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superb update tora! Very beautiful!! 👏
arnab's thoughts were very well described. 👏 bt he is a v.weak man indeed! Even when he is realising hs mistakes he is nt there to protect hs daughter. 😳 i hope he behaves like a man in future.
About madhu again the way u portrayed an angry woman's wrath was simply brilliant..👍🏼 bt 4m a reader's point of view i felt dreadful when she rebuked pia for nothing! 😡 and pia.. wish she protestd bck..bt she like always acceptd whatever rubbish madhu told her..😔 bt one thing disturbs me..well a question actually, that is..madhu bought up pia..and she is a woman plus a mother..so havent for 1single moment did she feel anythng for pia ..like pity..or anythng..any emotion..at all? She has lived with her all these years..and she isnt a negative character either..so it just wonders me.. I knw she has her own reasons to hate pia, i do undrstand its nt easy 4 her bt still you knw what i mean to say..
And the last part..
It was brilliant..the way u depicted pia's sadness,her pain,worry, love 4 hs brother...it was all so beautifully written!! 👏
And abhay..
Oh..such beautifully you have portrayed hm..it shows how much care hav u poured in building hs character! Awesuum job princess! You stole my heart wth ur wonderful writing! ❤️ 👏
Abhay's every move..his thoughts..fear..sense of guilt...hs changing behaviour..love taking place of hathred..was all so amazingly painted!! Splendid job!! 👏
I loved the part most where abhay said 'you really think..i..?' his intagible pain was so visible! Heartbreaking but extremely magnificient! ⭐️
His hurt..hs agony..ohh..i can feel it! 🥺
I lovd the way he answered madhu!
And last..abhay will donate blood n that too 4 arjun! Bt I knew he wud becoz that is what the real abhay is, inside that hard exterior whch he shows...earlier he was blind wth hathred bt nt anymre..love has shown hs the way..that wud eventually lead hm to light!
Waiting for the light to enter bth his , pia's and arjun's life..😳
And lastly , Thank you for keeping arjun safe! a big hug for that..🤗 😉 and thanks for such a mervellous update my princess..🤗
Update soon plz!!!
P.s. Extremly sorry for the late comment. Bt my studies n then u knw persnal prblms kept me busy..sorry again.
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