Virman SS: Pyaar mein dard..(Pt 4 added!) - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
Maanvi aid i love u!!! Atlast!!
grat update
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62
Sorry for the late comment..
thanks for showing maanvi out of illness, i love to see her like that only..
Virat , aww how hw cared for maanvi and his controlness its great, maanvi confessed , want to know how virat will respond, interesting..
well wriitten chapters, thanks for the PM and continue soon 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awww Sruthi sooo cute!! Loved it! Yay Maanvi's going to get well soon ...and omg Maanvi was stroking his hair and he felt better and then the hug! It was all so perfect! Loved it! :) x
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
wohooo
loved it alot
plz update very soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
superb update yaar...luvd it!!!!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
Aww manvi sed i love u so sweet and Virat was too adorable
Awesome uodate
Continue asap and pm me please
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sorry Sruthi for commenting so late as I have not been on IF lately...been very busy with my cousins wedding.You have done a marvellous job though!Loved every single part...hopefully this is the kind of Virmaan love we get to see on the actual show and thanks for the pm's...please do keep me updated.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Just one word : AWNNN
i could imagine the story in my head
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hello everybody!
Here is Part 4! Hope you like it!!
It's only about Virman!! And their romance!!

Enjoy!
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Virat was cuddling around with his pillow on his bed... He pulled the bedsheet over his face because the bright sunlight was disturbing his sleep...

Virat: Kya hai? Ek din toh sone do na...
He angrily spoke to the sun..

Suddenly he felt a warm touch on his forehead... It went on for sometime and he just enjoyed it, without even bothering who was doing it...

The touch reached his hair and there was a ruffle which made him smile widely... Before the hand went away.. He caught it!

Virat knew, that it was none other than Manvi... He gently opened his eyes... And his eyes almost popped out!

Manvi sat on his bed... Wearing a saree... A bright blue saree... Plenty of bangles and a shining bindi.. She looked like an angel who had descended from heaven... Manvi just knew what to do...

She let go of his hand and took a pail of water...
Whoosh!!
All of it on Virat's face!!

But Virat loved it! In return, he smiled and bounced right up... Manvi was blushing now...
And he was enjoying it thoroughly.. This was what he wanted to see... The 'womanly' side of his Sherni!!

Manvi decided to stop feeling so shy and do a little masti..
Virat was staring at her, her beauty had

Manvi: Eh Chep! Kabhi bhi ladki ko sari me nahi dekhi kya??
Aise ke kya dekh rahe ho??

Virat: Kya Manvi! Itni romantic morning ko kharab karti ho!!
He turns his face away in anger..

Manvi was laughing her heart out but Virat remained absolutely mum...

She put her hands on his cheeks and turned his face towards her... He looked at her..
Manvi held her ears...

Manvi: Naraz ho?

Virat nodded...

Manvi: Sorry partner! Please gussa mat ho!! Mai bore ho jaoongi agar tum mujhse baat nahi karoge!!

She made an innocent face and looked down...

He smiled... Because, Manvi was never active like this early in the morning.. Especially after those painful chemo therapies...
Virat could not express how happy he was.. Manvi would hesitate to get up from her bed...
But today, she did all of this... Just for him!!
What more could he ask for!!

He moved closer to her and held her hands... She looked up at him...

Virat smiled...

Virat: Mai aaj Itna khush hoon... Tumhe sari mai dekh kar, mai hairan ho Gaya hoon!!

He kneeled down on his knees and took her hands in his..
She shyly looked at him...
Virat kissed her hands...

Virat: You are the most beautiful woman on earth Manvi...

She got up and he got up too.. Manvi passionately looked into his eyes and he looked back...

And they spent the whole morning... Immersed in each other's eyes...

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Please leave your precious comments!
Edited by Sruthi_Virmanli - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70
hey first to comment
loved it
so romanticcc
Edited by virman-fan - 13 years ago

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