Just these Bars in between... A poem.. chk pg 7 - Page 2

Foreword

For those of you who have joined here later here is the link for the poem titled..

 

 

But things are starkly  different now..

Now without further ado, lets get on with this poem..

 

Yet indicative of the lines of fate

 

Bars and barriers looking like abacus

Counters of time and distance between us.

 

These bars are never a  barrier

For charges levelled are all absurder

   

Leaps of faith and trust was never a suspect

Leap into the future a resigned prospect.

  

Tearful eyes tearing me apart

Painful  face piercing my heart

 

 Love will ease all that's wrong

Lets hold to it and just be strong.

  

Adversity and hardships for testing times

Happiness and miracles  to relieve us sometimes.

 

 Months and years soon to separate us

Blissful  togetherness; all cherished moments.

 

Don't cry my love

For I love you more than ever

For I love you more than myself.

 

 

 

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Edited by maris08 - 11 years ago

Maris, awesome dear, the abacus part with counters of time and distance between us was an amazing line. Totally khoob dear 

Very touching didi...thanks a lot for this beautiful post😊...really lovable 😳...keep rocking with your beautiful and unique posts..👏👏

wow this is awesome 👏👏👏👏👏
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Maris🤗

woot woot... Well done poetess...! :)

Loved these lines to the core...

Love will ease all that's wrong Lets hold to it and just be strong...

Aha... I'm always amazed at how much effect RaYa have had on me!
M on d go... Will come back 2 say more... Jus couldnt wait 2 tell u dat loved it...

Originally posted by: naznin17

Beautiful poem! ❤️

Thanks Nazin..😳

Originally posted by: SriB

Maris, awesome dear, the abacus part with counters of time and distance between us was an amazing line. Totally khoob dear 

Thanks Sri..Am honoured..😳😃

Originally posted by: TVserialfreak

Very touching didi...thanks a lot for this beautiful post😊...really lovable 😳...keep rocking with your beautiful and unique posts..👏👏

Thanks kishore.. Glad you like it..😃

Originally posted by: jakther

wow this is awesome 👏👏👏👏👏
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Thanks lakhi