||FF- Pyar Ka Asar||Ch-1 to Ch-34||CLOSED!!! - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: snehasharma

liked de intro part , plse add me , thanks

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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
awesome👏 nice onee  Kiran
intersting Please update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
looking forward to prem and preet's entry
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24

CHAPTER-2



In Juneja Mansion

(Kulraj with a glass of milk in her hand running here and there in the house and she is yelling)

Kulraj: Aryan dekho ab jaldi se dood pelo warna mama bohot gussa karegi.

(Kulraj said to his little monster Aryan who is running around the house because he don't want to drink that horrible milk)

Kulraj: Beta ab ap muma ko aur kitni exercise karwaoge. Please beta ab muma thak gai hai, dood pelo (she said exhaustly)

(Just then Gayatri entered and grabbed Aryan in her hand.)

Gayatri (smilingly): hmm bohot shararti ho gaya hai hai mera bacha.

(Gayatri kissed Aryan on his cheek and Aryan laughed)

Gayatri: Mama ko pareshan karna acha lagta hai apko?hmm?

(Aryan cutely nodded his head and Gayatri laughed)

Kulraj: Dekho na ma apka ladla dood nahi pee raha hai ulta meri pared lagwa raha hai.

Gayatri: Aryan beta galat baat. Muma ko aise pareshan nahi karte. Ap nani muma ke good boy ho na?

Aryan: Yes nani muma!

Gayatri: To phir  jaldi se dood peelo.

(Aryan took the glass from Kulraj's hand and drank his milk)

Gayatri: Good boy!

(Aryan smiled and ranned inside)

Kulraj: Thank you so much ma warna Aryan ke peeche bhagte bhagte mera sara wait aj hi kum ho jata.

(Kulraj and Gayatri both laughed. Just then Preet comes down from the stairs. He greeted his mother and sister)

Preet: Good Morning mom, Good Morning Kuldi.

Gayatri: Good Morning beta aj itni jaldi kaise uthe gaya tu.

Kulraj: Arre ma apko nahi pata ajkal humara Preet jaldi uthne laga hai aur jaldi uth ke pardai bhi karta hai. Pata hai ma aj subha jab mae iske room mein gai thi na to yeh pardai kar raha tha. I was really shocked ma.

Gayatri: Hayee kitna samajdar ho gaya hai mera beta.

(She said while kissing on his forehead)

Kulraj: Preet bata na achanak yeh badlaw kaise (asking him teasingly)

Preet: Kuldi zyada shocked  hone ki zarurat nahi hai. Yeh sab to isiliye ho raha hai kyunki us Meher ki bachi se maine shart lagai hai ki is bar mae apne semesters mein usse zyada marks leke aounga. And you know that I can't lose my bet.

(Just then Lalit entered)

Lalit: Chalo shukar hai Meher ki waje se hi sahi kum se kum ye nalayak ne pardna to shuru kiya.

(Lalit said while hitting on Preet's head)

Preet: Yeh lo eid ka chand nikal aya subha subha.

(Preet said while combing his hair with his fingers. And Lalit started chasing him)

Lalit: Kya kaha tune! Gayatri mae keh raha hun yeh mera lardka ho hi nahi sakta, yeh hospital mae badal gaya hai.

Gayatri: Ap shant ho jaiye. Jnae dijiye bacha hai.

Lalit: Bacha hai! Nahi Gayatri bacha nahi baap hai yeh mera. Ek yeh nalayak hai or ek mera Prem hai (said proudly). Kitna zimedar hai wo.

Preet: Aur honge kyun nahi dad afterall PB kiske hai (said while raising his collar)

Lalit: Tu chup kar. Kitni bar kaha hai kuch sikh apne bhai se, par nahi tu to nalayak ka nalayak hi rahega.

Preet: Dad ab unfortunetly apka beta hun to apki kuch khubiyan to aayegina mere andar.

(Lalit again started chasing him)

Lalit: Mae aj tujhe chorunda nahi.

Kulraj: Bauji'Bauji choriye na jane dijiye. Ap aaiye nashta kar lijiye, apko phir office bhi to jana hai, chaliye.

(She said while dragging Lalit to the breakfast table)

Preet: Ok mom, muje bhi college ke liye late ho raha hai. Mae bhi chalta hun bye.

Gayatri: Arre lekin nashta to karte ja.

Preet: No mom mae bahar hi kuch kha lunga aur waise bhi eid ka chand ki waje se mae pehle ho bohot late  ho gaya hun, bye mom.

(Lalit glared him angerily and preet left for college)



Precap- premeer's enty😉

 

[Ok guys that was the second update''. Please do leave your comments]😛

 



Edited by kiran_28 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
nice update
pls show prem and heer entry can't wait ...
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soonnn
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
aww so sweet
loved it.
Everyone is so nice.
As usual nice family.
So atlast premeer entry in next chap.
great.waiting for premeer entry.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
awesome update ...
eagerly waiting for premeer's entry ...
thanks for the pm ...
please update soon ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
good goin girl👏

loved the update...loved preet n lalit nautankiii😆

waiting for premeer's entry😳


update soonnn

thanks for the PM😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
omggeee kiran u started a new story!!! now i will demand for updates!@!!!
yippe!!! and yeah add me to the pm list please!!!
and an awesome story!!! love it.,. dear...
waiting for the next part
love ya loads.. keep smiling,..
love u..
vrushika!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: seema.sharma86

nice update
pls show prem and heer entry can't wait ...
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soonnn

thnk u so much. I will try to update soon