NEW FF"mangi thi ek dua jo kubul ho gyi"LAST UPDT

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Posted: 2012-07-07T07:07:24Z
ok ekta ne to priya ki pregnancy ki puri watt laga diCry...khair inme ek chhez bht achhi hui ki sakshi ko ek aur bar mauka mil gya apna telant proove krne kaSmile...its defently not needed bcz she always prooved it she is jst amazing mindblowingTongue...what a performance in last episodeClapClap...ufff...khair mera to ye hamesha ka kaam h jb tk sakshi ki tareef na kr lu khana hazam nhi hotaWink...anyways to mujhe to boss is track me raamEmbarrassed ki excitment,uske expressions,uski skills dekhne ka jbrdst mn tha ...ufff...i know kya solid scene bn sakta tha pr kta ne to aisi band bjayi ki kya se kya ho gya wala scene ho gyaAngry...khair muje to ram ki excitment dekhni hi dekhni h to m chali is track pe imagination krne...

Here i go with my NEW OS with the name...

"mangi thi ek dua jo kubul ho gyi"

Hope u all like it...

Scene started with KM...
Its around 6 oclock at evning...
Priya abhi tk ghr nhi aayi hoti h sabhi uska wait kr rhe hote h..yha tk ki aaj ram bhi jaldi aa gya hota h...pta nhi usse office me rha hi nhi ja rha tha bar bar priya ka khyal aa rha tha...wo kahin bhi cnsntrate krne me khud ko unable pa rha tha to ghr hi chala ata h..ki km se km priya k pas rhega to sahi rahega bt ghr bhi aake koi fayeda hua nhi priya to thi nhi...ab ram ko aur bechaini ho rhi thi..phone laga rha tha to not reachable bta rha tha...ab to 7 bajne ko aaye ab ram sochta h ki bahar hi jake dekhe jaise hi jane k liye sochta h priya samne se aa jati h...

Ram...priya tum kahan thi ??? M kab se tumhara wait kr rha hu??? Kahan itna time lag gya???...tum theek to ho na

Priya bs ram ko dekhti h aur kamre me chali jati h...aur kamre m jate hi bag ek trf phenk kr bed pe gir jati h...
Ram use dkhta h aur bhag k aata h aur priya ko hila k bolne lagta h...

Ram...priya...priya...kya hua tumhe tum theek to ho ,hosh me aao priya...are koi dr ko bulao..

Tabhi priya ankhe kholti h aur kehti h...

Priya...raaam...kya chilla rhe h m behosh nhi hui hu bs ankhe band krk leti hu aap bhi na

Ram...o teri meri to halat khrab ho gyi thi ek to waise hi subah se ajeeb ajeeb khyal aarhe the upr se tumne aise kiya to m drr gya...

Priya...aww oh ram i am so sorry...m bs wo thoda thak gyi thi pta nhi q aajkl bht thakan ho ja rhi h...
Priya ram ke sene se lag jati h

Ram...are to apna khyal rakha karo na kyun itna stress leti ho...aj se sb kam band...bs aram...ab tumhe apna khyal rkhna hoga...meri to bht care krti ho aise mt kariye waise mt kariye healthy food khaiye to ye wo pta nhi kya kya...aur...khud..

Prya muskurane lagti h aur kehti h...hahaha...ap to aise mujhe samjha rhe h jaise m ma bnnewali hu...

Ram...priya mazak mt karo i am vry serius bht hua u should hv to proper rest..ok 

Priya ...ok baba...ab aur kitna dantenge ho gya na...

Ram...are dant nhi rha hu yaar samjha rha hu...

Phir dono ekdusre kb baho me simat jate h..agle din as usual sab kuchh chal rha hota h..ram office chala jata h...priya kamre me rehti h kuchh kuchh idhr udhr kr rhi hoti h...chain se to usse rha nhi jata h..to wo rishabh ko bulati h aur kehti h ki use kuchh marketing kerni h to wo use market le jaye...phir dono market jate h...actully aaj priya ka ram k liye shopping krne ka mn tha...ram k liye wo kafi sari shopping krti h...aur jaise hi bags utha kr bahar aati h use chakkr aa jata h aur gir jati h rishabh bhag k aata h aur use hospital le jata h ...jb use hosh aata h to wo khud ko hospital me pati h...dr aata h

Doc...hello..kaisi h aap

Priya...gud..kya hua h mujhe...anything serious...

Doc...are nhi nhi balki aap k liye to khush khabri h aap ma banne wali h

Priya k to khushi k mare pair bi jameen pe nhi pad rhe hote h...

Priya..doc i hv request ..please aap ye kisi ko bhi nhi btaiyega actully i want to tell

Doc...yes yes i cn understand...aap apni khushi khud hi batiyega lekin ha apna khyal bhi bht rakbiyega...once again congratulations...

Priya...thank u doc

Priya bahar aati h to rishabh uske pas ata h..

Rishabh...bhabhi kya ho gya tha aapko anything serious

Priya...nhi kuchh nhi bs aise hi...tune apne bhai ko to nhi btaya na...

Rishabh abhi to nhi btaya tha..mne socha pehle dekh lu kya hua h

Priya...ha achha kiya

Rishabh..mtlb

Priya..are wo bekar me pareshan ho jate na upr se mujhe dant bhi padti ki m apna khyal nhi rkhti...

Rishabh...ha wo to padni hi chahiye aap apna bilkul khyal nhi rkhti h bs dusre k bare me sochti rhti h...

Priya..ha theek baba ab tu mt shuru hoja chhota h chhote jaisa rh ...chal jaldi se mujhe ghr jana h mr.kapoor k aane se pehle...

Rishabh...ok jo hukum...

Dono ghr aate h priya bags ko bed pe rakh deti h aur khushi se jhumne lagti h..pr phir use khyal ata h ki ram ko kaise ye khushkhabri degi taki unke chehre ki hr khushi ko wo dekh sake aur mehsus kr sake ..khair wo bht besabri se ram ka intezar krti rhti h to aaj ram bht late se aata h aur bilkul thaka hua...

Ram...priya...

Priya...ram aap aa gye m kabse apka wait kr rhi thi...itni der se kyun aaye

Ram...are yaar aaj bht thak gya m kuchh bhi krne ka mn nhi ho rha h mera agr kuch khane ko ho to de do wrna m so jaunga..

Priya...are bht jyada kam tha kya????...achha aap aisa kariye change kr lijiye m abhi khana lagwati hu...

Priya khana lane chali jati h aur ram fresh hone...phir dono khane baithte h...

Priya...kya hua ram???? Ap bht stressed lag rhe h

Ram..ha wo sid ne jo itni sari gadbad macha rkhi thi...sara din aaj humlogo ka usko sahi karbe me barbad ho gya...

Priya...achha chhodiye..mujhe apse kuchh kehna h

Ram...ha bolo

Priya...ram wo actully...ram kya h ki...ram m ye khna chahti hu...

Ram...are bolo to kya kehna h..tabse mera nam hi liye ja rhi ho...

Priya...kaise kahu samajh hi nhi aa rha h

Ram...kuchh problm h kya???..phir se koi nyi musibat

Priya...are nhi nhi koi musibt nhi h..achha bad me btati hu

Phir dinner k bad dono sone jate h to ram bed pe pada hua saman dekhta h to puchhta h

Ram..priya ye sb kya h????

Priya..ye sb apke liye h aaj mera apke liye shopping krne ka mn tha to le aayi m ye sb...aap dekhiye na

Ram saman nikalne lagta h sb ajeeb ajeeb type k saman rhte h use kuchh samjh nhi aa rha hota h

Ram...are priya ye sb kya h...ye kapde????tumhe lagta h ye mujhe fit ayenge???aur ye kya h???...imli...iska m kya karunga????..aur ye teddy bear???...are m teddy bear se khalunga kya????...kya yar tum bhi na baap bnne wali umr me tum mere liye ye bachho wle saman layi ho...hadh h

Priya...hadh m nhi hu aap h...kuchh samajhte to h nhi...nhi pasand h to chhodiye m rkh deti hu...

Ram...are kya ho gya priya???...yar ek to tum aise ajeeb se gift layi ho upr se bhadk rhi ho..achha theek h m tumhare liye rakh leta hu...ab mujhe bht neend aa rhi h..m sone ja rha hu...

Aur ram bister pe padte hi kharrate lena shuru kr deta h aur priya use dkh k muskurati rhti h aur sochti h...hey bhagwan kab bade honge ram...khud to ye abhi tk bachhe h kaise bachho jaise so rhe h..inko baap kaise bna diya aapne...phir priya aake ram ko pakad k so jati h...

Next day at evning...

Ram office se ata h to dekhta h ki puri sharma family shergil family aur uski khud ki family sb aaj kapoor mension me jame hue h..pr priya kahin nhi h..wo ghbra jata h..

Ram..kya hua???...sb log aaj yha priya kahan h???..kuchh hua to nhi h????..

Shipra...pta nhi priya ne hi hame yha bulaya h aur ab khud kamre se bahar hi nhi aa rhi h...keh rhi h jb mr.kapoor ayenge tb aaungi...dekhiye na aap kya bat h???

Ram..ok ok m dekhta hu...

Ram kamre me jata h priya bed pe baithi rhti h...

Ram...priya tum theek to ho

Priya...ha m bilkul theek hu

Ram...to phir sabko yha kyun bulaya h aur bulaya h to milne kyun nhi gyi???

Priya ... Aise hi apka wait kr rhi thi..

Ram...ha to ab to main aa gya ab to chalo

Priya...nhi pehle aap meri bat suniye...apko pta h m kl wo sb gift kyun le aayi...

Ram...ha ...tumne hi to kaha ki mere liye tha...

Priya...ha tha apke liye pr khelne khane ke liye nhi tha..kuchh guess krne k liye tha...

Ram...kya???

Priya...ufff ...ram aap to kuchh nhi samjhte

Ram...are kya tum kl se kuch nhi samjhte kuchh nhi samjhte kr rhi ho...

Priya...achha dekhiye..wo jo imli h na wo m apne liye layi thi qki aajkl mera khatta khane ka mn hota h

Ram...achha...

Priya...kya achha..

Ram..ha khatta khane ka mn hota h to imli le aayi...

Priya..aur wo chhote kapde aur teddy bear..koi ane wala h uske liye layi hu..

Ram..are to phir isme mere liye kya h jb sab dusro k liye hi h...

Priya..ufff...jo ane wala h wo to ap hi k liye h na

Ram...ab kya aane wala h????...phir se kuchh h kya???...dekho yar ab m koi ritual nhi manane wala hu...hr din kuchh na kuchh

Priya ram k muh pe hath rakh deti h aur gussa k bolti h

Priya...aaahhh ram chup ho jaiye...bhagwan m do do bachhe kaise sambhalungi...

Ram uska hath hata k bolta h...do do bachhe ..neha k bachhe phir se hamare ghr rhne aa rhe h kya???

Priya apne aap ko shant krti h aur kehti h...nhiii...ek aap aur ek aapka bachha

Ram..mera bachha???..mera bachha kahan se aa gya ???...kab aaya??? M to kisi bachhe ko nhi janta...

Priya ram ko ghurne lagti h...tab jake ramji ke deemag ki batti jalti h aur wo khada ho jata h...

Ram...kahin tum ye to nhi kehna chahti ho ki m baap banne wla hu...??

Priya..exactly ram m yhi kehna chahti hu...i am pregnent ram...i am pregnent with ur baby...aur yd bat mne abhi tk kisi ko nhi btayi qki m ye bat sabse pehle apko btana chahti thi...

Ram...o my god ...i ...i jst dnt believ priya...ye...ye kaise ho gya...kab ho gya..i cnt ...explain hw i feel ...ufff..kya karu m...m kya le aau tumhare liye...kya chahiye bolo tum mujhe...m kuchh bhi karunga...bolo na priya...m kya karu ..mujhe to kuchh samajh hi nhi aa rha h...

Priya...ram...shant ho jaiye...theek h m janti hu ki aap bht excited h qki m ye janti hu ki aap kitna chahte the..hw u badly want this baby...pr iska ye mtlb nhi h ki aap kuchh bhi bole kaise hua ka kya mtlb h???..heyn...

Phir dono hasne lagte h aur ek dusre ko gale laga lete h

Ram...sachhi priya aaj tumne mujhe meri jindgi ki sabse badi khushi di h...aaj to mera pyar aur bhi jyada badh gya tumhare liye...bolo na kya karu m tumhare liye...jo tum kaho m wo karunga...

Priya...kuchh nhi bs aise hi mujhe pyar krte rhiye aur jindgi bhr mere sath rahiye...baki sabkuchh to mujhe mil gya...hmari dua kubul ho gyi aur mujhe apki khushi dekhne ko mil gyi jiske liye m kuchh bhi kr sakti hu

Ram...sach priya...m kaise sambhalu itni khusi mera mn kr rha h ki m chilla chilla k sari duniya ko bta du ki m baat bnne wala hu

Priya...ufff ...ram jaise aap nhi btayenge to duniya ko pta hi nhi chalega ki log baap bhi bnte h...

Ram..hahaha...are m ek gana gau kya???

Priya..nhiii..koi jarurat nhi h...m to sun lungi pr apka baby drr jayega...

Ram..oye...jayega nhi jayegi

Priya...kyun jayega bhi to ho sakta h

Ram...nhi jayegi hi hoga...

Priya..apko kaise pta

Ram...are wish meri h to mere hisab ki hogi na

Priya...lekin wish puri to m kr rhi hu to mere hisab ki hogi na

Ram...nhi mujhe choti priya hi chahiye...

Priya...nhi mujhe chhota golu chahiye..

Ram...priyaaa...

Priya...goluuu

Ram...priya

Priya...golu

Ram...priya...

Priya...ok ok time out...ab ye to 9 mahine bad hi pta chalega ki kya hoga

Ram...kya??? 9 mahine baad????

Priya...ha to

Ram...are m itna intezar nhi kr sakta mujhe jaldi se chahiye

Priya...ram aapke chahne ya nhi chahne se kuchh nhi ho sakta...yha the ram kapoor ki taqat nhi chalegi..

Ram..vry bad..are yar m 9 mahine tk karunga kya????

Priya...intezar

Ram...wo m nhi kr sakta

Priya...achha theek h to aap 9 mahine tk...coching classes join kr lijiyega...singing dancing,bachhe sambhalne aur kya kya krna hota h in sabke liye taki jb hmara baby aaye to aap ek perfect papa ki trh jb wo kahe to ga sake jb wo kahe to nach sake jaise wo kahe waise kr sake...

Ram...achha sb m hi karunga to tumlog kya kroge...

Priya...karenge na m aur apki baby dono mil k uske golu papa ko bht shara pyar karenge...

Dono hasne lagte h tabhi shipra aa jati h aur kehti h..

Shipra...excuse me ..mr.kapoor...thodi der k liye apni biwi ko chhodenge hum sabhi line me h...aise badhaiya chalengi to hmara no aane me to bachha bhi aa jayega...

Ufff shipra bhi na...khair dono sharma jate h aur ek dusre ko chhod dete h...phir sb dono ko cngrates krte h...pura ghr khushiyo se bhara hota h

lo ab khush

to be cntinue

ufff...ekta ne aisa kyun kiya yaar..nalayak...Angry
Edited by veena23 - 2012-07-23T05:45:15Z
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Posted: 2012-07-07T07:22:03Z
this is awesome post juat loved it, u r too kaise ho gya...kab ho gya..i cnt aap Ram ki question ki jawab nahi diay im waiting 4 ur answer

Edited by jakther - 2012-07-07T08:02:36Z
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Posted: 2012-07-07T08:03:12Z
the whole part was superbly described
thanks 4 this.why u mentioned the last paragraph.
it bring bank to balh.it spoiled all the happiness like ekta did.
i wish this could have happened in balh.
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Posted: 2012-07-07T08:31:20Z
Great imagination...well written..bt ye end me kya jhatka de diya.
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Posted: 2012-07-07T08:51:44Z
Originally posted by jakther


this is awesome post juat loved it, u r too kaise ho gya...kab ho gya..i cnt aap Ram ki question ki jawab nahi diay im waiting 4 ur answer



hahaha...are m kya karooo mujhe priya ne jawab nhi diya.....ROFL
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Posted: 2012-07-07T08:54:52Z
Originally posted by 123fiza1


the whole part was superbly described
thanks 4 this.why u mentioned the last paragraph.
it bring bank to balh.it spoiled all the happiness like ekta did.
i wish this could have happened in balh.


awww...thank u sooo much...& sorry fr the last part...bt kya kare hame to haqeeqat me yhi mila naHug
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Posted: 2012-07-07T08:57:30Z
Originally posted by Sonakshi-grp


Great imagination...well written..bt ye end me kya jhatka de diya.


ye jhatka isliye diya taki agr glti se ye ekta padhe to uske bhi deemag ki batti jale aur imagination m hi shi ek scene to de de wo hame...stupid...anyways...thank u sooo muchHug
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Posted: 2012-07-07T09:06:57Z
wow di again superb work...kaah aisa ho jata par kadumbari nahi chahiye khair really love ur os...do continue 
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