Tanzie as far as readers r concerned the no. has dropped drastically in every other FF here n believe me it has nothing to do with the update As u urself said before I am sure u will never ever stop writing n u will never quit updating ur FFs in IF till the time even a single reader waits eagerly for ur update 😳 n I will always be ur reader TILL THE END OF TIME 🤗 About the current track its thoroughly enjoyable n I love exploring more on the supernatural theme u have in mind for this FF. Trust me dear its brilliant n please don't change it assuming readers r getting bored coz its anything but boring
Coming to the update I loved the way u started this dramatic update on a light hearted note which was so endearing 😳 Amber who's greatest pain in life had been losing her child has finally seen the light in the form of Aryan's children. Among the two, I can see Amber is more attached to Ahana who is a miniature Amby when it comes to fashion tantrums 😆 Jaisi bua waisi bhateeji 🤣 I pity Aryan n now I am certain Aryan will never pass a taunt on dressing styles coz he will face the wrath of not one but two women of the house 🤣 Three cheers to girl power 😎 The kids have become her world now n I really hope Amber n Armaan realise their feelings n confess it too 😳 They both need each other Amber is also feeling guilty tat Abhay is facing all of this bcoz of her 😭 But Abhay being the head of the family should also protect his family n thats exactly what he is doing now Vampires have heightened emotions be it passion, grief or guilt n guilt is something which can tear u inside out
Coming to Aryan Alina I know Aryan will never be able to love Alina like he loved Peehu but y do I feel he does feel something for her which could be beyond the fact that Alina is taking care of his children or something platonic? Even when Aryan was Peehu's estranged husband I wanted Aryan to be with Alina 😕 I know its twisted but though Peehu was Aryan's undying love I always saw Alina as his soulmate 😳 I know Amber n Pia will love them like their own children for neither of them will ever have children but the kids do need someone whom they can call a mother n not just get the love from family alone
I always love the Mohini part in ur updates 👏 The family tree reminded me of Black Family Tree. I knew Mohini would never learn the truth from a direct source n I was so right I was impressed 😎 I loved the way she vented out her anger n grief. Gave me chills n I am sure she will never forgive Aryan for this n I wont be surprised if she holds him responsible for Peehu's death as well n holds a grudge on him as well along with Abhay As it is we all know how much she despises him but now things might get serious with Aryan as well But seems like Abhay is her top priority now. I know she despises him so much not bcoz of her sister's death alone but more bcoz of Abhay stopping her from achieving the ultimate power Good choice of song. Perfect for Mohini ⭐️
Pamona fears Mohini n rightly so coz facing Mohini's wrath is a gazillion times worse than embracing death So now she has finally realised that Pia is no insignificant human. She is fighting for her client who happens to be her husband, her sole reason for hanging onto life n such people can goto any lengths to save their beloved 😳 But win or lose, she has to try before she accepts defeat else Mohini wont spare her Abt the compulsion detector I am surprised SC doesn have it 😲 I mean when they have witches n warlocks on board its obvious there will be compulsion as well. Mohini only favors ppl so that she can use them later n that slave wizard is proof for that 🤢
Pia is missing Abhay n I hope he gets back to where he belongs - with her 😳 Being alone wasn new for Pia but ever since Abhay came into her life, life took a U turn for good in her life but now she is back to square one but hopefully not for long Even if she had lost her memories her heart always belonged to Abhay 😳 But though Abhay's absence has left a dent in her life it has given her a purpose.
Kol is defo so smart 😎 But I wish he could super charge that genius of a brain of his to dig the truth out. He knows how much Mohini loved Ragini. So how has she let her come to Belgium all by herself? 😕 Since she has recently been resurrected Ragini must be weak n Mohini leaving her alone in this state is impossible. Though whatever he has known abt Ragini is contradictory to wat he is seeing now it could be possible that she has changed due to being brought back to life. Something is surely amiss n I hope its not long before he fits the missing pieces of the puzzle. U know wat? I am eagerly awaiting Mohini Kol face off 😃 Revenge is a dish best served cold n Kol knows no matter what happens Mohini will find a means to get it
Even in the darkest of hours Abhiya will find a ray of hope in each other n thats the beauty of their relationship 😳 They are each other's salvation in the true sense. Even though Abhay himself is worried he is more concerned for Pia n Pia, is seeking strength to face watever is ahead though she knows how much dangerous it is for her to get involved in Abhay's predatory world but she will do all it takes to free him 😃
The courtroom sequence was hilarious 🤣 It was obvious Mohini would change her game plan but this backfired as well 😆 I loved the way u have paid attention to every minute detail here be it the simple fact of memory being erased once the human was done with the testifying 👏 Superb 👏 It was obvious the human couple would be dazzled on seeing the court n its grandeur 😆 I loved Victoria's jibe on the court being a millenia older than Louvre 🤣 Was Mohini so dumb tat she thought sending an old couple whose memories are bound to fail them help her get Abhay nailed? 😆 But well given the SPC tat would have been possible if Abhay didn have Pia for a lawyer 😎 I so loved Pia's questioning a lot 👏 Fantastic! I felt like I was in a court n trust me this was better than most of the courtroom stuff I have read in many books before 👏 No wonder ur in a league of ur own It was so funny to see the man almost drop down when Abhay revealed his fangs 😆 The fact that even a member of the jury who had fallen asleep during the trial woke up when Pia's name was taken is proof enough to show that Pia has taken the supernatural world by storm 👏 I loved Pia's defence 👏
I loved Abhiya moment ☺️ It was so passionate n so filled with hope n victory 😃 If some were astounded, some were amazed seeing the bond between a vampire and a human, including Kol 😉
I am waiting to know what will Aryan's n Mohini's next move will be n gosh Pamona aka Ragini has come to meet Abhay n she is crying 😲 Defo not good news I am sure she was there to awaken his guilt n I hope Abhay doesn do anything reckless else Pia's efforts will go in vain I so wish u update this soon coz I am eager to know what happened b/w Abhay n Ragini. Also I want to see Pia Mohini face off 😃 It will surely be a show stealer of course - two determined woman - One hell bent on destroying a man who snatched away her chance of becoming the supreme power n the other hell bent on saving the man who means the world to her or probably more ⭐️
Do I even have words to describe ur writing? 😕 Nope I ran out of adjectives long time back but I would say:
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Edited by ..mandy.. - 11 years ago
From 50 its come down to 35 in Guardian as well. In my case I can clearly say its my crappy writing n delay in updates but in ur case I being 200% frank - in terms of quality ur FFs r intact
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