SwaRon os:She claimed my soul with this rain<3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hello all..this is my first os in d3 forum n undoubtedly it had to be on SwaRon 
coz fr me "d3=SwaRon"..i had written ths os on one more favorite couple of 
mine..so wit a little changes i wrote it on my favorite SwaRon too..sensor board 
has a role to play..so m makin it clear..read at ur own risk..
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Its just three months that sharon n swayam hav tied the knot..they wer on their 
way back home from viha's 1st weddin anniversary..suddenly beech raasthe main 
unki car kharaab ho jaathi hai n raastha kafi sunsaan tha..

swayam 'arre yaar..yeh gaadi ko bhi abhi kharaab hona tha..shit!!'
sharon 'gosh swayam ab kya karenge..yeh raastha bhi kafi sunsaan hai..'

they both get out of the car...

swayam 'aur hume koi mechanic bhi yahan nahi milega..'
sharon *tensed* 'toh ab???'

swayam luks at sharon's face..holds her hand n then they sit on the bonnet..she 
lies on his shoulders n tired sharon closes her eyes..a drop of water falls on 
her face..she opens her eyes..swayam too is lyin on her head..he too wakes 
up..they both luk at the sky..it starts rainin..

swayam (his both hands up in the air lukin at the sky)'ab isse bhi abhi barasna 
tha???'
sharon (smilin)'aacha hai..i just loveee  rain..'

it starts rainin heavily..sharon is full on enjoin the rain..she is dancin like a 
peacock...swayam stands there stunned lukin at his gorgeous wife..she is wearin a 
beautiful white saree with a silver backless blouse..n he is wearin a white 
formal shirt n a black blazer..sharon luks at him..

sharon 'swayammm...aao na..'
swayam (smiles)'yaaa'

removes his blazers n dumps it inside the car..they both start dancin in the 
rain..he holds her by her waist..pulls her closer n deeply luks into her 
eyes..she is captivated..he nears her lips n places a gentle kiss on her 
lips..sharon's eyes are closed..she feels every bit of the his lips..he slowly 
leaves her n starts lukin around to find a place for their stay coz he knew tat 
they ll hav to spend their night somewer ther itself..raasthe ke dono taraf ghana 
jungle tha..kahin door par he cud see some kind of a dim light..

swayam 'sharon..listen wahan par koi ghar hai shayad'

sharon is still not out of her kiss..he luks at her..bites his lower 
lips..smiles..walks towards her n whispers in her ears..

swayam 'baby kiss kab ka khatam ho chuka hai..ab toh ankhein khol do..'

sharon is now back to her senses..her eyes wide open..swayam is very close to her 
face..she blushes..swayam still cutely smilin at his wife's blush..

swayam 'ab chale??'
sharon 'huh...ya..chalo..'

they step into the jungle n walk towards the light..they then find a tree house 
with a lanten hung..swayam starts climbin n holds sharon's hand and helps her to 
climb the tree house too..it was an old tree house..with all dry grass spread on 
the floor..

sharon 'thank god..koi toh jagah mili rehne ke liye..'

she luks around the tree house..n suddenly she cud feel her husband's arms around 
her waist..a smile curves on her lips..he turns her towards him n slowly pushes 
her to the wall..

sharon (nervous)'yeh..huh..tum kya kar rahe ho??'
swayam 'tumhe dekh raha hu..'(witha a naughty smile)

he cums still more closer to her..

sharon 'swayam ruk jao..tum kar kya rahe ho..??'(she is more nervous now)
swayam 'tumhe mehsoos kar raha hu..'

now sharon tries to escape..swayam stops her..cums more closer to her face..

swayam 'aahh..aahh..kaha bhagne ka irada hai..Mrs sharon shekhawat'

sharon blushes..swayam moves his hand on her waist..the touch of her body..feel 
of her bare waist..oohhh!!!his heart is pondering..sharon's hand moves towards 
his chest..she can feel his bare chest...she can feel his heart beat that is 
runnin faster than ever..she is tremblin..she has gt goosebumps through out her 
body..his face moves towards her neck..she's wet..the rain drop on her 
neck..ahhh!!!he is uncontrollable...he kisses her wet neck..he brushes his lips 
on her soft neck gently..his hand is movin towards her back feelin every bit of 
the path from the waist till her back..she cums more closer to him..her tender 
fingers are still lovin her man's bare chest...

swayam (whispers)'koi itna khoobsurat kaise ho saktha hai..'

he's breathin really high...sharon blushes..she shares his breadth..both r 
lost..lost in the world of love..

swayam (in a husky tone)"i love u..."
sharon (tremblin voice)"i love u too..."

he kisser her lips gently...he caresses her lips..he is enjoin every bit of her 
lips..he jst doesn't want to stop..he continues the kiss...the kiss becomes more 
harder..more passionate..(it can b more wild..i cant explain it!!)
his chest is enjoin the soft touch of her fingers...her back is lovin the tight 
passionate hold of his hand..
He pushes sharon to the wall...he luks deeply into her eyes..awww!!!his sexy 
eyes..how can she resist such a luk..she keeps lukin into his eyes..k she decides 
to break the silence...

sharon 'bas swayam ruk jao..yeh jagah sahi nahi hai..'
swayam (with a smirk)'pyaar karne ke liye jagah ki nahi..dil ki zaroorath hoti 
hai..aur pyar karnewale ki zaroorath hoti hai..' 

sharon blushes...she has nothin to say in return..he comes more n more closer to 
her..he moves his hand over her hand..right from her shoulder to the fingers..he 
then holds her hands tightly nd moves her hand upwards..presses her hand to the 
wall...holdin her wrists tightly with his one hand..nd moves his other hand over 
her waists..she is breathin really really harder..he joins her..he is jst an inch 
away from her lips..he is lukin into her eyes..then luks at her nose..then luks 
at her lips..yeah!!!he knows to tempt her well..but she is also quite invitin..he 
is sooo soo soo very close to her lips..she is scared..she closes her eyes n 
waits for a kiss..ahh..!!ahhha!!no kiss..he is playin with her..he touches his 
nose to hers..nd brushes them slowly..she smiles..k she knows now tat he is 
playin..she calms down..but yeah..not yet ready to open her eyes..she knows..his 
charm is invitin..he is really really hot..nd the wet luk is irresistable...he 
places a very mild kiss on her nose..she tries to escape..ahhha!!finally she 
succeeded..but but but..not yet..he holds her pallu..(hayyee)oops!!she holds her 
pallu..nd turns back..she luks at him...he has tat naughty smile on his face..she 
noddes her head sayin no..he nodds his head sayin yes..he slowly pulls her 
pallu..nd she ofcourse is steppin towards him..ohhh!!their eyes are locked..he is 
pullin her pallu..finally she reached him...he holds her waist...presses her 
waist very tight..she skipped a beat..he takes her in his arms..nd places her on 
the ground..now he starts feelin her from her toe..he slowly removes her 
anklet..nd places a soft kiss on her foot..then removes another anklet nd again 
kisses her foot..then slowly he heads up..he reaches her waist..her 
beautiful,fair complexion..ahh!!its really hard for him not to be aroused by such 
an elegant beauty..he slowly kisses her tummy..sharon is lost completely...she 
closes her eyes very tight...he gives her a look from ther to know abt how is she 
feelin..he knows she is lost..he then heads upwards...ohh!!!her chest in 
invitin..he places a kiss on her chest..sharon closed her eyes more tighter..she 
has decided not to open her eyes..then he is now over her face..he is breathin 
really harder..she knows tat his next step towards her is placin a very tight n 
passionate kiss on her lips..its really hard for her to take such a passionate 
moment of love..he closes his eyes to kiss her lips..he moves towards her 
lips..she turns her face aside..nd he kisses her cheeks..he realises tat she 
turned her face..his eyes are still closed..he narrows his eyebrows..

swayam (still closin his eyes)'sharon..tum jaisi dikhthi ho..waisi ho nahi..(nd 
slowly opens his eyes)
sharon (smiles n still closing her eyes)'toh phir kaisi hu??'
swayam (opens his eyes)'main soch raha tha ki tum bohot seedhi saadhi ho..lekin 
tum toh..'(aww!!his naughty smile)
sharon (opens her eyes..narrowin her eyebrows)'matlab??'(nd turns towards him)

swayam smiles..very cutely)nd slowly kisses her forehead..
she smiles..

swayam 'tum muskurathe hue bohot hi khoobsurath lagthi ho sharon'

sharon blushes..their eyes..bina kuch kahe hi bohot kuch keh rahi hai ek doosre 
se..then he kisses her cheeks..both the cheeks..she still has that broad smile on 
her face..

swayam 'u r everythin to me sharon..my world..my life

she is soo happy with his words..with his admirations towards her..
he then kisses her chin..

swayam 'mein aaj poori tarah se tumhara hu sharon..'

then he kisses her lips very tightly..he is kissin..n kissin..nd his hands holdin 
her hands..the gaps between her fingers are filled by his..

~~~END~~~

well firstly sorry fr such a long post..hope u guys like it..do hit the like 
button plss comment..hope i dont suck at my sensuous write up..
Thank u
**Neethu**

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Tanuka_TanHa thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing os neetha !!
beautifully written πŸ‘
hot and sizzling swaron romance πŸ˜³
totally loved it πŸ˜ƒ
do write more of these awesome os's ...
thanks for the pm.

p.s- you for sure do not suck at writing sensuous stuffs , keep up the good work πŸ‘πŸΌ
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Posted: 11 years ago
#3
Lovely...Keep writing more.very well writtenπŸ˜‰
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Rain sure does have some magical effect. πŸ˜† .Loved this hot sizzling romance of SwaRon. 
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Neetha i loved it...thoroughly enjoyed reading this hot n sizzling OS full of SwaRon romance. Naughty Swayam and shy Sharon hayeee. β˜ΊοΈ

Keep them coming girl...πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome OS!!! hayee it was sooo damn hawt and romantic!!
loved it sooo much πŸ˜Š
thanx for d pm and keep writing moreπŸ‘πŸΌ
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Posted: 11 years ago
#7
why does the car always get stuck on a SONSAAN road and they've no other option than spending the night nearby.  ...well,whatever it is!
i luved it!beautifully written πŸ‘
amazing os di!
it couldn't get better than this!


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ur amazinggg!!!!
Gosh this was soo sensous nd jst the fact it was written on SwaRon!! *Haayyeee*
Loved it!!!
Ab jaldi se ek aur OS plsss!! Me waiting!! :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was super sensuasly written os...i mean gosh they look so hot i could imagine them with each word...it was just hot and sizzling chemistry of Sharon that makes it so sensuous...

had fun time reading it...

thanx for PM ...and waiting for more...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ahem ahem...temperature bohot rise hogaya shyaad...😳
keep writing more neetha...