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Posted: 11 years ago
#81
wonderful update thanks for pm keep it up
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: luvsakshi

Awesome veena..how could i missed this update re ...
ram entry is fantastic.ooohhh i can so imagine the part with raya ..superb
plz this time onwards give pm to me...
thanks you sooo much ...


hihihi...koi baat nhi...defently next time i will...πŸ€—
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
hyela veena di superb shayari ..love ur shayari so much..kya pyaar ko describe kiya..shayari kya kam thi ki dono ka ek din vapas kar ke dil khush kar diya..muahhh..or yeh pyaar mein twist..ab konsa tufan aane wala hai..plz update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
scene 7

rampriya dono ekdusre me samaye khade rhte h...tabhi ram kafi himmat juta k priya se bate krne ki koshis krta h...

Ram..priya

Priya...hmmm

Ram..mujhe tumse kuchh bate krni h

Priya...ssshhh

Raam...kya hua???

Priya..abhi m kisi ki bate sun rhi hu

Ram...bate sun rhi ho??? Kiski???

Priya...ssshhh

Ram...kya h priya??? Tum hamesha paheliyi jaisi bate kyun krti ho

Priya...ufff...nhi sunne denge aap mujhe

Ram...pr kya sunne du ?? Yha to bs m hi hu aur meri to tum sun hi nhi rhi ho...aur kaun bol rha h jiski sun rhi ho tum???

Priya...apki ye dhadkane...wo bate kr rhi h mujhse apko pta h unhone mujhse kya kaha.???

Ram...kya???

Priya ram ka hath pakad kr use bister pe bithati h aur khud neeche baith k uske pairo pe sir rakh deti h aur bolna shuru krti h...

Priya...apki dhadkane mujhse apki shikayat kr rhi thi..

Ram...kya?? Inki itni himmat meri hote hue bhi mere khilaf bola inhone sb tumhari sangat ka asr h ...

Priya ram ko ghurne lagti h ram muskurata rhta h..

Priya..aah vry funny...suniye to kya kaha unhone...unhone mujhe btaya ki pichhle teen rato se aap soye nhi..unhe ek pal bhi chain se sans lene nhi diya qki hr sans me mera naam liya..hr dhadkn me mujhe mehsus kiya..hr pal dil pe hath rkh k mujhe chhuna chaha..bht disturb kiya apne unhe aur bht stress bhi diya ab wo mujhse kh rhe h ki m apka ilaz karu aur apko theek karu taki aap bhi chain se rhe aur unhe bhi chain se rhe de...

Ram...achha...to kya ilaz dhundha h tumne jra m bhi to dekhu...

Right now priya is on full mood...heyn ..wo neche se uthti h aur ram k bagal me baith jati h aur uske kaan k paas aakr kehti h ki

Priya...mne ye ilaz dhundha h ki m in dhadkano me hamesha k liye sama jati hu na m dur jaungi na ye bechain hongi na hi aapko takleef hogi aur aapka dil mujhse apki kabhi sikayat bhi nhi karega qki m apki shikayat nhi sun sakti...

& then priya start kissing on ram's neck,chick,chest,allover his face bt ram dsnt hv cnsntration on that..qki ye sb bate sunne k bad wo aur bechain ho jata h ...wo priya ko pakadta h aur rok deta h aur khud se thoda dur kr deta h

Priya...kya hua raam???

Ram...priya tum ye sb kaise kr leti ho ...kyun itna jadu h tumhari bato m ki m khud ko nhi bachaa pata tumse...

Priya...to kya jarurat h bachane ki aur ye pyar ka jadu h ram...pr ap aisi bate kyun kr rhe h...???

Raam...priya mujhe kuchh kehna h tumse tum please shant hoke sunna aur samjhne ki koshis krna halat aur meri situation ko...

Priya...boliye ram kya ho gya..m sun rhi hu...

Ram...tumhe pta h ye sb kais theek hua h.???.

Priya...ha apne to kiya h sb 

Raam...mne to kiya h lekin kaise kiya h ye bhi to suno...tumhe chhudwane k liye sid ki jarurat thi aur ma ne sid ko chhupa kr mujhe blackmail kiya aur mujhse wada liya ki agr m tumhe hamesha k liye apne se dur kr dunga tabhi wo mujhe sid ka pta btayengi to mujhe aisa krna pada...aur ab hume ekdusre se dur hona hoga...pta nhi kaise hoga ye sb...m teen din tumhare bina nhi rh paya...aur ek jindgi guzarna to namumkin h m mar jaunga priya tumhare bina...

Ram priya ko dekhta h wo muskurati rhti h even hasti rhti h ram ko lagta h ki bechari sadme se pagal ho gyi h..

Ram...dekho priya m samajh sakta hu...ye sb brdasht krna tumhare liye bht mushkil h...bt hme ekdusre ko sambhalna hoga aur apne apko majbut krna hoga...

Priya ram ke muh pe hath rakh deti h...

Priya..ssshhh..aah ram aap bhi na m koi snti wenti nhi ho rhi mujhe to hasi aa rhi h apki ma pe ...

Raam...priya tum pagal ho gyi ho itni mushkil ghadi me bhi tumhe mazak sujh rha h...

Priya..are raam m pagal nhi hui...ap bhi na...kya ho gya sirf wada hi kiya tha na kahin agreement to likhwaya nhi h jo uspe amal krna jaruri h...aur waise bhi wo jo apki ma h na unka ye fvrt kam h sabko blackmail krti rhti h mujhe bhi kiya tha tabhi to m wo divorce paper leke ghum rhi thi...hihihi...aap bsnsman h itna bada bsness chalate h whi demag yha bhi use kariye na aise logo k sath aisa hi kiya jata h aaj tk unhone apne fayede ke liye apka ishtemal kiya aaj aap ne unka kr liya hisab barabar...unke paas kya sabut h ki aisi koi deal hui thi..bhul jaiye sb koi hme alag nhi kr sakta aur kabhi bhi nhi kr sakta h...aap bhi kya bate lekar baith gye pura mood distrb ho gya

Raam...lekin priya mujhe dr lag rha h kahin unhone kuchh kr diya to .

Priya...ram..kuchh nhi hoga jbtk humdono sath h kuchh bhi nhi ho sakta bura hmare sath...ufff chhodiye na kyun neha vikram k diye hue ek din ki band baja rhe h..

Ram...ha priya tum theek kh rhi ho kaha likha h kisne suna h ki mne aisa kuchh kaha tha...chalo bhul gya...achha hum kahan the...

Priya...wo apki in bakwas bato k chakkr m main bhul gyi...

Ram...lekin mujhe yad h...tum mere dil k ilaz k baare me kh rhi thi karo na ilaz..

Priya...uth k jane lagti h...nhi abhi mera mood gadbad ho gya ab mujhe phir se mood bnana padega...

Ram...lekin ja kahan rhi ho

Priya...mood bnane

Ram...oye ...kahan mood bnane...heyn

Priya...aahhh ram tameez se rha kriye...

Priya khidki k samne ja ke khadi ho jati h bahar ka mausam tufan jaisa lag rha hota h ..bht tez hawa chal rhi hoti h priya khadi rhti h to uske baal udte rhte h ram peechhe se ata h aur priya ko baho me leke bolta h

Ram...tameez se to m nhi rh sakta...

& he wants to love her desprtly but as priya says...abhi usko mood bnana h to wo bate krti rhti h...

Priya..dekhiye ram mausam kitna achha ho rha h...

Raam...hmmm

Priya...kitni achhi hawa chal rhi h

Ram...hmmm

Priya...lagta h barish hogi mujhe barish bht pasand h

Ram...hmmm

Priya...ram hmare samne bhut khada h

Ram...hmmm

Priya...ram bahar ullu ghum rha h

Ram..hmmm

Actully ram priya ki koi bhi baat sun nhi rha hota h wo to bs laga pada h priya ko kiss krne me pyar krne me...aur priya bhi samajh rhi hoti h isiliye itni utpatang bate krna shuru kr deti..bt ram hihihi...wo to apne me hi mst bs phir kya bhadak gyi jhansi ki rani ...ab jhelo...

Priya...kya hmm hmm laga rkha h m itni der se bol rhi hu aapne kuchh suna ???

Ram chaunk kr...ha suna na

Priya...kya bola mne abhi???

Ram...tumne abhi??? Wo??? Are kuchh to kh rhi thi...hmm... Sorry mne suna nhi

Priya...ha janti thi m ki aap mujhe sun nhi rhe h m apne mn hi bakwas kr rhi hu...aapne apni bat kr li uska solution ho gya bs khtm ab apna kaam bhi kr lo samne wale ka kya h .uski kisko sunni h

Priya bolti jati h ram sunta rhta ajeeb ajeeb muh bnata rhta h wo jitna hi muh bnata h priya utna hi bolti rhti phir ram upr dekh kr bolta h ...

Raam...aap chup karayenge ya m karau???

Tabhi bht tez bijli chamkti hai aur badal garzta h priya drr jati h aur aake mr.kapoor se lipat jati h bs phir kya pakad lete ramji apni priya ko aur bolte h

Ram...wah ramji badi jaldi sun liya is mamle me apka bhi sense meri hi trh kaam krta h
"Thank u uprwala aap waha garzte rho taki ye yha barste rhe.."

Ye dialogue mra nhi h deewana movie ka h mne ye yha chipka diya qki mujhe wo scene aur dialogue bht pasand h...hihihi...
Anyways...dono hasne lagte h aur ek dusre ko agosh me leke kho jate h...they kisses eachother desprtly more than anuthing...ab isse jyada to m btaungi nhi aaplog jante hi h i cnt explain more...so ek gane ki do line h wo shayad ye scene creat krne me aap logo ki help kr de...


"aaj itne kareeb aa jao duriyo ka kahin nishan na rh jaye
Ekdusre me ghum ho jaye fasla koi darmiya na rh jayeee
Aur ahista kijiye bate dhadkane koi sun rha hoga
Labz girne na paye hotho se waqt k hath inko chun lenge"

ek tufan bahar aata h aur ek tufan do dilo k andr...enjoy

to b continue


Precap...priya subah uth k taiyar hoti h phir mr.kapoor ko jagati h

Ram...priya tumhe office jana h???

Priya...nhi to kyun????
Edited by veena23 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
Hey awesome update...😊Just loved Priya today...
And that Rams dialogue "
aap chup karayenge ya m karau???" 😳😍
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
Veena,

FAB update!  I love the way you write conversations. No bhaari-bharkam dialogues.. simple narration in simple way. And the touch of humour is absolutely entertaining.

Love each update.

Thanks for writing!

πŸ€—
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: kaparikh1

Hey awesome update...😊Just loved Priya today...
And that Rams dialogue "
aap chup karayenge ya m karau???" 😳😍



thank u sooo much...❀️❀️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: PunyaS

Veena,


FAB update!  I love the way you write conversations. No bhaari-bharkam dialogues.. simple narration in simple way. And the touch of humour is absolutely entertaining.

Love each update.

Thanks for writing!

πŸ€—



love πŸ€—πŸ€—
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89
thanku  for this  sweet  update .. 

hisab barabar.. was too good and  

 beautifully  written   
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
Wow! Fantastic update! Loved it❀️