ff:forever & always Part 64 pg 123 (19/06/2017) - Page 53

Nice update
manveer scene ws so cute
do pm me n cntinue soon

loved it!!!!!!!!!!
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an awesome update loved it!
Do continue soon and pm me if possible.

Sorrry for commenting late sonu was caught up in exams
Now coming to the update it was amazing
Loved each and everythng abt it
The manveer scenes were very cute
It felt awesome reading ur ff aftr ages
Missed ur updates
And now u better update faassstt and dat to a long 1 as a penalty for updating late

OMG OMG LOVED IT LOADS DEARY... WONDER HOW COULD YOU RIGHT SUCH ROMANTIC UPDATES WITHOUT EVEN LETTING MANVEER SAY I LOVE U EVEN ONCE... I READ ALL UR 39 CHAPTERS IN ONE GO...AND I LOVED THEM LOADS... UR ALREADY THERE IN MY BUDDY LIST... PLZ PLZZ PM ME IF U CAN... AND YA ONCE MORE... REALLY GREAT WORK DONE DEARY...

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Edited by preya_radev - 11 years ago

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Uday: come on princess I have told u before u don't have to be shy of me he said smirking

Manyata: chii uday u and ur shameless talk

Uday: acha princess sorry by the way I came to ask shall we go out and see devgarh we have came here since years right

Manyata: hmm not a bad idea but lets go tomorrow the journey from Mumbai to devgarh has been really tiring please if u don't mind

Uday: no worries princess in fact if u want I can stay here with u in the same room what say,,, plus we have been in one room before' manyata remembers the incident when uday had dared her to say in one room with him till morning and the effect he had on her by coming close to her

Manyata: sorry no chance that was a dare which u had given me and I proved to stay with u in one room but right now u stand no chance at all

Uday: right now I have no chance but what r u gone do when we become husband and wife princess he said moving closer to her' u cant escape from me then and even cant tell me to leave the room 'manyata cheeks turned red and she tried not to blush however uday was loving the effect he was having on her' bolo princess im waiting for ur answer what will u do then? He said smirking ...

manyata didn't know wt to say and was praying that someone comes and saves her until she heard a knock on her door which was j' she thanked god for sending j just on time' manyata pushed uday out of the way and opened the door

j: jiji what took u so long to open the' but she stopped when she saw uday in the room too'. A naughty smiled appeared on j face'ohhh no wonder y it took u so long to open the door jiji really sorry to interrupt ur ROMANTIC moment with uday

manyata in her mind: hai bhagwan I was thankful that u sent j over here as my saviour but no I was wrong this j also started to tease me couldn't  u send someone else' but she stopped speaking to herself when j was shaking her

j: jiji were r u lost' wait a minute did u start daydreaming about urs and udays romantic moment'. Amazing yaar uday ur charms are very strong that it even made jiji fall for u in a very less time she said giving a hi-fi to uday who was smirking and looking at manyata while manyata glared at j who was laughing 

manyata: HA HA HA very funny j she said in a sarcastic way and please I have other things to do other than day dreaming about uday and please I haven't fallen for udays charm yh he is good looking but that doesn't mean I have fallen for him k'."lair u have fallen deeply for him and his charm has a strong effect on u" her heart said to her while her mind said "exactly manyata doesn't fall for someone so easily and his charm have no effect on u" and broke the fight that was happening between her mind and heart'.. anyways j what did u come here for

j: actually sia jiji and jiju sa have came and sia jiji wants to talk to u that is y I came so make it fast she is waiting for u and also rithvik and his family members have came  j said leaving manveer in the room' manyata turned towards uday

manyata: uday I'll go and see sia jiji she said smiling

uday: k princess I will see u at the dining table and both left the room

manyata knocked on sia's door who told her to come in

sia: hey gudiya how r u

manyata: im fine jiji how r u? both sisters hugged each other and sat down on the sofa

sia: feeling good thank u

manyata: jiji what happened j told me u wanted to speak to me

sia: haan actually I was with ds and she told me maybe I could explain it to u in a better way

manyata: kya jiji

sia: woh manyata after two days it's going to be a very big day for u as its gone be ur taj-poshi where u r gone become yuvrani of devgarh and along with that a lot of responsibilities will come which will involve a lot of people life especially devgarh people where u have to take decision for their wellbeing' sia stopped and looked at manyata who was a little tense'. Manyata looked at sia when she felt her hands on her

manyata: jiji I will try my best to fully all these responsibilities but making decision for people?  jiji what if I make a wrong decision which ruins somebody's life then what will happen everyone will hate me and think ds has made a wrong decision by making me a yuvrani just imagine jiji what if that happens' sia giggled slightly

sia: manyata u imagine things a lot' manyata ds can see that u have that potential of managing everything' but she was not able to complete when j spoke who came and sat in front of them

j: sorry to speak in-between sia jiji but if ds knows that m jiji is capable of managing everything then y did she tell jiji to forget about joining sanjevani hospital, Forget about being a doctor when everyone knew that this was jijis dream since years' manyata didn't want this topic to come up as it always upsets her  

manyata: j please don't talk about this'

j: jiji how long r u going to avoid it u know that this truth is always gone effect u over here she said pointing towards manyata heart'sia and manyata were looking at their little sister who had tears In her eye' jiji I know I hurt u by bringing this topic but im sorry I couldn't control myself when sia jiji said that ds knows u r capable of handling everything ' manyata bent down wiped j tears and hugged her tightly after a while she broke the hug and said

manyata: j u r the best sister I have ever had and u know what I will ask bhagwan ji to make u my sister in every life plus u don't look when u cry

j: I love u jiji she said hugging her again

manyata: I love u too' sia looked at the love between her sisters and to make the atmosphere better she said

sia: see j u always complain that manyata loves me more but now u know how much she loves u

j: sia jiji u both r the best sister and like manyata jiji even I wish and pray that I have u two as my sister in every life' three of them laughed and gave a group hug

sia was sitting in the middle of the sofa while manyata was sitting on the floor laying her head on sia's lap and j was laying her head on manyata lap

sia: j, manyata u know ds had got married in a very young age and she became the maharani of devgarh.. dad was about 14 I think while bua sa about 9 when dada sa died in a accident' ds had become a widow in a very young age but she didn't give up hope and knew that know she had to live for her children and her kingdom' years passed and she was making progress in devgarh she took care of her responsibilities as being a maharani  and also as a mother by making her kids educated and getting them married' to be honest whatever we have and whatever position we are in is all because of ds' u know manyata ds told me that she sees herself in you and she knows you will take a good care of devgarh and let no harm come to ur kingdom' manyata I know u cant be strong in a day but when u have all of us with u then we all know that u wont lose hope so please don't be nervous we all r there and will always be there especially ds to guide u

j:although I have disagreements with ds but I love her loads and im Proud to be ds granddaughter

manyata: u r right j we should be proud of being mrinalini devi granddaughter' jiji I promise I will try to fully all my responsibilities well and let no harm come to devgarh.. sia smiled and caressed her head and soon three of them left as it was nearly dinner time the elders hadn't arrived nd only vijay, unnati, rithvik, daksh and uday were present at the table' three of them came and sat down, manyata was sitting opposite to uday

vijay: arien what took u guys so long' manyata was about to reply but before that j started to answer

j: nothing vijay bhai us three were just spending time together as we havent done that since sia jiji has gotten married and it was so awesome

vijay: guys see my siblings here were spending time and forgot to call their one and only brother now I know they don't love me he said dramatically

manyata: vijay bhai its nothing like that in fact sia jiji wanted to talk to me so she called me and after a while j joined us to otherwise can it be that we leave u out.

Vijay: m bhai stop supporting j bhai all the time

Unnati: ok vijay banna calm down' till then all the elders came

Ds: everyone can start their dinner' after a while uday spoke

Uday: dadi saab wo I need ur permission

Ds: permission for what uday beta

Uday: actually can we all go out and see devgarh tomorrow as its been ages since we have came here

Ds: sure beta u all can go but be careful ' manyata looked at uday confusingly as she thought only her and uday were going 

Unnati: wow this is going to be awesome.. rithvik who was sitting next to her whispered in her ears

Rithvik: of course it will be awesome when u have a company like me so close to u' unnati blushed and didn't look up in case if someone caught her blushing but after a while when she did she caught manyata winking at her and giving her a naughty look

Everyone was done and the elders were sitting in the living room talking while the youngsters went outside in the garden they all sat down and were talking manyata who was sitting next to uday whispered to him making sure nobody is looking at them

Manyata: uday I thought u said only us two will be going to see devgarh' uday looked at her with a smirk

Uday: wow princess I didn't know that u wanted to spend some time alone with me

Manyata: huh? No its nothing like that plus I don't have a problem if the rest comes beside it will be even more fun otherwise I will get bored with u

Uday; really but I don't think u have ever got bored with me

Manyata: that's what u think' but sometimes you're not so boring' she turned to others ok guys im going to sleep good night' all the others said good night' she then turned towards uday and gave him a smile before leaving.

Unnati: dada wt time r we all leaving tomorrow

Uday: after breakfast choti

J: what? Omg then I need to sleep now to wake up early.

Vijay: yh j bhai I think u should go otherwise if ur not ready then the plan to go out tomorrow will have to be cancelled I TELL U and started laughing but stopped when j slapped him on his arms' soon all of them started to leave from there

Uday went into manyata's room and saw that she was already asleep he went near caressed her hair and kissed her forehead before leaving

Meanwhile in j room

J: this is not fair jaggat everyone is here except u

Jagat: come on j u know that nobody knows about our relationship except uday and manyata then how can I come there

J: u can come as our friend beside u r manyata jiji and unnati friend right then u have the full right to come in fact I don't know y jiji didn't even call u but I don't care u have to come and I will make sure jiji calls u over here

Jagat: ok I can never win against u now go to sleep k good night love

J: love u to bye

The next morning all the youngster were ready and had their breakfast and finally left in  jeep however sia and daksh stayed back home as nobody found it safe for her to stay out for long in this condition' uday was driving while rithvik was sitting on the passenger seat and manyata, unnati, j and vijay sat at the back' j who was sitting next to manyata decided to ask her making sure nobody is listening to them

J: manyata jiji how comes u didn't call jagat' in a whispering tone

Manyata: I thought u must have called him that's y she said in a whispering tone

J: god jiji please call him and tell him to come here I told him that he can come since he is ur friend but he aint listening please try and talk to him to him please

Manyata: k baba in fact I will send him a message now and tell him to get here asap k

J: thanks jiji I love u and hugged her both broke apart when vijay spoke

Vijay: what r u both speaking about and j y do u seem to be so happy

Manyata: nothing vijay bhai just like that j just wanted to invite a couple of friends so she was asking if they can come that's y

Vijay: oh k but u sure its nothing else

Manyata: no vijay bhai

Soon enough they reached to a place where they can see the whole devgarh all got out of the jeep and just loved how the place looked

Manyata: beautiful she said in a daze

Uday: its beautiful but not beautiful as u though' manyata became stiff when she felt uday whispering near her ear she turned around but saw that he was looking ahead of her she smiled and turned around'. They all went around to look at the different places and done a little bit of shopping and was heading back to devgarh palace and was talking loads of picture soon

Vijay:omg its 5 already we should be heading back.

Rithvic: ur right vijay banna its been really long and im already tired

Vijay: exactly we r tired but look at these girls they r not tired I mean their shopping doesn't end at all 'I tell u' rithvic nodded his head and then looked at uday who was  laying on the jeep bonnet with his eyes closed while vijay bhai was sitting on the driving seat and rithvic on the passenger as they were waiting for the girls who was busy choosing stuffs for everyone else.

Rithvic: uday where u lost dude or r u lost in someone thought' uday opened his eyes and looked towards the boys giving his usual smirk

Uday: rithvic u should no that yuvraj udayveer singh doesn't get lost into anyone but the others get lost thinking about me

Vijay: finally here come the girl

Unnatti: k we r done now

Vijay: thank god otherwise these girls shopping doesn't seem to end at all

J: so that's your problem' uday was looking at manyata but she didn't notice as she was busy texting someone on the phone

Vijay: chalo uday banna come on ur driving seat' they all sat down and headed to the palace' j ran to komal who was sitting in the hall with the other elders and sat next to her

J: mom u know we bought all of u something me, jiji and unnati had to keep looking until we found something appropriate see look.. and she started to show everyone their gifts' uday who was standing near manyata pulled her by her duppata closer to him

Manyata: uday what r u doing' in a whispering tone

Uday: princess you chose and bought gifts for everyone else he said whispering

Manyata: yes but what does that have to do with u pulling me? In the same tone

Uday: it does u remembered bringing gifts for everyone else but not me and I exactly know how to claim my gift he said in a husky tone' she shivered on the way he spoke and his breath falling on her ears' she turned her face slightly and saw him looking at her and then towards her lips giving her goose bumps.. she turned away and slightly moved away from him but still could feel his gaze on her back' she looked around and thanked god that everyone was busy in looking at the gifts and quickly went and sat next to brij and giriraj' uday smirked as he can see how manyata was trying to hide her nervousness Edited by preya_radev - 11 years ago