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Hey Grace di!!!! π€
I so love your looonnnggg updates. Loved both the updates...Part 2 and Part 3 both were just too awesome. π ππΌ
Part 2
The beginning was really cute. It was really really adorable. Finally they were getting attracted towards each other...aww Prem-Heer π I have always loved sleepy Heer and the scene reminded me of the 22nd dec scene. Hmm, too cute to be true...
I liked the way you revealed their pasts, great work...π
The breakfast scene was again really cute...π Even I like the sugary one...π
The hospital scene was cute and Heer rocks...π Arnav and Khushi...cute. At the end when Heer told about poking and all and then how awkward the atmosphere turned out was really hilarious..π
Overall, it was a Perfect update. π
Part 3
This whole update was so PHlicious. It was the perfect Prem-Heer update. It had love, passion, silence and unavoidable chemistry...it was magic. Loved the way you advanced with both of them. Too good...π
The rain sequences of Desh are something that I always cherish...briliant job π
And the last scenes...π³ βΊοΈ
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Love you as a writer, you do have great potentials. Take care. Loads of love.
Hope for an update...soon π³
Shwetasri
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