NEW FF"mangi thi ek dua jo kubul ho gyi"LAST UPDT - Page 3

Originally posted by: sss283

rocking imagination dear...
wow...the description was just fab !!

Originally posted by: PunyaS

Oye yaar Veena!

OS was brilliant! Start achchha.. dialogues achhche.. Ram-Priya ki excitement.. too good! Lovely! 👏

But ye kya? End mein aa ke sari khumaaro utaar di yaar! Very bad! Aisa kyun kiya? Humein sapne mein hi rehne deti na.. 💔

Originally posted by: muskan087

haan kadumbari wala na..jab read karna start kiya tha to laga chalo ekta ke raaj mein nahi to veena di ke raaj mein un dono ko is situation mein saath saath dekhe par😕..koi baat nahi jab raya ko milayoge to aisa vaisa karke is scene ko us scene mein daal dena😃😉

Originally posted by: neelanjanasingh

superb !! 👏

Lovely, perfect scene for RaYa. Golu ke Goluhi rahega Ram!😉 Aur please last main woh Kadambari aur dream part edit kar do...& continue it like a fanfic.Ektamataney toh humarey sapnoki vaat lagga di..tum toh aisa mat karo.😡😳

Superb update...Loved it...🤗

thanks for an extremely well written OS.. loved it!!

😃So wonderful👏, I could see every scene  and hear every word and feel every emotion👏That natural you are.

its awesome veena di... apne apni immagination mein ekta ko kyu gused diya...

it was so cute golu is really a big golu bholu... so innocent...

wished it didnt ended up to be a dream... i dint like that... i wanted it to be real...

wonderful os 🤗