OS- Unrequited Love

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irene

@rennie

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#31

good one...really liked it...hope u will turn this into an ss or ff in the near future...

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meera06

@meera06

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

loved it...

would love to read more of this...

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Hiruni

@CDlove

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

awww great one nisha1!! very sad and poignant...

your school starts so soon? that suck

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ruby-red

@ruby-red

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

ahhh that was so sweet and so sad, really feel for poor khushi. i would love it if you could continue with this but i also understand that you have othe priorities and studies should always come first. will miss you but please keep writting when you get the chance and please do pm me, thanx

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inluvwivARHI

@inluvwivARHI

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Beautifully written...u shud continu dis wen or if u hav tym...thanx foh da pm

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Ritika

@WiseGirl

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

I really liked how Khushi gets so mad when Arnav is with anyone but he never notices. It felt really real, not like some fairy-tale where she gets the guy even though she is so much younger than him.

I'd like to see this turn into an SS or FF though!

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Avani

@highonshows

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

That is truly interesting,...i'd really want to know how things are now,...and how they progress...this story can have so many layers...and it would be wonderful if u unfold layer by layer...ur way of story telling is quite interesting...

pls do turn it into an ss/ff as it would certainly garner u many acolades...

Avni

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Yuks

@-Yuks-

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

This was definitely interesting. Very different too

I liked it

Yuks

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--Siva--

@--Siva--

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#39

This is sad yet nice to see she's stronger and composed.

Happy that you continuing it. so i would spare my torture of asking you to continue:)

Thanks Dr the pm.