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kernal

@kernal

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

I love how you use actual dialogues and include them in your writing! I can completely see what you have written actually happening in IPKKND and I really really wish it does! I must say you have a gift my friend! Your writing is full of passion, angst, love etc, it just speaks volumes to the reader!

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Smita

@..Smita..

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Beautiful and emotional,u had me in tears.

I loved the quote at the end!

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craziefan

@craziefan

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

loved it!! can u continue!??

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peppygeek

@peppygeek

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

I'll try and get back when I can stop crying and choking.

You surprised with your writing skills today. It was so unlike the usual Risha type OS but it still had your distinct flavour.

I watched the dargah scene before writing the comment and cried all over again.

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Risha, I love that song and the way it was picturised in the show!

a very moving os... I've always loved the language and expressions you use to ring your story to life... a really beautiful analogy that reminds one if a naughty child who might disrupt the smooth course of our lives but whom we love nevertheless, and that is khushi for arnav: And then she had entered-like those loopy scribbles you often make on the back page of your notebooks in the course of a boring lecture.She had messed up his neat black file using hundreds of brightly coloured sketch pens until each page had the remains of a blurry mess.

some of the most beautiful yet poignant lines today: Don't punish her for my wrongdoings, she believes in you. Don't shatter the belief she has in you like you broke mine fifteen years ago. Maybe I won't be able to recognise your existence ever but she does. He silently prayed-prayed for the rarest times in his life for her.

love this strong side to both anjali and khushi and how they plan to together live life to the fullest, no longer dependent on their love for the men who hurt them the most! though a sad ending, it was the most appropriate in the circumstances...

I've been watching those old scenes and feel it difficult to forgive arnav his earlier cruelties toward khushi, whatever his present or future suffering!

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akansha

@ritzappy

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

u r really amazing risha 👏

the last line was a masterpiece my girl 😊

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Flame.

@Flame.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

This is one of my all time favorite songs. Whilst listening i don't realize when I close my eyes and start clapping. Its beautiful and your OS was as beautiful as the song Arziyaan :) xxx