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Posted: 11 years ago
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Here i go with my os after a long long time 
all oldies g3,bm,dadaji n rajbana went on a pilgrimage naksh r single nw i mean no duggu 
ITs like only naksh in house
nyt 11:30
 naitik went for a nyt shower 
akshara cleaning her bed n room.
akshara :looks towards watch .yeh kya naitik abhi taak aaye nahi kaafi time hogaya .immidiatly her eyes go on a towel 
             to herself:yeh toh naitik ka towel hai.
              aur naitik nahane gaaye hua hai .
             naitik bhi na phir say aapna towel bhul gaaye aab bahar kaise aayenga 
              may abhi yeh towel naitik ko dedathi hu 
(naksh have a attach bath room)
                            
                                                             BATHROOM
akshara:knock kncok..!!
naitik still having shower with high water pressure.due to which he cudnt hear the knock knock ..!!
akshara:knock ,,kncok ..!!
naitik:boliye akshara 
akshara:aap kaise jaante hai ki may hu 
naitik:akshara..!! ghar abhi hum dono ka sivya koi aur hai kya ..?nahi na ..phir..
akshara :oh ..sorry 
naitik:boliye aap idhhar mujhe miss kaar rahe thi ..?
         ya phir akela daar laag raha hai.?
akshara:ji nahi..aisa kuch nahi hai 
naitik:phir..?
akshara:aap aapna towel yahi bhul gaaye 
naitik:acha theek hai ..dejiya 
        to himself:he stops his right hand with his left hand and say pagaal hogaya hai itna acha chance kyu miss kaar raha hai .?
naitik opens sum part of door ..akshara streches her hand to give towel 
naitik:pulls akshara's hand ..and pull her inside the bathroom
naitik feets on the soap on  floor..due to which naksh get misbalanced and slip down in bath tub
akshara down and naitik uska upar in water tub 
akshara :naitik .kya hai ya ..may puri gheeli hogayi aap bhi na bla bla bla bla...
naitik:instead of getting drawned in water drawned in akshara's bueaty 
akshara :naitik aab uthi na ..
naitik:cmplitly numb
akshara reading naitik's eye understood wht he is upto
akshara:naitik plzz panni kaafi thanda hai .mujhe saardi laag rahe hai 
naitik:hah hah ..he sumhow managed to get up and help out akshara to 
akshara trying to hold sumting ..by mistake opens shower .
seeing akshara cmplitly drentched in water naitik moves step by step towards akshara.akshara see's naitik coming towards him move a step back n hit a wall
naitik come's near to akshara and stand close to her ..this close ki he was able to hear akshara's heart beat 
naksh cmplitly mesmarized 
naitik move close to akshara and hold her by her waist.akshara was cmplitly moved by naitik's gentle touch ..she was feeling sumting beyond unbarable .she just close her eye's to enjoy and feel the most bueatiful feeling .
akshara's closed eyes n water running down her face made him more crazy over her
naitik:places a gentle kiss on akshara's forehead.akshara alone not able to bare the seduction caught hold of naitik tightly 
        naitik was trying to dry akshara's wet face by kissing her 
akshara:was enjoying every single moment of naitik .every single touch of naitik was driving her more n more crazy..
just thn shower stops n naksh cum out of thr dreamy world ..akshara just push's naitik n run out of the bathroom
                          naksh room
akshara;who was cmplitly wet .n was irritated with tht wet clothes was trying to change .but she was unable to unpin the back pin oh her blouse
naitik complitly dry with a towel come's out and see what akshara was trying to do 
naitik:kya may kuch madat kaaru 
akshara:suddenly with a jerk turn around towards him
seeing naitik cmplitly dry with wet hairs on a red towel akshara fell for him.akshara was just starring at him without a blink 
naitik:kya may kuch madat kaaru 
akshara;hah...nahi 
naitik:come towards akshara .
akshara:moving back wards
naitik reaches akshara catch her and turn her around
naitik:slightly move akshara's hair at a side .and move his hot dry hand on her cold body.$akshara just unable to take it catch hold of bed corner
        naitik unpin's akshara pin and pull tht pin with his lips.and dry akshara with the towel 
naitik make akshara turn towards him and unjewel her every jwellery 
thn lift akshara in her arms and take her to bed 
                                                         THE END 
a small os guys hope u all liked it πŸ˜ƒ do share ur views πŸ˜ƒ
                                regards to
                    amina di,shy n snehu
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb yar...vry well written...enjoyed evry bit of it...sooo romantic...thnx fr d pm..Edited by -Naksh4ever- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Do I need to say anything more?? 😳 πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Ghar pe comment dekho..Edited by --Avni-- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thnx for pm..πŸ˜ƒ
superb OS😳
keep writing



Edited by rasmi24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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sonuπŸ€—
kal ka kharab mood tera os padh ke theek ho gya...😳
mujhe hamesha se aisa romance dekhna tha naksh ka😳😳😳
tnx for d PM...
Edited by srkfan4ever - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome sonali
u fulfilled wat we had missed in today's episode
nice romantic os
if u extended the naksh room scene it would be aur good
good writting yaar pls continue
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Edited by naksh_manju - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Won awesome os sonali
you r way to writing romantic scene is awesome. you r words makes us to imagine it .fabulas one
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Posted: 11 years ago
#8

Originally posted by: naksh_manju

awesome sonali

u fulfilled wat we had missed in today's episode
nice romantic os
if u extended the naksh room scene it would be aur good
good writting yaar pls continue
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thank u manju πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
waise aage ka phadna hai kya ..??πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Naksh4ever-

Superb yar...vry well written...enjoyed evry bit of it...sooo romantic...thnx fr d pm..

thank u πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
Posted: 11 years ago
#10
Hey Sonali, πŸ€—
Awesome OS.. Just too gud..😳
naksh bathroom romance has always been a dream for me n it will always remaing dream nly.. πŸ˜” but atleast we could read such romance thanx to u.. πŸ˜ƒ
and finally i expected a contunation of last scene.. πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†