SWARON NEW! FF! ' I ALWAYS NEED YOU FOREVER'

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Nehal92

@Nehal92

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#721

Whoa!! kay thought hai ...

awesome jude..this is more exciting!!!

loved the twist..jaldi jaldi update karo

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@Parvathi12

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Posted: 13 years ago

#722

aaahhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 the HELL!!!!!!!!!! its a dream... but that was too good to be a dream.. tell u r kiddin yaar.. oh c'mon...n yeah and the precap.. what the hell is Swayam gonna do.. i cant wait... do update soon

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Himani

@OceanicRockStar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#723

luvd it...specially the part where sharon talking to herself and than confidently faces swayum before princi and rdx...waiting for next update soon.

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#724

Oh my lorddd!!!!!!!! Yeh kya thaa??? a dreaaammm??? Wahtt a twistt!!! Bak to clg!! Hell interestin nd unexpected! loved ur plot! Sharon vil make swayam fall for her <3<3<3<3<3<3<3 waitin fr d nxt one :))

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Shishir Darsh

@marauder

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#725

Ye to BAZINGA ho gaya. This FF is back to square one. 😆 . Good work. Waiitng for next update.

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Trushna

@swaronland

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Posted: 13 years ago

#726

awesome update but all this was sharon's dream 😲
continue soon & thanks 4 pm

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Arshak

@Swayamd3

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Posted: 13 years ago

#727

CHAPTER - 22

sw (Innervoice) :- "WHAT THE HELL! How dare she call me an Atom bomb! Infact.. she is even WORSE! Grrt! I've never seen a GRUDGE lyk her.. messing wid me?? Oh yea? I'll show yu who the real.. SWAYAM SHIKAWAT is.. (spreads an EVIL smile and turns to leave)
---NIGHT IN SHARON ROOM---
sh :- "God!! Please.. Don't give me another long dream About him.. I know I am Happy for the fact that im the ACS and.. I have to Work with him.. But! He' Ugh! He is already in LOVE god! With that freaking.. Weirdo ANESHA! -.- Please god! As a SERVANT of yurs.. I beg to sleep without dreaming or even Thinking about him.. Please!!" (saying this she sleeps off)
----NEXT MORNING IN THE COLLEGE---

sharon enters the College.. in the Atrium.. she sees no one.. Same as that barren land!
sh :- "Why is it that this college is always weird' anyways.. I wish I don't see him again"
(sharon's reflection pops in a bubble)
re :- "So what all I told yesterday was a WASTE?!"
sh :- "No its just that.. I don't knw.. he doesn't want me to work with him.. he wants to be with anesha! So I am no where any meaning for him.."
re :- "Yur crazy.."
sh :- "Thankyou!" (She pops out the bubble in order to make it burst)
sharon sighed and blinks
sh :- "I hope! There is no gadbad today as it is the first day of my job as the ACS! Ab kya karein?"
sum1 :- "Ready ATTACK"
Suddenly some 4-5 Guys came in with simmi and attacked her with Water all over her.. (Cold water). When the water was splashed on her.. She only got the memories of her dream.. in the shower.. banging into his bare chest.. and locking in each others eyes.. sharon wasn't concerned on the water being poured directly on her. But she was lost in her dream with swayam. And since it was cold. She remembered the moments in her dream when he was freezing to death on the ground holding her hand and trying to get sleep but he couldn't since he was Freaking cold.
suddenly the water stopped pouring on her.. sharon was wiping them off.. with a Pissed Face.. at that time simmi with the 4-5 guys walked straight towards her.. and sharon was Shell-shocked on seeing them approach her.. As she was a Bit afraid of the dazzlers.. since her love was there.. sharon started moving backwards.. and they still approached in front of her with an evil smile.. but wait they were all Hiding something at their backs
guy1 :- "Attack!!"
Every1 started attacking on sharon with Hot sauce Ketchup!!
sharon got Pissed and at the same time had to bare it!
sh :- "PLEASEEE STOP IT!!!!"
sim :- Hahaha.. we r Just getting started..! We cant stop right nw!!! honey!!"
sh :- "Please.. im beggin yu!"
si :- "Somebody already afraid..?"
sh :- "Stop it!"
anesha stepping into the scene :- "That's wat yu get for messing with my boyfriend"
sh :- "Uhm' listen anesha.. I did not mean to!"
swayam came into the picture too.. behind of sharon..
sw :- "Oh really? Den wat was that? The whole Attitude sharon..?"
sharon turning backwards to face him.. she was lost for a while but then.. swayam flicked in front of her eyes!sharon gained her senses and said
sh :- "Swayam.. listen.."
swayam cuts in.. And walks to his friends in front of sharon.. for an all together attack!
sw :- "Face it sharon.. yur still a Bloody weakling.. and cant yu see? I have my friends for any emergency! What do you have? Where is your so called KRIYA!?"
sharon got Sincerely pissed when he mentioned her name! becz she was her only support. Instead of busting out over there and make a Scene when she is already covered up with sauce and water all over her! She gently gave all of them a Cute smile and wiped her face a bit and said
sh :- "Swayam tumhare paas shayad friends tumhe bachane ke liye ya phir esa revenge dene ke liye ho sakte hain! Par lekin..i have those type of friends who will give there life fr me!"
swayam.. anesha.. simmi.. and all the other guys start laughing at her! Sharon wanted to burst in tears since swayam was also teasing her.. but sharon had to be strong.. to prove him dat she is a capable person to handle anything.. be it him for ragging her also!
sharon again smiled whereas swayam was still lafing and replied drastically
sw :- "Yu really tink..? yu really think those bloody nobody's would give life fr yu..?"
ane :- "Haha.. nice one! But anyways if they give also.. wats their value? Un logon ki standard kam.. status kam.. shakal dekne Mein' kissi Drainage ki tarah dik rahe hain!
every1 bursts laughing.. sharon was still holding her tears.. but wat hurted her most was that she had to smile and control the tears That were fuming in her eyes.. and wat hurted more then this was swayam was also lafin at her!
sh :- "Anesha.. actually.. tum sahi keh rahe ho! Meri standard kam hain.. status kam hain' kyun? Kahi logon ki jaan dene mein bhi kam hain' and fine I look lyk a Drainage! And wat are yuall den?
tum sab keh rahe ho ki tum sab dazzlers ho! But tum sabki Asli chehra meine abhi hi dekha hoon! Dat to prove someone down You all would go to any extent! Infact.. as If yuall can even do what I can or wat my friends can? Kyun swayam? (stepping closer to swayam.. every1 moves back.. Just then kriya came and saw her in ketchup and water!)
kr :- "sharon..? wat in the world happen?"
sh :- "Nuthin kriya.."
anesha :- "Aa gayi iski chamchi's !"
kr :- "swayam ki chamchi hone se bhi BETTER hain.." (sharon and kriya slapped hi-5's and were laughing.. Swayam and gang were grinning..)
sw :- "Anesha.. ye log na.. they are all Cheap drastic.. Local ppl! Agar hum iske saath aur bhi khade rahenge na! den.. we will only be more insulted toh lets just go.."
kr :- "yu r telling us the stuffs that yuall do? Yu ppl are only cheap.. drastic.. and local.. as it proved what uall did with sharon..
anesha tries to Push herslf forward to give kriya a Whack! Sharon tries to stop kriya.. from standing in front of her.. but Kriya pushed her back to stand straight! But before anesha was bout to do it.. swayam pulled her back.. and dey left giving them a Look!
kr :- "Ja ja apni so called stupid boyfriend ke saath.. The so called Swayam..!!"
swayam had to handle and walk forward but kriya followed them to give them MORE revenge!! Cz how dare dey mess wid her bestie..
kr :- "Yuk! Anesha a FRIENDLY tip! Actually.. A loyal tip!
tumhare kapdein Disgusting hain..
tumhare baal Oh god!! Chudail se bhi zyaada buri hain! Correct it! Before I puke!
and tumhare.. Standard kam hain.. Tumhare shakal bilkul ek dead rat ki tarah dikte hain! And pls' don't compare yurslf wid sharon.. cz Sharon is better den yu.. be it on anything..!
dance.. Common sense.. Ya phir.. kuch bhi!
and btw.. tumhare Stupid boyfriend doesn't suit u also! And He himslf Suck too.. !
sw :- "Dats it.." (turning back to face kriya)
kr :- "Dar gayi?"
sw :- "Stop it and mind yur business"
sh :- "Why? Yuall are the ones who started it!!! And we will end it on HOWEVER we want it to!"
sw :- "Enough'"
sh :- "Dare to mess wid me and my best friend ever again.."
sw :- "Our mistake!"
sh :- "Be it!"
sw :- "Fine.."
kriya and sharon turns to walk off.. and so does swayam and his gang..
kr :- "Sharon.. kya hua..? wat the hell just happened? And why are u covered in all sauce and water?"
sh :- "Kriya.. I'll tell yu all later but right now! I gotta go and.. Clean up!"
kr :- "Fine lets go to the girls washroom.."
sh :- "Yea.."
----IN THE GIRLS WASHROOM----
sh :- "God! Oh no! I don't have anything to wear!!"
kr :- "Chill.. mein hoon na!" (Kriya gives her a pair of her own dress..)
sh :- "Thanks kriya.."
kr :- "Hey! Are yu crazy.. ye sab choti choti baatein ke liye mujhe thanku ke rahi ho?"
sh :- "Dress ke liye nahi' But.. mujhe vahan se bachane ke liye!"
kr :- "Always for yu.."
sharon and kriya hugged and after sometime broke the hug.. and after refreshing and all.. they decided to go together to the rehearsal hall..
after rehearsals every1 left.. exept fr sharon.. sharon got a text msg saying
Msg :- "Sharon.. I need to discuss some college matters. Meet me' in the classroom.. no one is there.. as of mr. sharma told der aint gona be classes today! Becz of sum meeting.. so meet me der at 4"
sharon had taken a Glimpse at the clock and she was late.. as usual.. it was 4.15!!! sharon ran to the girls washroom.. to be Perfect!
reflect :- "Hmm' so planning to be perfect in front of swayam and all huh?"
sh :- "Unn.. woh'. Nahin I.. im just! Im just planning to look my best! Since' im sharon!!"
sharon runs off from there and reaches to the class at 4.25!! swayam was busily sitting on his seat and concentrating on A file regarding the college Fests till nw! sharon hid herslf behind the door to admire him.. *pehla nasha* sharon again started making her hair proper.. and made her dress proper and said to herslf
sh (Innervoice) :- "Sharon..*sighs* listen.. be ur best. Think smart.. and impress him.. (Just then she enters with a Smile)
sw :- "Yur late"
sh :- "im sorrry' I had rehearsals'"
sw :- "watever.. lets just get this over.. (Sharon turns sad)
sh :- "Yea.."
sw :- "Sharon.. bahoot saare events aane wale hain so we better get going fastr! And btw.. stay a bit away from me and work! I don't really work muj with weaklings!"
(Sharon still deprived and sighs and says)
sh :- "Anything as yu say swayam.."
sw :- "Good! Now there is another event coming in 14 days some 'step on it' competition based on dance! So all schools in mumbai are participating in it! Our college was specially requested as a welcome guest to just perform as a Show start! So.. both our teams have to combine and do a dance! (facepalms)
sh :- "Ok! So why do u feel irritated?"
sw :- "That's becz I have to work wid TEAM WEAKLINGS!
sh :- "ok I have a solution for dis!"
sw :- "What?"
sh :-"Why don't only team DAZZLERS perform this event and we don't!
sw :- "Haha easy fr yu 2 say! But VP has strictly commanded for both of our teams to perform together!
sh :- "Then im sorry swayam"
sw :- "Grrt!"
sh :- "I gess we'd better start ou rehearsals!"
sw :- "Yea.. right nw! I'll msg my team and yu msg yur team to meet up in the rehearsal hall! K?"
sh:- "Fine!"

PROMO
anesha holds swayam's hand infront of sharon!

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Alright guys!
dat was LONG!
fine.. i get it.. iget it! im slow!!
that was like a PUNCH on my face! i'll try to be more Punctual..
but guys do gime Ur long and valuable Comments! it really means alot to me!!!!!!!!
it motivates me to Get some Ideas On SwaRon 😳
DEMAND = 120 ! 😃
happy spamming!! ⭐️

i still need ur Comments.. sorry for the twists and turns on SwaRon.. but had to since it is based on my concept!
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Edited by Swayamd3 - 13 years ago

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Snowey

@Snowey

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#728

Nice update Arshak 👏

Loved how you started the update and Sharon's request to god for no Swayam dreams was funny :)

But how can Swayam be so mean to anyone..and more so @ Sharon :( Din't like that a bit..i hope he realizes his mistake very soon..on the other hand..i found Sharon so cute..still trying to be at her best when she had to meet Swayam for the meeting. and hate this Anesha gal 😡

And hey we are on page 117 and your demand is 110 ? 😕

Let us know what your demand is and we'll fulfill it for the next demand :)