||FF- Pyar Ka Asar||Ch-1 to Ch-34||CLOSED!!! - Page 45

Originally posted by: kiran_28

I know guys dat your all are eagerly waiting 4 premeer's entry😛
So here it is😉

Chapter-3

 In maan villa

The clock stuck 11.00 A.M. The rays of the sun are coming from the window and shedding light in the room. In the room there is a big round bed. There is a study table and the books are scattered on the bed. Family pictures are there on the walls.

(Just then Teji entered the room and she smiled looking at her daughter who is sleeping peacefully)

Teji: Heer puttar'.Heer uhja beta dekh 11.00 baj rahe hain. 1.30 baje tera exam shuru ho jayega, tujhe 1.00 baje se pehle college pohochna hai. Chal uthja, uth ke fresh hoke nashta karle. Uthja''

(Then Heer slowly sat up. Streching and yawning. Her long black hair fell to her waist. She had almond shaped eyes, luscious lips and she has fair skin)

Heer (yawningly): Good morning ma!

Teji: Good morning nahi, Good afternoon hone wali hai. Chal jaldi se fresh hoke niche aja tab tak mae tere liye nashta lagati hun. Thik hai!

(Heer nodded her head. Teji smiled and she kissed her on her forehead and then she left)

Ring! Ring!

(Heer's phone rang)

Heer: Hello!

Balraj: Hello Heer. Uth gaya mera bacha!

Heer (smilingly): Han papa.

Balraj: Maine tumhe Best of luck kehne ke liye  call kiya hai kyunki abhi meri ek bohot important meeting hai aur phir mae busy ho jaounga, to phir muje time nahi milega.

So best Of Luck!

Heer: Thank you papa, love you.

Balraj (smilingly): Love you too beta. Ok ab muje meeting ke liye jana hai. Apna exam che se karna ok beta.

Heer: Han papa. Ab ap apni meeting mein jao warna ap late ho jaoge, bye papa.

Balraj: Bye beta.

(Heer disconnected the cal and then she checked whether there a missed call or message or not, but there was no missed call or message)

Heer (sadly): Itna time ho gaya. Prem ne abhi tak phone kyun nahi kiya muje wish karne ke liye.

(Then she goes to bathroom)

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In Juneja Office

(Lalit was sitting in his cabin checking some files suddenly his phone rang and he picked the phone)

Lalit: Hello!

(On the other side)

Balraj: Hello lalit mae balraj bol raha hun.

Lalit: Arre han ballu bol kaisa ha tu aur ghar mein sab kaise hai?

Balraj: Mae thik hun aur ghar pe bhi sab thik hai. Tu bata tu kaisa or ghar pe sab kaise hain?

Lalit: Sab bilkul thik hai. Aj kaise yad kiya tune?

Balraj: Kyun mae tuje yad nahi kar sakta kya. Darasal baat yeh hai ki maine tuje or tere poore parivar ko aj humare ghar pe dinner le liye invite karne ke liye phone kiya hai.

Lalit: Arre wah! Kya baat hai, tu dinner pe invite kar raha hai, koi specail occasion hai kya?

Balraj: arre nahi yaar, bas aise hi kafi din ho gaye hain mile hue aur ajse to Heer ke final semesters bhi khatam ho rahe hain. Agar tum log aoge to Prem or Preet or baki sab logo se mil kar wo thorda relax bhi ho jayegi. Pichle ek mahine se uspe studies ka kafi pressure raha hai.

Lalit: Tu thik keh raha hai ballu. Isi bahane Heer ko bhi break mil jayega. Hum sab log zaror ayenge.

Balraj: Thik hai to phir aj sham ko milte hain.

Lalit: Han bilkul.

(Then they disconnect the phone)

Lalit (to himself): Gayarti ko phone karke keh deta hun ki aj sham hum sab log maam villa ja rahe hain dinner pe

(Then Lalit imformed Gayatri about Balraj's invitation)

Just then

Knock! Knock!

Lalit: Come in!

(manager entered)

Manager: Good morning sir. Sir yeh kuch documents hai. Isme apke sign chahiye the.

(He give file to Lalit. And Lalit starts reading the file. While reading)

Lalit: Mr.Sharma aj Prem ki Sehgal Group of industries ke MD ke sath meeting thi na?

Manager: Yes sir. Infact Prem Sir abhi bhi ussi meeting mein hai. Lagta hai ki yeh contract bhi hume hi milega.

Lalit (smilingly): Sahi kaha Mr.Sharma apne. Prem ne is contract ke liye bohot mehnat ki hain. To definetely yeh contract hume hi milega. Mera Prem Ram hai mere ghar ka aur agar Ram kissi cheez ko hasil karna chahate hai to wo apni mehnat, lagan aur imandari se uss cheez ko hasil karke hi rehte hai. Kyun Mr.Sharma sahi kaha na maine?

Manager (smilingly): yes sir!

On the same in the Conference Room.

One guy was sitting on MD's chair, his back was facing others.

Guy: Let me tell you Mr.Sehgal, hamari company humari factory mein advance technology use karti hai instead of man power jiski waje se humari company 8 nahi balki 5 mahine mein apka project khatam karke apko handover karegi.

(Then that guy turned his chair, and now is facing others)

"Yeh Prem Juneja ka wada hai apse" he said.

(That guy is non other than our Prem. He was in his business black suit. He has chocolate brown eyes, strong muscules. Silky hair with shaggy cut. His shirt's two upper buttons are undone. Looking extremly handsome.)

Prem (smirked): Choice is yours Mr.Sehgal!

Mr.Sehgal: I am quite impresse Mr.Juneja. Hum Junejas ke sath hi yeh contract sign karenge.

(Then both Prem and Mr.Sehgal signed the contract and then they shake their hands)

(Lalit entered the confrence room)

Mr.Sehgal:The deal is final Mr. Lalit Juneja.

(He also shook his hand with Lalit and after dicussing some important things Mr.Sehgal left. Now only Lalit and Prem are there in the confrence room)

Lalit: I am proud of you my son.

Prem: Thank you bauji. Yeh sab apke aur ma ke ashirwad na natija hai.

(Lalit smiled)

Lalit: arre han ek aur baat, aj hum sab sham ko Maan villa ja rahe hai dinner pe, Balraj ka phone aya tha. To tu jaldi se apna kam khatam kar lena sham tak. Kyunki agar tu sham ko late pohocha to tu janta hai na Heer ka gussa. Tuje ghar ke andar nahi ane degi wo.

(Lalit laughed and Prem realised)

Prem: Oh no bauji aj to Heer ka last exam haina 1.30 baje. Aur abhi 12.45 baj rahe hain. Mae meri Jhansi Ki Rani ko Best Of Luck wish karna hi bhul gaya, he said worriedly.

Lalit (smilingly):Arre tu chinta kyun kar raha hai abhi bhi der nahi hui hai. 1.30 bajne mein abhi kafi time hai. Tu abhi usse call karke wish karde warna uska moh gubare ki tarah phul jayega. Thik Hai.

Prem: Ji bauji, mae abhi usse call kar deta hun.

(Lalit left and Prem starts dailing Heer's number.)

 

[That was the 3^rd chapter guys. I hope that you all like it. Please do read and give me your suggestions] 😛 

i liked the flow of it hon!! but sometimes pace ia also important when you tell a story hon😊...otherwise nice intro of premji😍...keep it up

Originally posted by: kiran_28

Precap:😉
Prem: Hello Heer!
Heer: Silent...
Prem: o meri jhansi ki rani are you der?
Heer: still silent...
(Then Prem realised dat Heer is angry on dat is why she is not speaking to him)

i sense a storm bhuchaal and cyclone coming😆

Originally posted by: kiran_28

Vrushika this is really not fair. Waise to mera koi irada nahi tha update karne ka jab tak tum apna ff update nahi karti. but mae kya karun today is my Harshad's birthday, ab Harshad k liye to update karna parega na😛. but i next time i won't let u escape so easliy😈.

So guys here is the update. Pls dnt mind, the update is very short, next time there will be a long update i promise😊

Chapter-4

In Heer' college

Misha: C'mon Heer cheer-up. Aise kab tak moh suja kar bethi rahogi.

Ashlesha: Han yar Mish bilkul thik keh rahi hai. Please yar apna mood thik kar aj humara last exam hai, iske baad hum free!!!!!!! She said excitedly.

Misha: tu aise moh banake exam degi to exam acha kaise hoga. Thorda sa to hasdo madamji. Yar ho sakta hai ki Prem ko koi zarori kaam ho isiliye shayad usne call nahi kiya.

Heer: Watever! Mae sirf 15 mins or wait karungi or agar in 15 mins mein Prem ka call nahi aya na, then I will not talk to him ever, she said angrily looking at her phone.

(They start waiting for Prem's call. After 10mins'..)

Ash: Heer mujhe nahi lagta ki Prem ab call karega.

Misha: Han mujhe bhi nahi lagta. Chal yar chalte han 1.00 baje ke baad hume examination hall mein enter nahi karne diya jayega. Chal na Heer.

(But Heer still staring at her phone screen)

After 2 mins

Ring! Ring!

Heer's phone started ringing.

Ash and Misha (excitedly): Phone baja!!!!

Misha: Kiska phona hai? Prem ka?

Heer: Han ussi ka hi call hai.

Ash: Tu dekh kya rahi hai, utha na phone.

(Heer answered the call)

On the other side'..

Prem: Hello Heer!

Heer: Silent'..

Prem: O meri jhansi ki rani are you there!

Heer: Still silent'.

(Then Prem realised that she is angry on him that is why she is not speaking to him)

Prem: Naraz ho mujhse?

(Heer nodded her head)

Prem: I am so sorry yar. Actually meri ek bohot important meeting thi. To isiliye''I am sorry!

Heer (sadly): Tumhari meeting kya mujse zyada important hai Prem?

(Prem realised its not that easy. "Lekin beta Prem kuch to karna pardega" he think himself)

Prem: Heeer yeh kya bol rahi ho tum. Tum se zyada important mere liye kuch nahi hai sweetheart. Tum to janti ho na ki ma-bauji ne mujhe lekar kitne sari sapne dekhe hain ki mae bohot barda businessman banu, apne pairo pe kharda hon. Agar mae aj yeh meeting attend nahi karta to yeh contract humare haath se nikal jata or phir ma-bauji ka sapna bhi adhura reh jata. Kya tumhe acha lagta agar mae meeting miss karke ma- bauji ka sapna tord deta. Hmmm bolo Heer'..

(Prem smirked)

Heer: Preeemmm I really Hate you for this. Tum hamesha muje emotional blackmail karke mana lete ho. I Hate you!

Prem (smilingly): I Love you too! Acha ab yeh sab chordo. Tumhare exam ka time ho raha hai. Tum jaldi se jao or ache se exam dena "Best of Luck"

Heer (now smilingly): Thank you Prem! Acha ab mae ja rahi hun ok.

Prem: Han jao or Ash or Mish ko bhi meri taraf se wish kar dena Ok.

Heer: Han han kar dungi, bye idiot :p

Prem: Bye stupid :p

(They disconnected the call. Heer, Ash and Misha went to examination hall. And Prem smilingly thinking about Heer "pagal hai bilkul")

it was cute😊!! but a bit short to make anything out of it!! 😊 JHANSI KI RAANI so easily gave up on her anger? 😆 kuch jach nahi raha😆 but phir bhi prem ke wahjese yeh bhi fine hey😊😆

pls kiran today u will update
u ve promised with uss
pls update yaar

Originally posted by: kiran_28

Chapter-5

Heer happily entered Maan Villa. She saw Teji who is busy in giving instructions to servant.

Teji: Dekho Murli, aj jab tum kheer banaoge na to usme chini dalne se pehle Lalit bhaisab ke liye alag se nikal lena or phir kheer mein chini dalna or Lalit bhaisab ki kheer mein sugar free dalna, unhe daibaties haina.

Servant: Ji mam

Teji: Acha  suno tum paneer or gobi le aaye the na bazar se?

Servant: Han mam, mae le aya tha.

Teji: Thik hai ap ek kaam kijiye, jo bhi dishes maine apko banane ke liye kahi hai wo sab bana lijiye. Bus gobi ke paranthon ko chord dena, wo mae khudi hi banaogi. Kynki Prem ko mere hath ke bane gobi ke paranthe hi pasand hai. Or han paneer ki sabzi mae mirchi thordi tez hi rakhna warna preet ko sabzi tasty nahi lagegi. Thik hai , ab ap jaiye or apna kaam kijiye.

(Servant left for the kitchen and Heer came and hugged Teji from her back)

Heer: Kya baat hai ma. Aj bardi taiyariyan chal rahi hai.

Teji: Arre agai tu. Kaisa hua tera exam?

Heer: Exam to bohot hi acha hua ma. Ab ap batao Prem or Preet ki pasand ka khana kyn ban raha hai.

Teji: Kynki aj humare ghar Juneja family arahi hai dinner par.

Heer: Wow! That great.

Teji: Ab tu jaldi ja kar fresh ho ja. Thik hai.

Heer: Ok mom.

(Then she left for her room)

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In Prem's Cabin

Kunal: Prem tu samaj nahi raha hai yar, is bar muje sach mae pyar ho gaya hai.

Prem: Arre Thik hai mere bhai sun liya maine ki tuje 105 vi bar sacha pyar ho gaya hai.

Kunal: To sunne se kya hota hai tu meri madad kar.

Prem: Kunal dekh bhai mae teri madad baad mein karunga abhi tu muje mera kaam khatam karne de, phir muje Heer ke ghar bhi jana hai.

Kunal (confusingly): Heer ke ghar par kyn?

Prem: Dinner pe.

Kunal: Oh acha!

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In Juneja Mansion

Gayatri: Ye lijiye apke kapre nikal ke rakh diye hain bed pe.

Lalit: Han thik hai.

Gayatri: Acha suniye yaad se apne sath apni dawiyan bhi rakh lena.

Lalit: Han or tum bhi apni dawiyan rakh lena.

(Gayatri smiled and she starts thinking something)

Gayatri: Apse ek baat kahun?

Lalit: Han bolo, kya baat hai.

Gayatri: Muje lagta hai ki ab hume Prem ki shadi ke bare mein sochna chahiye. Dekhiye na Prem ki pardai bhi poori hogai or ab to usne business bhi join kar liya hai. Ab waqt agaya hai ki hum apne ghar ki bardi bahu le aaye.

Lalit: Khayal to bohot acha hai Gayatri lekin kya tumne is bare mein Prem se koi baat ki. Lardki dhondne se pehle hume ek bar Prem se poch lena chahiye ki kya use koi lardki pasand hai ya nahi.

Gayatri: Ap uski chinta mat kijiye, maine pehle hi Prem se poch liya tha is bare mein. Use koi lardki pasand nahi hai, usne kaha hai ki wo ussi lardki se shadi karega jise hum chunege.

Lalit: Sach mein Ram ka swaroop hai mera Prem. Ab Prem se green signal mil hi gaya hai to tumhari nazar mein koi lardki hai kya.

Gayatri: Han ek lardki hai jo humare ghar ki bahu or Prem ki patni banne ke liye bilkul layak hai.

Lalit (excitedly): Acha kon hai wo, jaldi batao.

Gayarti (smilingly): Ap jante hai usse, wo lardi Prem ke bohot kareeb hai.

Lalit: Gayatri tum paheliyan mat bujhao. Batao na kon hai wo.

Gayarti: "HEER"

Lalit: Heer? Apni Heer?

Gayatri: Han han or kisi Heer ko jante hain kya ap or Prem?

Lalit: Gayatri muje to yakeen hi nahi ho raha hai. Humari Heer Prem ke liye ek dum sahi jeevan sathi sabit hogi. Lekin kya Prem manega is rishte ke liye.

Gayatri: Arre kaisi baatein kar rahe hain ap. Prem kyn nahi manega. Heer mein Prem ki jaan basti hai. Apne nahi dekha kya, agar Heer ko koi bhi takleef hoti hai to Prem kaise poori duniya ko sar pe utha leta hai. Agar ek bhi din Heer ka call na aye ya wo Prem se naraz ho to Prem kaise bechain ho jata hai.

Lalit: Han Gayatri wo to thik hai lekin'.

Gayatri: Lekin kya? Ap mane ya na mane lekin muje poora vishwas hai ki Prem or Heer, ye dono ek doosre se bohot pyar karte hai. Yeh baat wo shayad khud bhi nahi samaj paye hain abhi, lekin bohot jaldi hi samj jayenge. Ap please aj ek bar Balraj bhaisab se is bare mein baat kijiye na.

Lalit: Thik hai Gayatri, agar tumhe yeh thik lagta hai to mae aj hi Ballu se is bare mein baat karta hun. Ab Khush!

Gayatri (excitedly): Han bohot Khush!

 

[That was the 5^th chapter, I hope that you will all like it. Thank you!]

this was a nice breezy one hon...😃 but still dont you think the marriage idea is a bit too sudden..i mean the story has just started..allready marriage talks? i mean there can be some foreplay...some romance shomance!!!😆☺️

Originally posted by: kiran_28

Chapter-6

In Maan Villa

(Juneja family entered and Maan family welcomed them.Balraj and Lalit and Gayatri and Teji hugged each other.)

Balraj: Kaisa hai tu?

Lalit: Main to ek dum bardiya. Namaste Bhabiji.

Teji: Namaste bhaisab!

(They came inside. Just then Heer came downstairs.)

Heer: Namaste uncle, namaste aunty!

Lalit: Namaste beta, kaisa hua tera exam?

Heer: Uncle exam to bohot hi acha hua.

Gayatri: Aur hoga kyun nahi, bohot hoshiyar hai hamari Heer.

Gayatri said while kissing on Heer's forehead.

Meher: Aunty Prem bhai nahi aaye?

Preet: Yeh lo jo aaye hain unki kadar nahi hai or PB ke liye pooch rahi hai.

(Meher glared at Preet and she was about to answered him but Teji showed her angry face to Meher)

Lalit: Meher Prem office se nikal chuka hai, bus ata hi hoga.

Teji: Ap log baithiye tab tak mae chai- nashta lekar ati hun.

Kulraj: Han aunty chaliye, mae bhi apki madad kar deti hun.

Teji: Arre Kulraj tum baitho, mae kar lungi.

Kulraj: Arre nahi aunty, mae bhi chalti huna apke sath.

(Teji smiled)

Teji: Acha thik hai chalo.

(Then Teji, Gayatri and Kulraj left for kitchen)

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Aryan: Heer didi mae apko plane banake dikhaoun. Meri mam ne aj hi muje sikhaya hai.

(Heer smiled)

Heer: Acha! Mere shona ko plane banana ata hai, chalo hum upar chalte hai or plane banate hai. Ok chalo.

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Meher: Preet ke bache bardi zuban chal rahi thi na teri, ab chal chess mein muje hara ke dekha.

Preet (to himself): Arre yaar yeh kahan phas gaya mae. Muje to chess ka 'C' bhi nahi ata. Lekin ab Meher ne challenge kiya hai to khelna to pardega hi. Ek kaam karta hun jiju ko saath leke chalta hun shayad wo meri thordi madad karde.

Preet (to Meher): Han han chalo, mae koi darta hun kya. Jiju ap bhi chaliye mere sath. Ap mere lucky charm ho. Chalo!

(Preet said while dragging Kiran with himself. And they left from there)

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Back in Living room

(Teji, Gayatri and Kulraj came with snacks and tea)

Teji: Arre yeh bache kahan chale gaye?

Balraj: Heer to Aryan ke sath upar apne kamre mein hai or Preet, Kiran or Meher chess khel rahe hain angan mae.

Kulraj: Mae Heer or baki sabko snacks or chai deke ati hun.

(Now only Gayatri, Teji, Balraj and Lalit are there in living room. Gayatri gave signal to Lalit to talk to Balraj and Lalit nodded)

Lalit: Ballu, yar tujhse ek baat karni thi.

Balraj: Han bol, kya baat hai.

Lalit: Ummm'hmmm Heer ke final semester khatam ho gaye hain to age ka kya socha hai.

Balraj: Abhi to kuch pata nahi hai yaar. Heer hi decide karegi ki age usse kya karna hai.

Lalit: Nahi mera matlab hai ki tune Heer ki shadi ke baare mein kuch socha hai ya nahi. Matlab usse kya koi lardka pasand hai ya nahi.

Balraj: Pata nahi yaar. Humne is bare mein kabhi usse baat hi nahi ki. Lekin tu kyun pooch raha hai.

Gayatri: Darasal wo kya haina bhaisab, humne socha hai ki ab hum Prem ke liye lardki dhondna shuru kar de.

Teji: Arre wah!, yeh to bohot hi achi baat hai. To kabse lardki dhondna shuru kar rahe hain ap log.

Lalit (nervously): Actually bhabi, wo ek lardki hai humari nazar mein.

Balraj: Acha kon hai wo?

Lalit: Umm wo lardki''.wo'..umm Gayatri tum batao.

Gayatri (nervously): han wo lardki''.ummm wo lardki Heer hai.

(Both Balraj and teji are shocked)

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In Heer's room

Heer: Arre wah! Mere shona ko  to barda acha plan banana ata hai.

Aryan: Heer didi muje na boat banani bhi ati hai.

Heer: Acha to phir banake dikhao.

(Aryan starts scribbling in paper and Heer  starts wondering''.)

Heer: Yeh Prem abhi tak kyun nahi aya.

(She starts dialing Prem's number)

Heer: Hello Prem!

Prem: Han Heer!

Heer: Kahan ho tum? Abhi Tak aye kyun nahi? Abhi bhi office mein hi ho kya? Aur kitna kaam bacha hai? Kitni der lagegi? Aur'.

Prem: Arre bus! Bus! Meri ma! Itne sare sawal. Mae tumhare ghar ke niche hi hun, bas car park kar raha hun.

Heer: To tum pehele nahi bata sakte the.

Prem: Arre tum muje bolne dogi, to mae bolunga na.

Heer: Acha thik hai thik hai jaldi aao.

Prem: Ok mam.

(They disconnected the call)

Heer: Wow! Aryan ne to bohot hi achi boat banai hai. Chalo hum niche chalke sabko dekhate hai. Thik hai chalo.

(Aryan smilingly nodded his head and went with Heer.)

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(In living room, there was a long discussion about Premeer's marriage. After the long discussion, Balraj and Teji agreed to this marriage.)

Teji: Wo sab to thik hai lekin kya Prem or Heer manege is rishte ke liye.

Gayatri: Arre Teji, wo log zaroor manege.

Lalit: Aur agar nahi manege to unko manane ke liye mere pas ke plan hai.

Balraj: Kaisa plan?

(Then Lalit told them about his plan and they all agreed. Just then doorbell rang)

Gayatri: Lagta hai Prem agaya.

Teji: Han mae jake darwaza kholti hun.

Balraj: Ek minute Teji, humare is plan ke bare mein Prem or Heer ko bhanak tak bhi nahi pardni chahiye.

Lalit: Han han unko bilkul pata nahi chalna chahiye.

(Both Gayatri and Teji agreed and Teji went to open the door. Just then Heer came downstairs with Aryan.

Heer (eagerly): Prem agaya kya?

Gayatri: Han agaya.

(Teji opened the ddo and greeted Prem)

Teji: Prem! Kaisa hai tu.

(Prem touched Teji's feet)

Prem: Mae bilkul thik hun aunty.

Teji: aja andar aa.

(Prem entered and Heer jumped on him)

Heer (exclaimed): Prem!

(She hugged him tightly and Prem also smilingly hugged her back and both Premeer's parents gave knowing smiles to each other while looking at them)

[Ok guys that was the 6^th chapter. Please do comments. Thank you😊]

nice work with small small details!!😊 ...wait a min..y i am getting a feelin that meher and preet is gonna be a pair too...as well as kunal will be a haddi in PREM-HEER relation😭

Originally posted by: kiran_28

Chapter-7

Aryan: Prem mamu! Dekho maine boat or aeroplane banaya.

(Prem grabbed Aryan in his hand)

Prem: Kya baat hai, mere bete ko itni achi drawing banani ati hai.

(Aryan nodded his head cutely)

Prem: To iskeliye to ek gift banta hai. Hmmm'..kya gift sien Aryan ko. Ha ek chocolate!

(Prem gave Aryan a big chocolate bar)

Aryan: Thank you mamu!

(All are admiring them in the living room)

Kulraj: Aryan chalo idhar ake baitho. Prem mamu abhi abhi office se aye haina.

(Aryan came to kulraj and sit beside her and starts eating his chocolate)

Balraj: Aur beta kam kaisa chal raha hai. Lalit ne bataya ki kaise tumne Sehgal group of industries wala project hasil kiya. I am proud of you beta.

Prem (smilingly): Thank you uncle!

Heer: Papa, Prem mujhse hi to business tips leke jata hai.

(Prem glared at Heer)

Teji: Han han ek tu hi to hai is poori duniya mein jise business chalana ata hai.

(They all laughed at Teji's joke. Just then'.)

Cheater! Cheater! Cheater! Yelled Meher.

(Preet, Meher and Kiran came in living room)

Meher: Prem bhaiya ap agaye, kaise ho ap.

(Meher asked Prem while hugging him)

Prem: Main to thik hun lekin tu bata, tu kyun chilla rahi hai.

Meher: Pata hai bhaiya, yeh jo Preet haina ek number ka cheater hai. Khud to khelna ata nahi hai chess or Kiran jiju ko age kiye ja raha hai. Chal jiju chalte hain or bazi yeh Preet le jata hai. Bar bar jiju ko bole ja raha tha ki jiju ap khelo ap mere lucky charm ho.

Preet: Arre ab jiju mere lucky charm hai to mae kya karun.

Meher: Acha to saf saf kehdo na ki tumko khelna nahi ata or sirf jiju ko hi khelne do. Tum kyun sara credit liye ja rahe ho. Cheater kahin ka huh!

Preet: Dekho Meher'''.

Kiran: Acha ab bus karo tum dono. Kitna jhagra karte ho yar.

Teji: Han Kiran bilkul thik keh raha hai. Chalo sab khana lag gaya hai, aao!

(They went to dining room)

Heer: Ma, ap baitho mae serve karti hun.

Teji: Heer tu rehne de mae karlungi.

Heer: Nahi ma ap baithiye, mae serve karungi.

(They all sat on the their chairs and Heer starts serving them. All are got busy in eating, then suddenly'..)

Ouch! Ah ma! Heer yelled in pain.

Teji (worriedly): Kya hua Heer?

(Before Teji, Prem got up and stood next to Heer taking her hand in his.)

Prem (angrily): Yeh kya kiya tumne Heer, garam- garam dal apne hath pe girali. Dekho tumhara hath kitna jal gaya hai. Kisne kaha tha tumhe serve karne ko. Chup-chap aram se baith nahi sakti thi.

Heer: Prem wo mae''

Prem (angrily): Chup! Bilkul chup! Ek shabd bhi nahi. Chup karke yahan pe baith jao, mae first aid box leke ata hun.

(All elder are admiring Prem's caring towards Heer. Prem came with first aid box and starts applying burnol on Heer's hand)

Heer: Ah'ummm''

Prem (worriedly): Dard ho raha hai, I am sorry mae' mae dhire se lagata hun.

Gayatri: Prem tu itna hyper kyun ho raha hai. Heer thik hai.

Teji: Beta tu khana khale, mae Heer ke dawai laga deti hun.

Prem: Nahi aunty, mae hi Heer ke dawai lagaounga.

Heer: Prem relax! Mamuli si hi to chot hai.

Prem (angrily): Mamuli si chot! Yeh tumhe mamuli si chot lagti hai. Heer muje haina or gussa mat dilao.

Heer: Ok ok. Acha baba, mae kuch nahi bolti. Tum lagao dawai.

Gayatri (whispering to Teji): Dekha tumne Teji. Prem ko Heer ki kitni chinta hai. Uske gusse mae bhi pyar jhalak raha hai.

Teji (whispering back to Gayatri): Han Gayatri, dono ki Jodi sach mein bohot achi hai.

(After applying burnol on heer's hand, Prem starts feeding Heer and both Premeer's parents admiring them)

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(After eating dinner, they all sat in living room. Teji brings Kheer for everyone)

Preet: Sach mein Teji aunty, aj to khane mein agaya. Kyun PB?

Prem: Han especially gobi ke paranthe. Thank you so much aunty.

Teji: Prem ab tu mere hath se maar khayega. Arre mae bhi to teri ma jaisi hun or ma ko koi thank you bolta hai kya.

Prem (catching his ears): Sorry J

Lalit: Acha bhabi ap kheer leke aai ho na. Lao lao jaldi lao.

Gayatri: Kya lao-lao? Apko koi kheer nahi milegi. Apko diabetes haina.

Lalit: Arre yeh to galat baat hai.

Teji: Arre Gayatri kyun nahi milegi bhaisab ko kheer. Unhe zaror milegi. Yeh lijiye bhaisab.

Gayatri: Lekin Teji''.

Teji: Gayatri muje pata hai ki bhaisab ko diabetes hai. Isiliye unke liye maine alag se kheer banwai hai.

Lalit: Dekha Gayatri, sikho kuch bhabi se.

Gayatri: Ap haina chup-chap apni kheer kha lijiye, warna yeh bhi nahi milegi.

(Everybody laughed)

(After sometimes Juneja family got ready to leave)

Lalit: Acha ballu, ab hum chalet hain bohot der ho gai hai.

Balraj: Yaar thori der or ruk jate.

Teji: Han thordi der or ruk jao na.

Gayatri: Nahi Teji bohot der ho gai hai. Kal sabko office bhi jana hai.

Heer: Kuldi Aryan so gaya.

Kulraj: Han, aj yeh bohot thak gaya hai, isiliye so gaya.

(Then Heer kissed on sleeping Aryan's cheeks)

Prem: Heer tum apne haath ka khayal rakhna. Kal subha hi iski dressing change kar lena. Ok.

Heer: Yes boss, or koi hokum!

Prem: Nahi bus itna karlo kafi hai.

Preet: Ok bye Heer di, bye Meher.

Heer and Meher: Bye, good night!

(Then the Juneja family left from there)

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In Juneja Mansion

Prem's room

(Prem came out of washroom wiping his face. After that stand near his window smilingly staring at moon)

Prem (to himself): I hope Heer ke hath mein ab dard nahi ho raha ho. Msg karta hun use.

(Prem took his phone and starts msging Heer)

In Heer's room

(Heer was about get in the bed. Just then'')

Bip! Bip!

Heer took her phone and saw Prem's msg.

"TUMHARA HATH KAISA HAI AB"

Heer smiled and replyed

Bip! Bip!

Prem saw Heer's reply

"HATH TO THIK HAI, BUT MAE THIK NAHI HUN"

Prem got worried

Bip! Bip!

Prem's reply: " KYUN KYA HUA, TUMHARI TABYAIT TO THIK HAINA"

Bip! Bip!

Prem read Heer's reply

"HAN MERI TABYAIT THIK HAI BUT I AM ANGRY WITH YOU"

Bip! Bip!

Prem's reply: "KYUN????"

Bip! Bip!

Heer's reply: "TUMNE MUJE SABKE SAMNE DAANTA L"

Prem smiled and Replyed

Bip! Bip!

Prem's reply: "OH TOH MADAM ISILIYE GUSSA HAI. I AM SORRY HEER. ACTUALLY TUMHARI CHOT DEKH KE, MAE BOHOT GHABRA GAYA THA. TUM JANTI HO NA MAE TUMHE TAKLEEF MAIN NAHI DEKH SAKTA"

Heer also smiled and replyed

Bip! Bip!

Heer's reply: " HAN BABA MAE JANTI HUN. MAE TOH MAZAK KAR RAHI THI. MAE TUMSE NARAZ HO SAKTI HUN KYA"

Bip! Bip!

Prem's reply: " I KNOW"

Bip! Bip!

Heer's reply: "When an angel came to me he asked: 'what is your wish for tonight?' I said: 'Please take care of the person who's reading this msg'. Good night!"

(After reading Heer's msg Prem smiled and replyed to Heer)

Bip! Bip!

Prem's reply: "My day may be hectic. My schedule may be tight. But I would never let the day end without saying Good night. Sweet dreams!"

(Then both Premeer went to sleep with cute smile on their lips)

 

 

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the ending was awesome the good night messages idea!!..it could be seen in our daily lives!!👏 that touch of reality increased the cuteness of ff and gives credibilty hon. 😃...and oh so cute the reaction of prem when heer was minorly hurt!😍 isi ada pe tho hum marthein prem juneja ji😍❤️

Originally posted by: kiran_28

Chapter-8

In Juneja Mansion

(Prem came downstairs and he saw his parents are looking some photographs)

Prem: Good morning maa, Good morning bauji!

(He touch their feet)

Lalit and Gayatri: Good morning beta!

Prem: Maa yeh kiski photographs dekh rahe hain ap log?

Gayatri: Arre beta yeh photographs kuch lardkon ki hai. Panditji deke gaye hain.

Prem (confusingly): Kyun?????

Lalit: Rishtey ke liye!

Prem: Rishtey ke liye? Lekin bauji humare ghar pe to koi lardki kuwari nahi hai. To phir????

Gayatri: Arre humare ghar mein nahi hai lekin Maan family mein to haina 'Heer'.

Prem (shocked): Kya Heer! Ap log Heer ke liye rishta dhond rahe hain?

Lalit (smirked): Han Teji bhabi ne hum pe yeh zimedari saunpi hai ki hum Heer ke liye lardka dhonden. Lekin tu itna heran kyun ho raha hai.

Prem: umm'mmm nahi bauji, mae to bus aise hi''.

Gayatri: Oh acha. Acha yeh dekh, muje or tere bauji ko to yeh lardka pasand hai Heer ke liye. Tub hi dekh ke bata ki kaisa hai.

(Prem took that pic in his hand)

Prem: Maa yeh lardka???

Gayatri: Han acha haina?

Prem: Maa, iski naak thordi si tedi nahi hai?

Gayatri: Kya! Dekhon to!

(Gayatri took that pic back from him)

Gayatri: Nahi Prem! Iski naak to bilkul thik hai.

Prem: Nahi maa, is lardke ki Jodi Heer ke saath nahi jachegi.

Lalit: Thik hai, phir tu hi in lardko mein se Heer ke liye ek lardka pasand kar. Afterall teri or Heer ki pasand bhi to same hi hai.

(Prem unknowingly becomes uncomfortable and he took all the pictures and starts comparing each guy with himself)

Prem (frustrately): Nahi! In mein se koi bhi lardka acha nahi hai.

Gayatri: Lekin beta''

Prem: Maa muje office ke liye der ho rahi hai, mae office ja raha hun.

Gayatri: Arre lekin beta nashta?

Prem: Nahi maa ab muje bhook nahi hai.

(Then Prem left from there and both Lalit and Gayatri starts laughing)

Lalit: Gayatri kahin se jalne ki bo arahi hai!

Gayatri: Ab aag lagi hai to jalne ki bo to ayegi hi na!

(Then again both started laughing)

(Here our jealous Prem is in big confusion, driving to office)

Prem (to himself): Yeh muje kya ho raha hai. Heer ki shadi ki baat sun ke mujhe itni takleef kyun ho rahi hai. Balki muje to khush hona chahiye ki meri best friend ki shadi ho rahi hai. Phir muje itna bura kyun lag raha hai.

(Prem reached office. Everyone was greating him Good morning. After having a warm welcome by hi staff, he quitely went to his cabin and sat on his chair. He took his phone in his hand and starts stairing at Heer's pic and starts talking with her pic)

Prem (to Heer's pic): Heer tum chinta mat karo. Tumhare liye lardka mae dhondunga. Ek aisa lardka jo tumhe apni palkon pe bitha ke rakhe, jo duniya ki sari khushiyan tumhare kadmo mein lake rakh de, jo tumhari ankhon mein kabhi ansoon na ane de, jo tumhe bohot pyar kare.

"TUJHSE ZYADA PYAR HEER KO AUR KOI NAHI KAR SAKTA PREM"

(Prem turned and saw Kunal at the door)

Prem: Kunal, tu kab aya?

Kunal: Tab jab tu Heer ki pic se baatien kar raha tha. Yeh tu kya kar raha hai Prem?

Prem: Maine kya kiya?

Kunal: Tu khud hi apni Heer kisi or ko saunp dega.

Prem: Kunal tu kya keh raha hai muje kuch samaj nahi araha.

Kunal: Tujhe kuch samaj nahi araha ya tu kuch samajhna hi nahi chahta ki tu Heer se pyar karta hai.

(Prem become shocked)

Prem: Kunal, yeh tu kya bakwas kar raha hai?

Kunal: Bakwas nahi kar raha hun, sach bol raha hun. Ek aisa sach jo sab jante hain siwaye tere or Heer ke.

Prem: Kunal tu pagal ho gaya hai kya. Mae Heer se pyar nahi karta.

Kunal: Acha tu Heer se pyar nahi karta? To phir tujhe kyun itni takleef hoti hai agar Heer ko chot lagti hai? Heer ki ankhon mein ansoon kyun nahi bardash hota tujhse? Kyun????

Prem (angrily): Kunal! Muje Heer ki chinta hai kyun Heer meri bachpan ki dost hai. Bachpan se janta hun use. Damit! I care for her.

Kunal: Yeh sirf dil ko tasalli dene wali baat hai Prem. Sach to yehi hai ki tum dono ek dosre se bohot pyar karte ho. You guys are meant for each other. Aur yeh baat tu jitni jaldi samaj jayena utna hi acha hai, kahin aisa na ho ki bohot der ho jaye. Anyways mae tujhe yahan apni birthday party mein invite karne aya tha.

Prem: I am sorry Kunal, mae tujh pe chilana nahi chahta tha. But jaisa tu soch raha haina, waisa kuch bhi nahi hai bhai.

Kunal: Its ok Prem. Mae chahe tujhe jitna bhi samjha lun, par tu nahi samjhega. Sahi waqt ane pe samjhega. Khair chord, kal time pe party pe pohonch jayiyo Heer ko leke. Samjha Late mat kariyo.

Prem (smilingly): Han han hum time pe pohoch jayege.

Kunal: Chal thik hai, ab mae chalta hun baki logo ko bhi invitation dena hai. Mae Heer ke ghar gaya tha but wo ghar pe nahi thi lekin maine Teji aunty ko bol diya tha. Ok ab mae chalta hun Bye!

Prem: Bye!

(Kunal left from there and Prem starts thinking about what Kunal said while stairing at Heer's pic confusingly)

 

[Guys this was the 8^th chapter. Please do comment how was it. Thank you😊]

i loved it dear!! i can clearly  see how prem would have shouted on kunal..how he would have negated kunal's truth talk!!..i can see his confusion!

Originally posted by: kiran_28

Chapter-9

In the caf

(Heer was sitting on the table, waiting for Sanjana. Soon Sanjana arrived)

Sanjana: Sorry! Sorry! Mae late ho gai actually traffic itna tha ki mae late ho gai. Sorry!

Heer: Its ok Sanju. Ab bata, aisi kya baat ho gai thi ki tune muje urgently bulaya yahan pe. Kya baat karni thi tujhe?

Sanjana: Arre ruk na saans to lene de. Tune kuch order kiya kya?

Heer: Stop it Sanju! Ab bata kya baat hai.

Sanjana (nervously): umm'Heer actually'.umm'wo mae na'umm

Heer: Han bol na kya baat hai.

Sanjana: Heer ummm'.wo actually I like someone'no no no I love someone.

Heer (excitedly): Kya? Kab? Kaise? Kon hai wo?

Sanjana: Umm tu usse janti hai. Wo humare hi friend circle main se hain.

Heer (thinkingly): humare friend circle se? Hmm kon ho sakta hai.

Sanjana: Soch na tu.

Heer: Noway Kunal!!!!!!!

(Sanjana hit on Heer's arm)

Sanjana: Arre nahi!!! Pagal hai. Wo Kunal nahi hai.

Heer (confusingly): To phir aur kon hai.

Sanjana: Arre tu guess to kar na!

Heer: Sanju please yar bata na kon hai wo.

Sanjana (blushingly): Wo lardka jisse mae pyar karti hun,wo Prem hai.

(Heer become shocked)

Heer (shockingly): Kya Prem!!!!!

Sanjana: Heer mae Prem se bohot pyar karti hun. Tu please meri help karna yar.

Heer (nervously): Kya''help? Mae kya kar sakti hun?

Sanjana: Tu to Prem ki best friend haina. Tujhe kya lagta hai kya Prem bhi mere liye waisa hi feel karta hoga jaisa mae uske liye karti hun. Ha bata na kya mae usse apne dil ki baat bata dun?                                                                                                                    

Heer! Heer!

(Heer came out of her thought)

Sanjana: Heer kahan kho gai thi tu? Bata na kya mae Prem ko bata dun ki mae usse pyar karti hun.

Heer (uncomfortably): Ummm han'''han Sanju, tujhe apni dil ki baat Prem ko bata deni chahiye.

Sanjana (excitedly): Sachi! To phir thik hai, kal Kunal ki birthday party hai or kal party main hi mae Prem ko apni dil ki baat bata dungi.

Wow! I am so excited! Ok Heer ab muje jana hai or kal ke liye taiyari bhi karni hai. Bye Thank you so much Heer, love you.

(Sanjana excitedly left and Heer was silently sitting there with sad face)

In Maan Villa

(Door bell rang. Teji opened the door and Prem entered)

Teji: Arre Prem kaisa hai tu?

(Prem touch Teji's feet)

Prem: Mae thik hun aunty. Ap kaise ho?

Teji: Mae to thik hun lekin pehle ty bata tu kyun Heer se lardta rehta hai huh!

(Teji asked Prem while catching his ears)

Prem: Ah'aunty maine kuch nhi kiya. Meri Heer se aj koi lardai nahi hui.

Teji: Acha! Tu phir Heer itni udas kyun hai?

Prem: Heer udas hai?

Teji: Han. Abhi thordi der pehle bahar gai thi. Jab se aai hai tab se bilkul chup-chap hai. Muje laga ki shayad tujhse lardai hui hai isiliye udas hai wo.

Prem: Nahi aunty, meri aj Heer se koi lardai nahi hai. Balki meri to aj subha hi usse baat hui thi. Usi ne mujhe yahan bulaya hai. Actually kal Kunal ka birthday haina to usi ke liye gift kharedne jane wale the hum dono. Or mae usse yahan lene hi aya hun.

Teji: Acha! To phir kya baat ho sakti hai?

Prem: Aunty mae jaake usse baat karta hun.

Teji: Han ja. Bus tu hi to ek hai jisse wo apni sari problem share karti hai. Tu ja uske paas.

Prem: Ji aunty!

(Then Prem goes to Heer's room)

In Heer's Room

(Heer was standing near window thinking about the conversation that she had with Sanjana just few hours ago.)

Just then

BHOOO!!!!!!

(Heer got scared and Prem starts laughing)

Heer (irritately): Prem pagal ho gaye ho kya tum. Tumne meri jaan nikaldi thi stupid!

Prem (laughingly): Hahahahaah tumhara chehra dekhne layak tha hahahaha!

(Heer starts crying and hitting Prem)

Prem (laughingly): Ah'.. sorry sorry!

(Prem notice that Heer is crying and become worried)

Prem (worriedly): Heer kya hua? Tum ro kyun rahi ho?

(Prem asked cupping her face)

Heer (wiping her tears): Kuch nahi, mae thik hun.

Prem: Nahi kuch to hua hai. Maine aise tumhe bohot bar daraya hai, pehle to tumne aise kabhi react nahi kiya. Kya baat hai? Apne Prem ko nahi bataogi? Hmmm?

Heer: Nahi Prem aisi koi baat nahi hai, bus sar mein thorda dard ho raha hai.

Prem: Acha to chalo hum bahar chalte hai. Tumhara mood bhi thik ho jayega. Or phir Kunal ke liye gift bhi to kharidna hai. Chale?

(Heer nodded her head and Prem wipe her tears. Then they left for mall)

At Shopping Mall

Prem: Heer tum batao na hum Kunal ke liye kya gift khareden?

(Heer was lost in her thoughts)

Prem: Heer! Heer!

(Prem snap his fingures in front of Heer's face)

Heer: Han''kya Prem!

Prem: Wohi to mae janna chahta hun Heer, ki tum kya soch rahi ho. Please Heer, muje batao ki kya baat hai. Heer agar tum pareshan hoti hona, to phir mujhe bhi chain nahi milta. Kya hua? Batao.

Heer: Wo Prem aj mae caf mein'''

(But she was interrupted by Prem's phone)

Heer: Tum pehle phone pe baat karlo.

(Prem nodded and answer his call. It was Sanjana)

Prem: Han Sanju!

(After hearing Sanjana's name Heer become alert and again saddness took over in her heart)

Sanjana: Prem kaise ho? Maine tumhe disturb to nahi kiya na?

Prem: arre nahi actually mae Heer ke sath mall aya tha, Kunal ke liye birthday gift kharedne ke liye.

Sanjana: Oh acha! Maine to bus aise hi call kiya tha. Kafi din hogaye the na tumse baat nahi hui thi.

Prem (teasingly): acha muje miss kar rahi thi.

(Hearing this Heer become more sad and uncomfortable)

Sanjana (blushingly): Han aisa hi samajlo. Ok phir kal milte hain. Tum aaogena?

Prem: Han ofcourse! Kunal ki party mein na aake uske haathon marna thordina hai.

(Both Prem and Sanjana starts laughing and Heer become more curious)

Sanjana: Thik hai to phir kal milte hain. Bye!

Prem: Ok bye!

(They disconnect their call and Prem turn towards Heer. Heer was lost in her thoughts)

Prem: o meri chater-pater, phir se kahan kho gai?

Heer: kahin nahi!

Prem: Ab batao kya baat hai.

Heer: Nahi Prem koi baat nahi hai. Sach mein!

Prem: Thik hain Heer agar tum nahi batana chahati to thik hai. Lekin agar tumhe mujhse kuch share karna ho then I am always there for you!

(Heer nodded her head)

Heer (smilingly): I know!

Prem: Ab chale?

Heer:Han chalo!

Prem: First ofall smile! C'mon smile! Smile!

(Heer smiled)

Prem: That's like my girl! Ab chalo!

(Then they bought gift for Kunal and Prem droped Heer home)

 

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Originally posted by: kiran_28

Chapter-10

(Meher and Preet both are sitting in Kunal's house waiting for Kunal to come downstairs)

Meher: Preet, what do you think Kunal bhaiya ne achanak hume yahan kyun bulaya hoga.

Preet: Pata nahi Meher, ab to Kunal bhai hi ake hi batayenge.

(Soon Kunal came downstair)

Preet: Chalo finally apke darshan to hue.

Meher: Han Kunal bhaiya kahan the ap hum kab se apka wait kar rahe hain. Apne hume yahan kyun bulaya hai?

(Kunal in very serious mood)

Kunal: Preet, Meher muje tum dono se bohot zarori baat karni hai.

Preet: Kya baat hai bhai, ap itne serious mood mein.Anything serious?

Kunal: Han Preet baat bohot hi serious hai. Muje tum dono se Prem or Heer ke baare mein baat karni hai.

Preet (confusingly): PB or Heer di ke baare mein?

Meher: Un dono ke beech mein phir se koi jhagra hua kya?

Kunal: Nahi Meher, un dono ke beech mein koi jhagra nahi hua.

Meher: To phir kya baat hai Kunal bhai?

Kunal: Prem or Heer ke baare mein tum dono ka kya khayal hai?

Preet (confusingly): Matlab????

Kunal: Matlab ki Preet agar Heer teri bhabi or Meher Prem tere jiju ban jaye to?

(Both Preet and Meher looked at Kunal shockingly)

Meher: Kunal bhai yeh ap kya keh rahe ho?

Kunal: Tumhe nahi lagta ki Prem or Heer ek dosre se pyar karte hain lekin abhi tak yeh baa two dono samaj nahi paye hain.

Preet: Han Kunal bhai, ap thik keh rahe ho. PB or Heer di ek doosre se bohot pyar karte hain lekin abhi tak samaj nahi paye hain. Apko pata hai bhai jab hum log Maan Villa gaye the na dinner pe to Heer di sabko daal serve kar rahi thi or galti se unhone garam daal apne haath pe girali thi.

Meher: Han or unki chinkh sunke Prem bhai ne to poora ghar sar pe utha liya tha.

Kunal: Prem Heer se kitna pyar karta hai ki uski choti si takleef bhi Prem se bardash nahi hoti hai. Par pata nahi kyun yeh dono kyun nahi samajte yeh baat. Kahin aisa na ho ki bohot der ho jaye.

Preet: To phir hume hi kuch karna chahiye, un dono ko pyar ka ehsaas dilwana chahiye.

Kunal: Isiliye to tum dono ko yahan pe bulaya hai taki hum teeno milke Prem or Heer ko yeh ehsaas dilwa sake ki wo dono ek doosre se kitna pyar karte hain.

Meher (excitedly): Wow! This sounds so interesting!!!!!

Kunal: To kal ki party se hum apna mission 'Prem or Heer' shuru karenge.

Preet: Ok so done!!!!!

Kunal and Meher: Done!!!!!

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Next day at Kunal's house

(The party was going on and Kunal was welcoming the guests and he was greeted 'Happy Birthday' by them. Soon Sanjana arrived.)

Sanjana: Hi Kunal, Happy Birthday!!!!

Kunal: Thank you so much Sanju.

Sanjana: Kunal Prem nahi aya abhi tak?

(Kunal looked suspiciously at sanjana. By seeing Kunal's look'.)

Sanjana: Ummm'. I mean Prem or Heer abhi tak nahi aye?

Kunal: Nahi abhi tak to nahi aye, lekin ate hi honge, tum chalo andar. Make yourself comfortable.

(Sanjana nodded and went inside. Soon Prem, Heer, Meher and Preet arrived. All of them hugged Kunal and wished him Happy Birthday)

Kunal: Arre bhae sirf wish karne se kaam nahi chalega. Kuch gift-shift laye ho ki nahi.

(Prem winked at Heer and she smiled naughtily)

Prem: Oh shit! Heer hum gift to ghar pe hi bhul gaye.

Heer: Arre han Prem, jaldi-jaldi mein to gift lana hi bhul gaye.

Kunal (shockingly): KYA!!!!!!! Tum log mera gift bhul gaye. Arre yeh kya baat hui. Aise thordi na hota hai. Yeh to galat baat hai. Nahi nahi this is absolutely wrong. Yeh to bohot hi galat baat hai. Tum log mera gift aise kaise ghar pe bhul sakte ho. Aise thordi na hota hai'''''''''

(Kunal kept on blabbering and Prem, Heer, Meher and Preet started laughing at Kunal's hilarious reaction)

Kunal: Arre ek to tum log mera gift ghar pe bhul gaye ho or upar se has rahe ho. This is not fair!!!!!!!!!

Preet: Kunal bhai relax apka gift car mein hai mae abhi leke ata hun.

(Preet left from there to bring Kunal's gift from the car)

Heer (laughingly): Kunal tub hi na sach mein nautanki hai. Itna barda ho gaya hai lekin aj bhi bacho ki tarha gift ke liye rota hai hahahhahah

 

Prem: Heer jis din Kunal mature ho gaya na us din kayamath ajayegi.  

Kunal: hahahah very funny!!!!!!!!

(Meher saw her friend Tanisha)

Meher: Di, mae Tanisha ke paas ja rahi hun ok.

(Heer smilingly nodded her head)

Heer: Kunal Misha or Ash nahi aye abhi tak?

Kunal: arre kabke agaye hai wo log. Aur ate hi meri jaan khana shuru kar diya un dono ne ki 'Kunal please hume tum apne kisi hot friend se mila do na, please'.

Finally ab wo dono Manmeet or Kabeer ke sath busy hai.

(Both Prem and Heer starts laughing and then Sanjana came there)

Sanjana: Hi Heer, hi Prem!

(Seeing Sanjana Heer's smile vanished which didn't go unnoticed by Kunal)

Heer (uncomfortably): Hi Sanju!

Prem (smiling widely): Hi Sanju! Kaisi ho?

Sanjana (blushingly): Mae thik hun Prem tum kaise ho?

(Both Prem and Sanjana starts talking. Seeing them talking Heer becomes sad and Kunal was observing Heer's expression)

 

[That was the 10^th chapter guys😊. Sorry for the delay, actually I was busy with my college admission]

 

 

i wanna know how would have Prem looked saying shit😆..good development in charechters