FF: MY IMAGINATION AFTER LEAP 22.7.2012 updtd pg12 - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
so priya is not listening to ram also ..
only her papa ..that was cute ...
thanks for the update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey that was a cute update...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
priya not  listening to ram  . listening to sudhir. am glad ki atleast sudhir had  voice in this  rofl

thanks for the sweet update 
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Posted: 11 years ago
now  bring on another update

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: luvbalh

now  bring on another update


yes m starting to write now. it will be updated soon today. within an hour i think.
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update... but i want priya to listen to ram... 😭



continue soon... sorry 4 late reply... 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
I am back with my next update

AFTERNOON
Priya is sleeping and others are busy making lunch as kapoor family and sharma family are there except nuts and rahul. She gets a call from shipra.
nuts: ma aap log kahan hai?
Shipra: sorry beta hum tumhe batana bhul gaye ki hum KM me hai. Riya or piya ko bht tez bukhar hai
              or priya subah se bht ro rahi thi. abhi vo theek hai. toh tum rahul ko lekar idhar aa jao?
nuts: ji ma.

Nuts n rahul reaches KM
She goes directly to the kids room and sees them studying for their english orals.
Nuts: bachho tum padh kyu rahe ho?
Riya: hamara oral hai. or aaj humne miss kar diya. kal hum denge.
Nuts: no way u wont study now. tumhe bht tez bukhar hai. 
she takes the books and makes them lie down.

RAYA ROOM
Priya is sleeping then her phone rings.
Priya: hello!
neha: hey priya! are u ok? tum so rahi ho?
Priya: ha m fine. vo bacho ki tabyet bht kharab hai. or bht royi aaj. 
Neha: kya? kya hua unhe?
priya: bht tez bukkhar hai unhe. subah uth hi nae rahe the or doc ne injection diya or thode der k                      baad hosh me aye. 
neha: me abhi aa rahi hu.
priya: ok

Neha comes and both go to the kids room n sees nuts there.
priya: nuts tum yahan?
nuts: ha ma ne bataya ki bacho ko bukhar hai bht tez. or aap.
priya puts her hand on nuts mouth stopping her to say she that she cried.
priya checks their temperature and says abhi bhi bht fever hai tumhe.
piya: mummy hame kal school jana hai?
priya: tum thode din nahi jaogi.
riya: par ma hamara oral.
priya: vapas jaogi toh tab dena. abhi araam karo me tumhare liye lunch lati hu.
rahul: bua kya me inke sath baithu bed par?
priya: nahi rahul. tumhe bhi bukhar chad jayega. nuts dhyan rakho.
nuts: ji bhabhi.
neha: bacho kaise ho?
piya/riya: hum thik hai aunty.
neha: araam karna bachho.
piya/riya: ji aunty.

She goes out of the room and sees ram going to the room.
ram: tum uth gayi?
priya: ha me uth gayi or aap bacho k pas rahiye me khana lati ho unka.
ram: thik hai priya.

He goes to the room and hugs her sis n rahul n sees the kids there.
ram: toh maza aa raha hai bed pe rehke pure din?
riya/piya: papa bed pe rehke kaise maza ayeha?
ram: iske zimedar tum hi ho bacho? ice cream bht khayi hogi na?
riya n piya smile.

just then rams phone ring.
ram: hello
principal: hello mr kapoor me apke bacho ki school ki principal bol rahi hu.
ram: ji kahiye mam
principal: kya aapke bachhe kal aa sakte hai school. hume kal tak sab marks bharne hai. its very
                 urgent.
ram: par unka bukhar abhi tak kam nahi hua hai. medicines bhi abhi tak thik se react nahi kar
            rahi hai.
principal: kal hum unki eng teacher ko aapke ghar bhej te hai unka oral lene. 
ram: thik hai mam.
he cuts the phone. he goes inside sees nuts n priya are feeding them and he takes their english book.
priya:ram aap ye kya kar rahe hai?
ram: priya school se call aya tha ki unhe oral k marks fill up karne hai kal hi toh kal inki english
         teacher ghar ayegi oral lene.
priya: thik hai. aap padiye or fir me bhi padati hu inhe.
ram: thik hai.
kids finish their food and all go from room allowing them to sleep for sometime.

DINING TABLE
Ram is sitting and reading the book.
dadi: ye kya padh rahe ho golu puttar?
ram: dadi fir se golu puttar. sab haste hai. vo bacho ki eng book padh raha hu.
dadi: kyu ?
ram: kal bachho ki teacher ayegi unka oral lene.
dadi: achha thik hai.

Priya comes
priya: ram aap book side me rakhiye baad me padiye book.
ram: thik hai.

all finish their dinner. Sharma family go to their house. 

Priya and ram read the book whole afternoon.
its 5pm the kids get up and try to search their books but they dnt get.
riya: eng ki book gayi kahan?
piya: ek book toh papa padh rahe the. lekin tumhari kahan hai?
riya: pata nahi yahan toh thi. chalo papa se puchne jate hai.
piya: ha chalo.
they have become so weak due to fever that they are not able to walk properly.
They reach their parents room and they see them with their books and ram sees them. he runs 
towards them. picks them in his lap n make them sit with them on their laps.
piya: mumma aap bhi hamari book le ayi? hum pure room me dhund rahe the?
priya: ha vo pad rahi thi. chalo ab batao tumhe kya kya teacher puch sakti hai.
riya: orals hai mumma. toh viva hoga, speech n dictation
ram: speech tayar kiya dono ne?
riya/piya: ha papa.
priya: chalo piya pehle tum sunao
piya tells her speech and then riya tells. 
ram: good. priya inka dictation karvana hai. aise bed pe nahi kar sakte.
priya: chalo inke room me inhe inke study table me bithake karvate hai.
ram: ha chalo.
ram picks up riya n priya picks up piya.

KIDS ROOM
they make them sit on the chair. Priya takes out 2 papers and 2 pencils.
priya: tumhare papa tumhe word bolenge or tum likhna paper me.
riya/piya: ji mumma.
ram tells words and they write it sincerely.  then priya checks the spelling.
priya: are vah bachho tumne toh ek dam thik likha hai.
both the kids smile.
then priya reads a paragraph and asks question from it. they reply nicely.
They check their fever. its reduced slightly.
piya: ma hume dadi or badi dadi k pass jana hai.
priya: thik hai chalo.
They pick up riya and piya and take them to dadi's room.

DADI ROOM
dadi is lying on bed.
priya: lagta hai dadi so rahi hai ram?
ram: mujhe bhi vo hi lagta hai.
but dadi is not sleeping just she is worried for kids. They turn to go n dadi sees them with kids.
dadi: are tum log? or mere bachhe kaise ho tum?
piya/riya: dadi hum theek hai. 
they try to get down. just then ram n priya put them on bed and start playing with dadi. dadi checks
them.
dadi: are tumhe abhi bhi bukhar hai?
ram: ha dadi pehle se thoda kam hua hai.
priya: dadi me inki medicine lati hu.
priya brings the medicine and they eat it. 

they go out of the room. priya goes to krishnaji's room. ram goes to his room n see vik n neha with kids.

IN KRISHNAJI ROOM
Priya: ma.
krishna: are priya aao na?
priya: ma m sorry subah k liye.
krishna: its ok beta. me tumhari halat samaj sakti hu. me bhi toh ma hu. aao baitho.
priya hugs her n sits with her.
they talk for sometime and then krishnaji goes to dadi's room where kids are playing with dadi.

RAYA ROOM
Priya sees neha vikram n kids. kids see priya and shout priya aunty.
priya: are bacho! kaise ho?
they reply hum thik hai aunty.
ritsy: aunty piya riya kahan hai?
priya: vo dadi k pass hai. jana hai toh jao.
they run downwards.
priya: tum yahan kaise?
neha: tum subah bht royi to vapas aa gayi tumhare pass.
priya: thnx neha.
they chit chat for sometime.

DADI ROOM
dadi sees neha kids and tell them to come in all play with them.

DINNER
Neha n vikram n their kids to have dinner with them.
Neha kids eat their dinner n then sit silently. 
Ram and priya feed their kids n take to their room. Neha had also finished and even ram n priya.
they go the room. give the kids medicine. change them to night dress and make them sleep.

Neha n vikram go with kids.

MORNING
Priya wakes the kids dress them. She makes them sit on the table.
priya: tumhari teacher kabhi bhi ayegi toh achhe se karna.
piya/riya: ji ma.

Priya goes out of the room.
She is standing in the hall and the teacher comes.
mam: shayad yahi KM hai? chalo andar jake dekhti hu?
priya: mam aiye na. good morning!!
mam: good morning! toh aap mrs kapoor hai na?
priya: ji me hi hoo.
mam: aapke bachhhe?
priya: upar hai. chaliye.
they go to the kids room. 
kids wish her good morning.
she starts their oral n finish it in sometime.
Priya comes after that.
priya: ho gaya oral?
mam: ji mrs kapoor. bht sweet hai yeh. par kitne weak ho gaye hai dono.
priya: ha bukhar ki vajah se. abhi bhi hai inhe. thank u for coming to take their orals.
mam: isme thanks ki kya zaroorat. inke liye toh me ayi hu.
then priya gives her snacks n goes to school.

The kids are lying down n priya is playing with them. By evening they are feeling slight better n priya is happy seeing their recovery.

EVENING
ram come back from offices and sees priya happt.
ram: aaj tum bht khush ho?
priya: ha bachho ki recovery ho rahi hai.
ram: thank God!! achha hai nahi toh vapas tumhara rona dhona shuru ho jata,
priya: m sorry ram
ram: its ok priya. me samaj sakta hu akhir tum ek ma ho. 
they hug each other.
priya: ayesha se baat hi nahi ho payi is sab ke vajah se. me jati hu uske pass. 
ram: thik HAI.

AYESHA ROOM
Ayesha is sitting and reading a book. Priya sees her.
priya: are tu kabse books padne lagi?
aye: di aap? aiye na? kaise ho aap? or bachhe?
priya: bilkul thik hai.
aye: me bht dar gayi thi aapko us haal me dekhke. aap sirf papa ki baat man rahe the.
priya: ab chod na vo sab. bachhe bhi parso se school jana shuru kar denge.
aye: yeh toh bht achha hai di. or batao di?
priya: teri pehli raat kaise rahi mere pyare devar k sath?
aye: di achhi thi. pls ye sab chodiye pls.
priya: aise kaise jane doo. achhi ya bht achhi?
aye: di pls. (blushing)
priya: are sharma rahi hai. wow!!!
ayesha runs from there. Priya runs after her and catches her. Both are running down the stairs and sees dadi and krishnaji and stops.
dadi: yeh kya ho raha hai?
aye: kuch nahi dadi n runs to go to kitchen to cook food n priya also starts going.
dadi: priya ek min.
priya; ji dadi.
dadi: thik hai tu?
priya: ji dadi me thik hu. sorry us din aapko bht pareshan kiya.
dadi: koi baat nahi beta. ja ayesha ki help kar le. or aaj aloo ka paratha bana. mere potiyo ko pasand hai.
priya: ji dadi.

KITCHEN
priya: hey ayesha! 
aye: di aap mera picha kyu kar rahe hai.
priya: me kahan kar rahi hu. dadi ne mujhe bola aloo ka paratha banane k liye.
aye: ok di. chalo banate hai.

they make it and after sometime all eat it.
piya just eats 1 n riya eats nicely.
Priya: piya khao na aur?
piya: nahi ma mujhe yeh nahi pasand. mujhe fruits de dijiye.
priya: achha thik hai.

the kids finish food. 

hope u liked it..

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: salsaly

awesome update... but i want priya to listen to ram... 😭




continue soon... sorry 4 late reply... 😊

THANKS DEAR.
WILL DO NEXT TIME THAT.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: riddhu123

THANKS DEAR.

WILL DO NEXT TIME THAT.


its ok... will comment after reading... 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome as always... lovely scenes... ❤️



continue asap... thank u... 🤗