thanx prati...ya that's abhay for u..😊Originally posted by: DonIsback
whoa nice abhiya meeting.. abhay is cold very much cold but his behavior someware passionate. and intense.. awesome update tora..
glad u liked it shreya.😊.hm..there are a lot of sides to arjun's character that's all i can say now..Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--
Well tora, that was a beautiful bit of writing. I really liked how you portrayed abhay and piya's emotions here. But i wonder ... Was Arjun really the bad guy that Abhay thinks he is?
thanx mansa😳..yup..right now abhay has no compassion..from his pov piya is equally to blame..and chand has also a sort of influence on this mindset of his...u wii see how slowly...Originally posted by: mandy1024
That was an amazing update Tora 👏 Poor Pia she is already suffering so much 😭 n now Abhay will add to her misery I guess he's gonna play with her heart, use her n dump her Not sure but he might do something like tat tp avenge his sis 😭 I wish he rather teaches Arjun a lesson than go after her but I suppose then Abhiya will not come together then 😉 Waiting to see how Abhiya's relation will progress 😃 Continue soon...
thank uOriginally posted by: Alicia2001
wow great story plz update soon
I'm really looking forward to your next part of your story
thanks for the pm😊
why?😆Originally posted by: flora212
I dont know why i was singing the song pehle pehle payar hai pehli pehli baar hai...rofl!
Awsome update!
Hoping to fall abhiya in love...
Update soon.
hmm..the truth will unravel slowly..Originally posted by: vishti.dvd
nice update and Pia ne Abhay ko bhaiya bulaya gussa hona toh banta hai boss 😆 and Abhay called Arjun murderer of his sis I think there must be some misunderstanding hai na ?
thanx dishu..yup..piya has hard times coming..Originally posted by: ..dishu..
very nice update tora. and pia's pain really touched me. poor girl has gone thru so much and is probably going to go thru so much more for no fault of hers 😭
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