OS: Love Ridden

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Applebee

@Applebee

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Onlooker

@Onlooker

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

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I made a complete fool of myself...I reserved the first spot and forgot to edit it, but posted another comment..!!..😛😆.

Oh God.😲...I hate myself...

You can read my comment somewhere down...😡.

Anyways, an awesome OS.

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Ankita

@_SenbonZakura_

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

is it possible to go to heaven reading such a mesmerizing piece of work?? I think so...

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Riima_Azraa

@Riima_Azraa

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

I love your use of words n writing style - so immaculate 👏 👏

never stop writing!

thnx for the PM

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Onlooker

@Onlooker

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

Am glad to read an Awesome OS. Am a big fan of yours, especially your writing style.

Your writing style is so sensuous. Arnav's senses attuned to Kushi was portrayed very well. Arnav is so immersed in kushi and her thoughts!! and can't keep his hands off her while she is around him..I have this warm feeling enveloping me thinking about their love.

Loved the checks and balances thoughts of Arnav. An incorrigible businessman!! Yes..to gain something like kushi, he should lose something precious like anjali. This shows how much kushi means to him.

So here anjali decided to be with Shyam and keep up the pretense and ignore the stark reality she is facing..When she opens her eyes, it will be too late..

PS: Are you updating 'Shades of Grey' anytime soon?..Am dying to read the next update..

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Shweta1691

@Shweta1691

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

Ur writings always brings a smile on my face

😃😃😃

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Vee

@reflorated

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

the song is SO one of my favourites. Its amazing, how our tastes are so similar when it comes to music. 🤗Is it kind of like a sequel to flowers in december?? cause it would be awesome if it were. :D not that it isn't awesome as it is. IT IS. pinky promise. i loved it. ❤️

i never want you to stop writing. if you stopped writing, i'd be what the world calls 🤬.

loads of love,

ps- SHADES OF GRAY!!!! should i elaborate. or can you read my mind

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Shobhana

@-Shobhu21-

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

🤣

Particle Physics ?? And I was laughing !! I know, Im not supposed to but I hate physics and you just made it sound like heaven 😆

And as for the OS , I loved it Bingala !!
Arnav... I hope we get an Arnav like this after he's out from the kidnapper's place !!
And the way he describes his love for Khushi !! It was just amazing !! And I love him and I love you and I love them for giving me this OS !!

Love you all and this OS🤗

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citi

@citi

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Posted: 13 years ago

'She' had better not stop writing or where else would we get our necessary dose of sensuous passion, intense angst and emotion. You write beautifully, period. Or should one say your OS's are like diamonds of yore carrying within them a gentler era of mystique and mystery and love as it used to and should be. 😊