~Waltz of hearts~ FF part 3 Updated page 21

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fia21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#181

Updated my comment on Page 21 😊

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puggyy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#182

when will u update da next part?

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Pooja

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Posted: 13 years ago

#183

Awesome update...Manyata getting bold day to day ofcourse its because of her true love for Udayveer and wanted to please him love him give him all that which belongs to him only...U very well present their inner emotions while making love...
Jay and Akash ughhh they r crossing all limits...Uday should teach both them good lesson for stooping so low...
Thanks for updating and pm alissa...

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kojagoryfan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#184

😳☺️amezing!!superb!!!! u r amazing writer alissa.hot,romantic,funny,cute sab type pe tum acchi ho👍🏼⭐️.loved it.thank GOD finally uday realized.update soon.thanx 4 pm.

p.s:can u plz update ROYAL COMEDY?

Edited by a.anu - 13 years ago

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LadySosostris

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Posted: 13 years ago

#185

Finally u update.Awesome as always.That bloody bas***d Akash ughhh.Anyways cont soon buddy:)

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â™ªáƒ¦â™¥Jazzy..!â™ªáƒ¦â™¥

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Posted: 13 years ago

#186

finalllyy!!!

aowh!! half romance :P

whowee!! abhi uday apni wifey ko bachayegaa!!

urghh im hating J !! .. [though i love her]

alisa i hav a req.. plzz dont show J this negative!

huh!! akah!

do cont soon

muuuaahhh

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SaHillover101

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Posted: 13 years ago

#187

Yaayyy!! U updated, although I'm pretty late to read chapter 3 😆 I absolutely loved the update!! N OMG I just hate Akash and Jay!! Plzzz do continue soon Liza n thanks for the pm:D

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Muntaha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#188

great job 👍🏼

and plz pm me when you upload the next part

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panchaali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#189

Hey Alissa nice update sis...welcome back!!! 🤗

And I hv grown a huge power in my specks...so computer, t.v is strictly prohibited from my life now...but I read your update... though I read it after 4 attempts coz my eyes are still paining at the sight of computer light!!!

I must say very nice writing dear...awesome capture of emotions...

The lines of songs that you have used in between is just sooo perfect...

Whether a flower in my hand or a gun in my hand,

I'd give it all up for your hand in my hand

For the sun on my skin as the morning begins

I'd die in the dark just to feel your skin on my skin...

this one specially touched my heart

continue soon sis 😊

Edited by panchaali - 12 years ago