||-Life Betrays-|| (One-Shot) - Page 4

hey there,
this was so beautifully written, i must now check out your other work, heart wrenching.. loved it.

Thanks a lot to everyone who read and liked my OS.  🤗

omggg really heart wrenching OS..

This is very emotonial.I can feel her  pain.There are tears in  my eyes after reading this.

OMG

Originally posted by: Arezo.

Res=) Will edit soon!

Edited:

OMG! How I wish it was longer & didn't end at that part. :( I could feel the pain she was going through. You've beautifully presented each & every emotion she has been through, a great bonding with grandma & her friend. Very emotional & good piece of work.
Awh :( I wish she had got a little of happiness she deserved.


great one! keep them coming :D loved it overall :)


Arezo.

Originally posted by: Tyro

an emotional OS...

u can never know what life throws at u...u just have to accept it...

Originally posted by: MrsRaizada101

Wow...that was very very intense and emotional. Beautifully written!

-Abi❤️

Originally posted by: sowmyadharini

super.
well written..

Edited by AfflicteD - 11 years ago

Originally posted by: uteem

sooo emotional os

how can parents treat dere children lyk dis