The description of a woman in love is so apt in your first paragraph.
"A lady's imagination is very rapid; it jumps from admiration to love, from love to matrimony in a moment."
Doesnt this happen with every woman, when you are in love, you think about the worst and best possibilities all at a lightning speed. Love and hope in one moment, panic and despair the next. Amazing portrayal of a fact, such aptly described.
The kiss part was too cute, when Little Khushi showed them what was a kiss, and then pointed out when Arnav kissed Khushi's fingers.
You pour magic into the scenes with Arnav and Khushi...or should I say you pour life into the magic they already have. Love their chemistry, loved Khushi's mock anger, and her desire to be seductive and discreet about it...it shows so much a woman she has become...from the start of the story to now. But Arnav knows her too well, especially when it comes be tricks in the bed, he looks forward to his little minx.
Brilliant update, Maya
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