Scrambled Post of Scrambled Brain Alert!
Will need to keep it simple and pointwise today.
1st & foremost, a big congratulations to the entire team and the fans for 300th episode. A significant milestone for everyone associated with the show, the creatives, the PH, the actors and the Fans of this Amazing Show.
A very well articulated Crooner Priya ' lovely how point out the areas of improvement in the most structured manner! I do hope they continue to pay heed to your requests.
The episode began with a "Koi Option Nehi hai" to Khushi and progressed to a "Main tumhe iss sari mein Dekhna chahta huin Khushi".
That was the most romantic dialogue in the entire episode for me ' finally expressing that seeing her happy, looking beautiful is not just for her, but his need too. A confession of lover alright!π³
BTW, "Babby..sweetheart" is haunting his memories too. ππ
Looking forward to Arnav recreating their "Romantic" moments for Khushi' It will be such a pleasure to see Barun and Sanaya's reversed reactions to the original scenes. I can't wait!
Anjali ' Nani scene was quite well handled ' she has started looking at the knots (Ulajh jatey hai ' brilliant, precise dialogue writing) and actually evaluating both sides. She could decide to follow either of her anchors, and that is definitely engaging.
Note To CVs (so what they will never see this π )
My concern on the MISSING Conversation between the leads remain. However, I trust that you have planned this prior to embarking full-fledged on the next track. I have never focused on what is to come'so I will still stick by what said on my post on Monday ' please make my heart soar. π
Promotions ' Still remains adhoc and not well planned. This is a quick fix area, it just needs an acknowledgement by the PH that this needs immense improvement and better planning.
Khushi's monologue was a step towards the right direction in addressing some of the concerns highlighted by many. Unfortunately it left a lot to be desired. The main characters thoughts need to be well expressed, especially when you are trying to portray how her mind (and in this case heart too) is working.
It needs to be built on well, so please take adequate time on it so that your audience can reconnect with her, understand her agony. Don't depend on your past depiction of her to do that.
Every daily show, needs their audience to identify with the leads at some plane, that's what hooks them because they see a little of themselves going through the ups and down in the story. And for a show, unlike a written story, monologues are often the only way out. It's the thoughts that make a person, the character. It has to be very well written, impactful ' else the opportunity cost is way too high.
Strength Based Selling ' Priya you have harped on this enough number of times and there is nothing of consequence that I can add. I can just hope the CVs understand the importance of this. Agreed, once cannot please everyone, but it is foolish not consider the feedback to understand whether what you consider your strength is actually your perceived strength by your audience. Your USP has been an unique love story and while Didi Ki Saut can be your subplot, it is not what gave you 3.5 TRPs. As long your strength is your core offering, your critiques will eventually understand you and reconnect! And there wont be any need to justify your (I still believe exceptional Story) on any social media sites.
Now, The trip down memory lane of your main love story can be a core selling point as long as you keep it crisp and tie it back to your present track. I hope you are able to do that.
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Priya ' I loved your thoughts on Kuch Rishtey ajeeb dor se bandhey huye hotey hai. Arnav Khushi's relationship is one of the best examples of the same, tied by Love and Hate. Found an awesome VM which highlights this perfectly.
Such a better medium to express this than my scrambled words. Sharing this with the crooner buddies.
Credit : Himyname22
Waiting for your update priyaπ
Arnav: The Mighty has been fallen ... By a girl π
Khushi: Confused Atma ... π
Message to Audience: Expect only madness & pagaalpan ... No usual mushy, mushy romance. This is not an everyday love story ... π
So finally we have got a monologue from Madam Khushi. So what I got from her monologue was -
1) She is utterly affected by the fact that she is perhaps spreading unhappiness in people's life now
2) She is not angry with Arnav
3) She is bothered with Arnav accusing her as guilty & then moving on
I understand the first point & so she is having trouble smiling but I don't understand what that has anything to do with accepting the Sari from Arnav. If I accept point two, I am not sure what point three refers too ' if she is not angry, she is not supposed to remember how Arnav accused her. I understand Khushi is not happy with her circumstances now because she has actually pronounced herself guilty for destroying Di's married life, making Mami unhappy & causing turbulence in her sister's married life. But why is she giving Arnav a hard time? Reminds me of Indrani Di's theory - she is running away from her own longing. The moment she said Arnav "you cannot buy my smile", all I could think of is Arnav reminding her of her Aukat all the time. This is it - Khushi is trying her ASR side when Arnav is trying his Khushi side. But has she forgotten about how Arnav needs her support too? She definitely is not like his family members that she will leave him alone assuming he is strong & has moved on! Bottom line is, Khushi is confused - torn between her nature to be the universal giver & her new found love. But why is she avoiding Arnav again? Ok, I am really confused here .. I will stop confusing you now too.
Moving on to Arnav - for the first time I have nothing to advise him. π He is on the right track. He is taking time and it will pay off. Man .. did I just love him today or what! His love, his anger, his frustration - everything was just so true to his character. NK summed him up perfectly today - he is fallen. The last 5 minutes was a reminder to him (& also to us) that his love story does not need NK's theoretical help. He has understood what he was doing wrong .. with them, only madness will work. π I agree with Priya .. we demand now his side of their Mohabbat part of the story.
For the first time today, I have preferred the Bromance over Romance. Hats Off, Barun Sobti! I officially declare you the King of Chemistry ' if you are given a chance, I think you will floor us with your chemistry with Laxmi too. No joking.
I am happy with Payal's steps to finally being in action today. Firstly, she tried to talk to Akash about their problem. Secondly, she asked Khushi to butt out - that was so needed for Khushi too. Thirdly, she has voiced that she is firstly Payal - not only Khushi's sister; so being shadowed by other's identity has finally started to bother her. I have no idea what problem Akash was referring too -' I wonder whether he knows it himself - but it has to be lack of understanding, from my Point of View. I am looking forward to a good track here - the rift between this two has a great potential to add dimension to the storyline.
We also have finally gotten into Anjali's mind today. Anjali reminded me of Rapunzel (& that reminded me of Barun's haircut - thanks to crooner ladies π) - with her hair being combed and her uttering of being "tangled". So she is now willing to descend from the top of her castle and see the world. I am happy she finally sought to know the truth. How can she believe Shyam could stoop so low - hasn't he always been the perfect husband? How can she not believe Arnav - hasn't he always been right & just? I do have issues with how she is being dealt with by her family. I hated the breakfast scene in the previous episode - why is she left alone to have her breakfast at room? If it is due to health issues, at least someone should be with her - Nani or Mamiji. Having food on your own & alone is one of the loneliest moment one can have. Now that her bubble has already burst, why does not Arnav go and tell her his part of the story, before it is too late?
Precap: Awhhh ' enough said! π³
PS1: Why NK was surprised at hearing "Laad Governor"? He already knows it! π
PS2: Who else hated Akash for saying "Khushi"? π‘ Where did the "ji" go? She is your elder borther's wife for God's sake. His genes from his mom are getting alarmingly active .. I assume.
hello oll...πππ
Priya Dii.. π€
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