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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
Hey Grace di!!!! πŸ€— 
I so love your looonnnggg updates. Loved both the updates...Part 2 and Part 3 both were just too awesome. πŸ‘ πŸ‘πŸΌ

Part 2 
The beginning was really cute. It was really really adorable. Finally they were getting attracted towards each other...aww Prem-Heer πŸ˜ I have always loved sleepy Heer and the scene reminded me of the 22nd dec scene. Hmm, too cute to be true...
I liked the way you revealed their pasts, great work...πŸ‘ 
The breakfast scene was again really cute...πŸ˜ƒ Even I like the sugary one...πŸ˜›
The hospital scene was cute and Heer rocks...πŸ˜‰ Arnav and Khushi...cute. At the end when Heer told about poking and all and then how awkward the atmosphere turned out was really hilarious..πŸ˜†
Overall, it was a Perfect update. πŸ‘

Part 3
This whole update was so PHlicious. It was the perfect Prem-Heer update. It had love, passion, silence and unavoidable chemistry...it was magic. Loved the way you advanced with both of them. Too good...πŸ‘
The rain sequences of Desh are something that I always cherish...briliant job πŸ‘
And the last scenes...😳 β˜ΊοΈ
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Love you as a writer, you do have great potentials. Take care. Loads of love. 
Hope for an update...soon πŸ˜³
Shwetasri

Edited by -Shwetasri- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
wow awsme update grace
so almost all family members are involve in the planπŸ˜‰
luv premeer's romantic scenes😳
thnx 4 pm
pls cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
It was really such a sweet thing that the family are doing to bring prem and heer together...loved all the prem and heer scenes...

lovely.. awesome part..




do continue super soon..

thanks for the pm..

take care
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
wow great Grace.
 
Entire family is plotting out nicely.
 
You moved the track with so much passion.
 
Atlast Prem and Heer fall for each other. very gentle and natural attraction of two caring souls. forgetting their painful past they decided to move to next level to give meaning to their marriage.
 
no words to describe your writing.
 
sorry for not commenting second part.
 
 
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
brilliant update ...very well written ...thnx for the pm ...keep on writting
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
loved  it... ad me to ur pm list and plz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
Wowie. Finally Update😊
Loved it. FInally there are one. 😳
The kiss and evrythin romance Wow.πŸ‘
Loved it Grace diπŸ‘ Cn't wait for the nxt part. Yea.
thnx a ton for the pm. πŸ˜ƒ
Update soon.πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
FANTASTIC UPDATEEEπŸ‘


happy for both prem n heerrr


update ssoonnn
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
sucha brilliant,mindblowing,fantastically awesome update...i really like the mature love...the way they care for each other,the way it grew between them before anything else happened..much like the time our parents used to have arrange marriages when the love happened after marriage ...a strong,pure emotion bound a relation...please do update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
awsome update n thanks 4 the pm