Shades Of Grey- CHAPTER 12 (PG-143) UPDATED!!

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disha7

@disha7

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1031

awesome chapter..and long too!😆

love this tortured arnav...HAHA!!

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Krani

@Krani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1032

I absolutely LOVE how you are making the transition from Arnav seeing her as a girl to now seeing her as a woman and potential something.

I would have hated it if you made him wake up one day and go, "I love Khushi and want to marry her and want to have lots and lots of babies."

Just. No.

Love how you are making this sexual tension mount even more, how for Arnav at the moment, these feelings are all about lust but then slowly he will realise that it's a lot deeper and perhaps more meaningful. And boy, that's when he'll be in for a real shock!

Lovely fic!

The start of it with Arnav mocking what Khushi said had me choking on my coffee as I tried to stifle my laugh because my parents were having some "serious" discussion at that exact moment. Needless to say, I got some pretty strange looks as i slowly turned red in the face :P

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Gunjan Mukherjee

@gunjanmkj

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#1033

U made me cry😔it was so heartbreaking..so heartwrenching..melancholy ruled..its haunting..it was so vry moving..gr8 job!

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Stapleton

@Stapleton

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1034

Fantastic update...
Thanks 4 d pm

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Manitaa

@Manitaa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1035

Oh Arnie baby.. So now you know exactly how we feel every time you do something as simple and naive as giving a lop-sided smirk.. Pure torture!

Getting a taste of your own medicine eh!

And good job Keertika.. your lessons are bearing fruit..

What an update ladies! Faaabbb! Loved loved loved it... Just awesome.. I wish it could go an on.. Its so addictive.. Thanks for the pm!

Edited by mvsoni - 13 years ago

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essess

@essess

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#1036

ohh!!!!!!!!!!!! I do sooo want them to get together NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Loved the descriptions of his frustrtions adn fear that he would lose his reelationship with khushi if he acts on his feelings and desires!

Let him know soon that she feels they same way!

But not too soon coz i love ur writing and the story's movements.

Plz No heartbreaks for them!PLZ PLZ PLZ!

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yusam

@yusam

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#1037

OHH MY MYY...!!! THT WAS ONE STUPENDOUS UPDATE... LOVED IT... MAAAN FIND A SOLUTION TO THEIR PROBLEM ASAP... ITS BURNINGGG...

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shree99

@shree99

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1038

well.. now.. only one solution only.. yes sireee
I really liked it that you guys took a lot of time to describe his conflicting emotions..
what of khushi .. has she now successfully compartmentalised all of it