||-Life Betrays-|| (One-Shot) - Page 5

Originally posted by: sdlife19

nice emotional one

Originally posted by: awesomepooja

Nice os...

Originally posted by: divya22

Awesome yaar...
It is sooo painful yet touchy...
U hv described every emotion so nicely that i could feel it...
A really sad story bt   Written amazingly...
Keep it up

Originally posted by: gargi12

hey...very emotional os...
U made me cry...
Y our lyf is nt simple????
Do pm me if u write another story...

Originally posted by: shruti_ms

very beautifully written 

very emotional 

Originally posted by: tehzeeb25

awwesum Os ...sooo touching ...amazing ...thnxx fo pm

Originally posted by: lil.mizz.smexii

AMAZING
but it was painful

Originally posted by: Appy

are you really a new writer coz i swear i wont beleive it!!!!

its was such a beautiful update dat i'm speechless and not able to put my feelings in words..

i did read the whole os wid full concentration and it really touched somewhere deep in my heart.

while reading dat para which says ...

I ran away from there to my home, the memories of my happy childhood flashing in front of me, then slowly, the times which almost shook my whole life, came in front of me. The faces I always longed to see, of my parents; the faces I always saw and loved, of Alisha and grandma; the lovely memories; the harsh memories came across me, as I ran across the road. So much noise, the noise of shouting of the people, the noise of the horns of the cars and bikes, the noises ware filled in the air. But in my mind, I had other noises- the memories.

i was in tears..

and once again i'm saying i still dont believe its ur 1st attempt..

loved it dear..and love you and thanks for giving such a beautiful os..

 

Originally posted by: d_sonia

Emotional and nice os

Originally posted by: --Neelam--

well written...
beautiful OS...
very emotional too...