ArSha OS - Is it a DREAM??

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey ppl'!! Hw r u all'???? I no I no dat I hav an ff to b updated but wat to do yaar'. ARSHA r simply killing me wid der thoughts' ohk dis is my very first OS so please understand' ohk no more bak-bak now' happy reading'


S: Uff'!! Kahan mar gaya yeh ladka'?? Kya kabhi time pe nahi aa sakta???  Gadha kahika' Ek cheez bhi sahi nahi karsakta yeh'   bhagwan bachao mujhe isse' she looked at her wtch' WATTT??? 7 bajne mein sirf 5 min??? kunwar ke bacche'. M gonna kill u' kya kabhi time pe nahi aa sakta yeh??? Kya meri ek wish bhi puri nai karsakta woh???

K: Kya kahan tune???

Kunwar was der standing by his building lift continuously glaring atshakti lik wat d hell did u say luk' shakti wasn't expecting dis.. she was taken aback' she finally got back to her senses while amar opened his apartment door never looking at shakti'

K: Meine pucha' Kya kaha tune??

S (scared):Ku'Kuch bhi toh nahi'

K: Toh mein teri koi bhi wish puri nai karta na??

S (now tensed): Kunwar aise nai hein' T' Tu galat samajh raha hein' Who mein bas'

K: Who mein bas kya??

S: Kuch nai?? (really sad)

K (senseng d change in her voice): Acha chod'. Lite le' Mein janta hoon who aise hi galti se boldiy hoga tune'.

Shankti just nodded' Kunwar smiled'

K: Ab joh kaam ke liye aaaye hein who karre'???

Shakti immidiately hopped on d couch in d living room n pushed kunwar in d kitchen fr sum popcorn' She was ruling today' Y nt vn she has such a luving frnd wid hr'. Kunwar came bak wid d popcorn n sumthin 2 drink n flopped dwn beside hr' she snatched d popcorn frm his hand' he pouted'

K: Arre shaks' mujhe bhuk lagi hein yaar' Abhi toh shoot se wapis ayya hoon' kuch toh khane de'

S: Dekh kunwar' Tujhe maloom hein ki mein tere haath ka kuch bhi miss nai karti considering ki bohot mushkil se tu kuch banata hein' so don e1 think ki mein tujhe yeh pura dene waali hoon'. Haan cahe toh thoda share kar sakti hoon tere saath'

K: Thank you'(in a sarcastic way)

They both ver at kunwar's house. They had decided dat kunwar wud record der last episodes together n den both will watch dem with each oder' it was 29 feb dat day'

S: ab jaldi on karna'

K: acha baba' ek min rukh'

Kunwar started playin d recordings' first up was der dance on mere bina 4m crook' both ver engrossed in sumthin' Sakthi in d recordings n kunwar in her'. Both vr enjoyn to d core' they made fun of each oder watchin der expressions' teasin eac oder wid kriyaansh n wat nt'. Finally all d recordings ended' Kunwar noticed dat Shakti was getting a bit emotional remembering all her d3 days' So to enlighten her mood he quickly put on her favourite movie titanic'(personally I luv d muvi)' Shakti immediately sat up straight' Kunwar chuckled inwardly at her childish nature' Dey watched d muvi silently enjoyin each oders company 2 d fullest' Muvi was abt to end' Shakti was almost on kunwar her head already resting on his shoulder' Kunwar felt that she was abt to cry at d ending as she always did' So jus to cheer her up he quickly gt down on his knees suprising her n asking her fr a dance on MY HEART WILL GO ON'. Shakti immediately agreed' Hw cud she say no to him fr anything' Day slowly started swaying to d music' Kunwar's hands on her waist n her hands locked at his neck' both wer lost in each oders eyes' at d end of d song kunwar slowly lifted shakti in his arms n took her in his room' shakti didn't mind' Kunwar wanted dis to b d best day of der lives' he wanted everything to go according to his plan n he knew it was gonna happen dat way nly as he had his confirmations done already'


So guys like it??? I no thoda chota hein... Bt wat to do... Its my first try... Please do give me ur reviews' will b waiting fr dem badly'. N ya dis os will hav 2-3 parts' hav nt decided dat yet'. it depends cumpletely on ur rewies ppl... So please like n pen down ur views...


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Posted: 11 years ago
#2

Wonderful OS n great storyline...


But y did u stop here...continue soon n pm me.

Edited by snigdha_arsha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#3
Amazing Update.
It was so cute and lovely one.

Do continue it soon and pm me on uir updates.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#4
nyc update ddue so cute aww i knw how shaki feels well waiting for y=our next 1 thnx for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ye kaisi point hai rokhne ka????????haa????? mujhe jald hi update chahiye...*pout* and abt this update...really nice...i wish it could be more long
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Posted: 11 years ago
#6
Amazing OS...
Gr8 start
my heart wil go on is one of my favs...love celine dion's voice...
Imagining it on ArSha is gr8
thanx 4 d pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#7
Misha its amazing...loved it..plzz update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#8
really cute! :)

thanks for the pm
Posted: 11 years ago
#9
it was really nice ;) 
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Posted: 11 years ago
#10
amazing OS...loved it very much
that was soo sweet of amar that he care for shakti soo much
please continue this OS