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Posted: 11 years ago

omg three great authors on a joint venture
luks like bahut zabardast khicre milne wali hai
loved the prologue...
i was so confused
in fact i was going to ask u tat whether by mistake u have written viren for virat
bt then i realised tat its DHOKHA part
and so suspense and mystery is there
it was an ausmn beginning
loved each and every description
luking forward to find muski and virat tooo

please cont soon and please pm me wen u update

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: nishi12345
omg three great authors on a joint venture
luks like bahut zabardast khicre milne wali hai
loved the prologue...
i was so confused
in fact i was going to ask u tat whether by mistake u have written viren for virat
bt then i realised tat its DHOKHA part
and so suspense and mystery is there
it was an ausmn beginning
loved each and every description
luking forward to find muski and virat tooo

please cont soon and please pm me wen u update

hey nishi... btw sunke achcha laga that you know all three of us.

glad you loved the prologue.

Annie has a done a great job.

OH yes, we'll soon change this viren and virat thing. IT's not VirMan FF actually, It's Viren-Maanvi-Virat FF. I dont think you can guess the dhokha part so soon.

We'll continue soon...

Regarding PMs i think Annie will be doing them since she is the TM.

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: -Pankhuri-
OMG i m still in aftereffects oh what i read...this concept is so freaking awsome...though this part was too initial to understand but still i m loving it already...plz plz plz update soon and if possible then pm me if not then also ok...i ll keep stalking this story

thanks pankhuri for this encouraging comment.

yeah, the prologue is too initial to guess, it has instead bought too many questions in mind.

It's great that someone's ready to stalk. Honoured.

But dont worry we wont trouble you. PMs will be sent for updates.

Thanks again.

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: shona_virman
Ouch!! Viren-Manvi together?? Couple?? Der must be a big big DHOKA!! So i guess Muskaan is not Manvi's biological daughter, or is she?? As in how can dey hav Muskaan if dey wer not in luv... *shaking my head* too much thrill to cum dis way... Dude wat a gr8 concept... Looking fwd to da nxt part... Thanx 4 da pm:)

hi sweets

just to clear n e misunderstanding ,muskaan is viren and manvi's biologica daughter , she use stay in the guest room which now has become muskaan's bedroom

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: IndigoBlues
wow, now this is radical.😆 wondering how the LSD is taking place..does virat have anything to do with maanvi's past?😉 anyway pretty interesting start, wondering where you're gonna take this.😆

LSD is going to take place in the most dramatic.. ok in your words radical way.

Virat has got everything to do Maanvi's past, present and future.

Thanks for this comment.. it means a lot.

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: ruchi245
Hey wht a story.. prologue is mysterious.. couple's r excanged...hahaha.. but i wud lov 2 find out whts with all this ?? manvi marries viren n lives in their daughters room tht can only mean tht muskan is virika's daughter, so wht abt virman?? so many ques. hope 2 find the answers soon.. do pm me n m buddyng u..

hey ruchi.. thanks.

couples are not exchanged. Only viren-maanvi are married.

regarding your doubt, muskaan's room was a guest room before she was born.

so when viren-manvi were not in love maanvi stayed in that room.

And after they fell in love, she moved to viren's room. And when muskaan is born that guest room is given to muskaan. hope that clears the doubt.

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: shaimah
interesting concept
continue soon and do pm me!!

hi dear thi concept is very bold it show how realtionships r these days n how marriages r not as strong as they use to be 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

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ok guys im gonna update the first chapter now it will be on pg 5 do comment

Edited by lalmirch28 - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Huge applause to both my buddies and to you to Annie!
That was a brilliant start to what I believe would make an incredible story.
Fire ahead guys!

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Ok so Muskaan is viren Manvi's daughter... I'm confused now... So i wont trouble my brains much n w8ing for chap 1... I guess its cmng soon as da place is already res... Dis is gona be super thrilling... I'm excited..

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