Abhiya ff:Fading Darkness.NEW THREAD LINK PG 1 - Page 45

superb update.had chand sent haseena away 4m him bt why? Hasina asha scene was beautiful.abhay pia were fab as usual.lvd their bantering. Bth r affected by each other yet r tryin hard to hate each other. Lvd it.thanx 4 pm

very nice update tora. loving the story and feeling bad for Pia. 

thax fr pm! luvly bt sad update! poor pia! feeling bad fr her😭! dis chand aghhh 😡 next 1 plz update soon!

That was an awesome update Tora 👏 Love the way the story is headed. Poor Pia  My heart wept for her 😭 She's suffering so much n to make matters worse Abhay rebukes her every now n then. But I am certain Abhay is doing the deal to ruin the Dobriyals. I am really confused abt Haseena here 😕 She seems to be Arjun's culprit but at the same time seems like there's more to the story  I am really curious to know her side of the story now. This Diane 😡 She wants to get the post cleared so that her sis gets it? 🤢 But I suppose if that happens will Pia end up working for Abhay? 😉 I hope she does n I hope she can bring Abhay out of his misery. He's suffered a lot as well n also he's being used as a pawn in this ugly game of revenge by his father 🤢 I hope Pia beocmes Abhay's princess 😳 Wonderful update Tora 👏

Edited by mandy1024 - 11 years ago

wow great story plz update soon
it's an amazing story to read i really love your story alot
thanks for the pm

Oh, oh... So Pia started messing with his thoughts... Wonder how much ;)
and Diane... I wonder what she's doing?

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Wow!! Superb update tora...👏 loved it all along..👍🏼
Hm..so misha is cuming to dehradun..tht means lots of fun!!
Poor pia,suffering wth no fault of her's! bt misha will knw soon I guess!
So abhiya met again! Their meeting was spectacular... Pia's head pounding, finding herslf in her bed brought by abhay,abhay's coldness,pia's pain,abhay's feelings hidden beneath his cold n rude reply was dextorously explained.. I read it 3-4times ! It was soo beautiful...! 😳 Their feelings those were mre than just hathred was undoubtedly visible...great work! ⭐️
Chand never cared for abhay..hm gud atleast abhay noticed it nw! And haseena..i really felt bad for her..there's a bigger picture...i'm sure! but wen will abhay knw the truth? Will it b too late?!! I hope it wnt!
Hm...i think I knw wat is diane upto!! Bt that will further bring abhiya close I guess! Coz Jealousy always works! Isnt it? 😉
All in all a wonderful update..awaiting the next part..😊
P.s. M very very Sorry dear for nt being able to comment in the previous update... Plz dnt mind.. Edited by lost_in_love - 11 years ago

amazing update tora👏

Awsm.Luvd it.Abhiya r ttly affected by each other but trying to hate one another.Luvd their bantering.

He he he Tora...can't get enough of it...love it...