again with my boring poetry ๐Ÿ˜•
But kya kare Hume aur kaun sehen kar sakta he IF friends ke sivay ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Now come to the serious point ๐Ÿ˜Š I m posting new shayari here for my all IF friends jinhone kahina kahin kisina kisi tarikese har tarah se meri madad ki he.. This is a small gift from my side to all of them..
Hope u all will like it... Sorry in advance if I hurt anyone's emotions... ๐Ÿ˜ณ but Plz suggest me guide me .. Comment like critisise my work :-):-):-)

Suno sab he baat aaj batani kuch khas
Sabhi ko sunana he ye raz
Sab yahan IF me hai bade matwale
Alag alag baat me mahir he sare
Suno baat aaj bataungi sabhi ki main
Plz Batana agar kahin galti Karun main๐Ÿ˜ณ

Sabse Pehle baat he Jinki sab se pyari he yahan
Karti baatein methisi Jinke sujav nyare he yahan
Are koi aur nahi hai TANU uska naam
Jinki WU ki baat hi he nyari
Jinke post bina forum me chaye udasi
Aur Jo he kajol ki deewaniโค๏ธ

Baat kuch modte he Saat rasto ke beech
Jinki nazar padhe bina Hume na aaye nind
Masoom si baatein karke hasati sabko
Kabhi dard bhari shayari se Rulati sabko
Jinka kaam hi he Unki pehchaan
DEEPA he Unka naam ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Baat agar chal hi Rahi he shayari ki
Kaise bhule tarif Karna Unki lajawan shayari ki
Sab ko honsla deti woh likhne ka
Han Han DIVYA hi he naam usi ka ๐Ÿ˜›

Badhte he ab yadon ki gali me Sahej ke rakhte he Jo yadon ko
Do shaks aise he Jo Jane he ya kala bakhoobi se
Dete humko Roz Nayi nayi tasveerein pyari
EK hamesha karti pyari baatein
Aur EK madad karne ko Hoti he taiyaar
Aur koi nahi DEBA aur SHEE he unke naam ๐Ÿค—

Ab karte he EK anokhi reporter ki baat
Jinhe khoob aata he KTKP ki khabrein sunane ka kaam
Par karti baatein hamesha khari
Fun post banane ki unke paas he jadu ki Chadi
Han han MUDRAji aap hi he vahi๐Ÿ˜ณ

Fun post ki Nikli he baat
To kaise bhule unka naam
Theme queen hum use kehte
Jinka Nazariya he sabse hatke
Deepa ki judwa behen kehte unko
Aaj kal bohat miss karte he SUMI hum Aapko ๐Ÿ˜ญ

Cute cute si baatein he hamesha karti
Siggies Naye Naye pyare pyare he banati
Unki kahaniyon ke Bhai fan he hum
Jinko pyar se kehte ANA (cool_sk) he hum โค๏ธ โค๏ธ

Aab baat karte he kuch aise doston ki
Jo karte he hamesha muje support
Jinke comments ka karti hu main Intezar
SARIKA ,HARSHAL ,SWASTIK aur DEV he unke naam๐Ÿ˜Š

Abhi abhi Jinka hunar pata chala he Hume
Likhti he pyari pyari shayari nayi
Sweet si baatein karti he Dono
AZEEN aur ALKA han wahi to he wo๐Ÿ˜›

Ye he KTLK forum ke chamakte hue sitare
Sab he alag alag mahol se shehr se Bhi he juda
Par Jode hue he sab ko EK hi kadi
Ashni ki Jodi he sabki chahiti Badi๐Ÿค—

With lots of love
-Bhavita :-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-)


Plz comment:-):-):-):-)
๐Ÿค—   ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago
๐Ÿค—,,Itni pyaari shayri...Awww..Pure Forum Members ko samet Liya Tu kitti cute hai..Ekdam mast...Sachchi dil se nikli shayri hai..Great work...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rabzonedge

๐Ÿค—,,Itni pyaari shayri...Awww..Pure Forum Members ko samet Liya Tu kitti cute hai..Ekdam mast...Sachchi dil se nikli shayri hai..Great work...



Sacchi acchi Lagi tuje???!!! ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Thanks dear ๐Ÿค—
I thought aaj to jute Khane padenge ๐Ÿ˜†

But glad u liked it ๐Ÿ˜ณ   ๐Ÿ˜Š