YuvReen SS -Unpredictable (part 6 pg#20)

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hello SGians..umm..this is my first attempt to write an OS...YuvReen are the first one that made me write..Soo..give it a try...and see if it's a good one..and I am sorry about my hindi as it's not my language ..but I tried my best to incorporate it in dialogues..and plz excuse me if there are any grammar or spelling mistakes...😳


YuvReen SS - Unpredictable - part 1


Suvreen yawns and closes her eyes as she feels Mr. Sleep was attacking her.  However, how could she forget that someone on this earth still existed that wouldn't like the word "peace" around her. *Ting*...*Ting* She snapped out from her half sleep, sat up properly and rubbed her eyes as she tried to see the laptop screen clearly.

"Yuvraj?!?! At this time??"

She was surprised to see the Yuvraj texting her on facebook at 1 a.m. She started to read what he said.

Yuvraj: Topper! You are online at 1 in the morning? For whom? Huh? ;)

Suvreen: For a janwar like you. I thought ki janwar aake mujhe lorry suna dega =P

Yuvraj: Jo bhi ho..You were waiting for me na?? Ohho..now you are also one of those girls in DPSC who are dying for me?? I mean waiting for me =P

Suvreen: Mr. Cheetah..I wasn't waiting for you.It was just a simple joke !

Yuvraj: HA HA HA! Joke of the day ! =P

Suvreen: Nehi toh..maine toh Joke of the week mara =P

Acha..let's come to the point. Itni raat ko text kyun kiya??

Yuvraj: Aise bol rahi hai jaise tujhe kuch nehi pata =P kal ke barein mein bhul gayi kya?

Suvreen: kya hai kaal?

Yuvraj: lagta hai tune kuch zyaada hi padhai ki hai aaj =P isiliye yeh haal hai!

Suvreen: yeh sab chodo..point pe aoo

Yuvraj: Oh madam! It's Saturday tomorrow? We were supposed to do something..right???????

Suvreen: Ohhh..bhuli nahi thi...main toh bas dekh rahi thi ki tumhe yaad hai ki nahi =P

Yuvraj: achcha?? Chal ab acting band kar...phir se bhul maat jana kal k barein mein =P

Suvreen: ya ya ya. Can I sleep now?

Yuvraj: Arre! Maine roka hai kya?

Suvreen: uf bye!

Yuvraj: oyee wait na

Suvreen: What?!?!

Yuvraj: Remember to bring everything..check the list that we made yesterday..

Suvreen: okk. Tum bhi kuch maat bhulna..list dekhlena..

Yuvraj: mera advice mujhe hi? =P

Suvrren: ha... koi problem? Bye!

Suvreen notices one notification. "Yuvraj Singh likes your photo". Konsi photo? She thought clicking it. It was a picture of her alone in fresher's night.

Suvreen texted Yuvi again.

Suvreen: meri picture like kyun ki?

Yuvraj: ajeeb baat hai..Facebook par tere picture like karne see paap karliya kya maine? Waise tu achchi lagrehi thi usme..isiliye..

Yuvraj gets a notification. "Suvreen Guggal likes your photo" He opened it and saw his picture on fresher's night.

Yuvraj: ab tune kyun like ki? Acha I see..mujh pe fida hogayi kya?

Suvreen: Sapne maat dekha karo Cheetah..tumhara koi ehsan nehi rakhna chahti main..tumne like ki meri pic...phir manie tumhari pic like ki..ab tumhara mujhpe aur koi debt nehi hai =P

Yuvraj: hisaab achchi kar leti hai tu

Suvreen: ha bye

Yuvraj: areee ruk!

Suvreen: abb kya hai?? 😑

Yuvraj: Goodnight! 😊

Suvreen: hmm goodnight..sleep well...

Yuvraj: aur haan! Sweet dreams...

with me ;) heehehehe (Suvreen's eyes popped out seeing his reply)

Suvreen: WHAT?!?!?!!!!!!!

Yuvraj: ehehe I was just kidding, Topper...

Suvreen: ughhh bye

Suvreen shut down her laptop sighing and looked around. Annie and Naro were sound asleep. She decided to sleep and closed her eyes slowly as she wrapped the blanket around her. She started to have blurry images in her head that she imagines to happen tomorrow.. She just hoped that the next day goes superb as planned. She prayed to her Gannu jii too to fulfill her wishes. When she was done, she took a deep breath and was going to drowse off...when..

"Topper!" shouted Yuvraj with his usual heart-taking smile. Suvreen opened her eyes immediately breathing heavily. Just my imagination. Thought Suvreen. "This Yuvraj never lets me sleep peacefully. Gannu jii!! Please help na..Only you know how I am going to handle that Cheetah tomorrow."

Yuvraj's Hostel room

Yuvraj was thinking about almost everything in college as he has decided to be the student president. Eventually, Suvreen occupied his mind. He started to have flashbacks'''''.

Suvreen bandaging his wound'..*Yuvi smiles*

Suvi saying, " Tum na acche ho..par.."

YuvReen first meeting..Fall and Catch moment came into Yuvi's mind. He smiled even wider and shaked his head.

"Topper! Tujhe toh kal dekhunga..Abhi sone de mujhe!" thought Yuvi and it didn't take him too long to fall asleep.

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INDEX

 Part 2 - Page 3

Part 3 - Page 9

Part 4 - Page 12

Part 5 - Page 16

Part 6 - Page 20

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Okii..How was it?? I am really sorry if I bored you..umm..Well, it's not done..But I'd thought I post the next part later only if you guys want and like this part..Please, tell me how was it?? :)

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Posted: 11 years ago
Its cute :) waiting for your next update...
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hey dear, it was an awsum part  πŸ‘πŸΌ ..plzz do continue 😊 ..luved it...πŸ˜ƒ
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fabulous isnat...this was really cute❀️...do continue
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awsm awsm can imagine suvi nd uv in it..
they use same language...
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awesome yaar πŸ‘πŸΌ ...
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It was too cute!
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Oh sooo cute 😊

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loved it!!!!!!!!!! and do continue
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Thanks to everyone who liked it!! πŸ˜ƒ
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