FF: Tera Chehra Jab Nazar Aaye..Part 3,pg.9 (24.6) - Page 8

pasumarthisa

@pasumarthisa

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

Hi, Very touching narrative. Ram's subconsciously feeling comfortable with Riya and feeling for her - you brought out all these very well. Like I said before, I wish this track comes true and opens up lots of possibilities for magical Ram-Priya moments. Please keep this FF going.

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Punya

@PunyaS

Senior Member

Posted: 11 years ago

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Amby! 🤗

Lovely update! Lovely way to show the bonding. Amazing convo b/w Ram n Riya. hahahaha.. they already have a deal.. awww!!

Yay!! Flowers made an entry!! Too good!

I am sooo happy you updated!

You are leaving me greedy here. I want more more n more!

Get well soon girl! Miss u on IF!

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Evan

@-evan-

Goldie

Posted: 11 years ago

wow! beautiful! really loved Ram & Riya's conversation <3

plz update soon.. ab intezaar nehi hota :(

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Anjali

@Pinkjali

Senior Member

Posted: 11 years ago

It was so sweet, i really like the way how u describe priyas habit in riya.

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157365

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

i must say

4 this update

this is super

yaar ram ki memory kab aaye gi and how

is this ram fall in love with priya again

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crystal30

@crystal30

Goldie

Posted: 11 years ago

Hi Amby, m glad that ur back..😃

Was eagerly waiting for the update, jus loved the way story is progressing. U left the readers at the most awaited moment of Ram dinning for the first time with his family!!! I knw the current is taking a toll on all of us..bt pls do update soon!!!

Thank you.

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Suman

@_CandyCream_

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

Awesome update!! 😃 Riya is so cute!! ❤️
Hope ur feeling much better now! 😊 Take care and pls update soon! 😉

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coolabb

@coolabb

Newbie

Posted: 11 years ago

AWESOME! I dont know how i missed this ff! I have just read part 1 ... but had to reply!!! You r an awesome writer. I had twars running down imagining the reaction of viks neha and priy with rams death news. Great writing!!!
Gosh...if this is a filler ... I cannot wait to read the other parst!
Pls add me to yr pm list. I do NOT want to miss future updates.
Thx :-D

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cutiesakshi

@cutiesakshi

Senior Member

Posted: 11 years ago

wow amby its realy lovely...it brought tears in my eyes...m loving dis story...hey u r a grt writer...plz continue soon...dis is one of my favrourite ffs...cnt wait to read nxt part...update soon plzzz

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