SS-"Tanhayee-An Emptiness"update pg-51&52 (9 june) - Page 5

how priya perents so selfish yaar😔

u brought tears to my eyes... 😭

are ye kya :O ;( pehle hi part me priya ko rula diya...jaldi Ram ko lao to take her all pain away. anyways awesome update...really loved the way you have written it.plz ccontinue soon.

i was expecting another update today ... plz update a long part asap... eagerly waiting for it... Edited by evanbaxter7058 - 11 years ago

Hi Frnds,

Very Very Nice written part..👏

Originally posted by: fan_forever

Hi Frnds,

 

Thanks a lot for such lovely comments...

 

Sorry update is not ready... was damn busy in office.. just reached home,  my boss is really pushing me a lot around 12 hrs of work and that too in the end only one dialogue... "Good but can u try to add a bit more"

 

Hell yaar...

 

anyways frnds, i'll try to update 2mrw bu tno promises...

 

and i saw many of ur complaining about the length of 1st part... but really that part was around 3 page in word only difference was that in doc it was with 1.5 gapping...

 

so that might be the issue... well i'll try to give u all a long update...

 

will comment individually later... bye

 

amazing .thanks 4 new ss.i am feeling sorry for priya.
what a worse family she has.keep it up.

Originally posted by: kaparikh1

That was soo emotional...😭It was heart touching...⭐️

Eager to know Rams part and how they both meet...😊

Plzzz update soon... And thanks for the PM...🤗

Originally posted by: yogeshj

Very nicely written..like the fact that you elaborate the story very nicely...am little more curious about priya's character after reading this...hope you will update it soon