FF : What I want..(updted) ch 4 pg 9 - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
okay i "think" i may upodate anytime tomorrow.. actually am wrking ryt now.. if i cmplete within 2 and yet nt feel sleepy then i myt update tonight itself.. otherwise tomorrow...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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AWESOME!!! Loved this part and thsi new concept.. really cant wait to see what happenes next!! Update soon dear please :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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chapter- 4


Uday ye tumhara koi nayi plan hain kya?- asked jai, her fingers playing with uday's hair...
uday- nhi. .. to.. kaunsa plan?
jai- yehi us manyata ko itna zyaada importance dena.. usse itni acchi tarah se baat karna...
uday smiled-are u jealous?
jai- main aur jealous? wo bhi us char din ki ladki se? huh..!!
uday- kyun? manyata koi aisi waisi ladki nhi hain.. usmein bht potential hain.. shayad tumse bhi zyaada..
jai- accha? to aab tum hume hamari potential samjhaoge huh uday? she turned his face towards her and said in a beautifully soft sing song voice..- kya tumhe nhi pata ki hum mein kitni potential hain?
uday- oh c'mon jai.. abhi hamara mood nhi hain.. tum ek kam karo.. raj ko hamare paas bhej do.. hume usse kuch baatein karni hain...
jai()a lil disappointed)- okay... bye uday... she closed the door behind her..
uday smiled to himself at her departure- bechari... bht jaldi iska dil bhi tootnewala hain... oh why am i such an evil guy? !! he clicked his tongue sympathetically...



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manyata had locked herself up in her home for the last two days.. the protest was being carried out without her.. some other people,her frnds were leading it as they assumed that manyata was nt well.. wen asked abt what happened at udayveer' place,she gave a vague answer even to the press.. they wanted to know more off course bt she gave the excuse of her illness and shut herself up in her room.. even wen akash came to meet her she did nt see him...

Uday's words were playing her mind.. she cud nt build the strength to shed away her fears.. she was too young to do that almost immediately.. she even thot of quittig.. bt her conscience stopped her.. she thot to herself- kya uiday sachmein aisa kar sakta hain? kya.wo.. kahin wo.. hamare saath..!! her fears took the worst shape in her mind.. she knew that there was nobody to help her in this matter.. noone cn stand against udayveer.. he was too powerful.. her backbone seemed to break.. she cud nt gain her previous courage.. the media people were saying it all aloud..:

" aisa kya ho gaya mahal mein ki manyata itni bimaar pad gayi..? wo kisise milna nhi chahti.. baat tak nhi karna chahti..? udayveer singh ne kya kiya? hum bas andaza laga sakte hain kyuki jabtak manyata apna zuban nhi kholti hume kuch bhi parta nhi chalega.. kya unhone ne bhi andolon chodne ka faisla kar liya hain? kya udayveer singh ki sacchai aam logon ke saamne kabhi nhi ayegi?... etc etc"

uday was really happy to see the news.. he said to raj- are yar..hum to samajhte the ki ladki bht bahadur hain.. lekin ye to darpok nikli.. kya manyata yar tum ek hi mulaqat mein itna ghabra gayi? chee chee.. i dint expect THIS frm u.. akhir tumse ladne mein hume maza to bht aa raha tha...

a knock on the door made him turn.. it was a servant..
servant- sir koi aapse milne aayi hain...
udayveer- aaYI hain? koi madam hain kya?
the servant- haan sir.. woh us din jo madam ayi thi wohi...
uday sprang up- kya manyata ayi hain? aye use bahar kyun rakkha tumne? andar le aao.. unhe hall mein bithao hum abhi aa rahe hain...
the servant nodded and left..
uday felt really excited- to manyata ji.. lagta hain aap har manne walon mein se nhi hain.. dekhte hain.. aab aapko kya kehna hain... he smiled to himself...

wen uday came to the hall,he saw manyata sitting quietly on the sofa.. she stood up seeing him...- heloo..!!
udayveer- helloo.. kya baat hain? tum aise hi bina appointment ke chali aayi?ha ha mazak kar raha hu.. tumhare liye hamare darwaze hamesha khuli hain/.. he winked at her- oh am soo bad on these romantic dialogues..

manyata's jaw tightened.

uday- are baitho na.. kahdi kyun ho.. ise apna hi ghar samjho...
manyata sat down quietly.. followed by udayveer...
uday- aab batao.. kya kehna chahti ho.. i mean koi gali wali dene ayi ho kya?
manyata- nhi udayveer ji.. hum aapko gali kaise de sakte hain? aap itne bade admi hain.. hamari kya majal hain aapke samne?
uday- baat to bilkul sahi kahi tumne.. lekin fir hume to ye samajh mein nhi aa rahi hain ki tum yahan kye kehne ayi ho humse?
manyata- kuch nhi sir... bas apke us din ki baaton ko lekar aapse kuch kehna tha...
uday- bolo..
manyata- dekhiye sir.. hum apke khilaf jo kuch bhi kar rahe the .. uski wajah kuch aur hi tha...
uday- hmm.. aab aya na uut pahar ke niche.. bolo kitne paise chahiye?
manyata- nhi sir.. aap galat ho.. hum paison ki wajah se ye sab nhi kar rahe the.. hume ... wo actually.. hume...
uday- are batao bhi aab.. kya chahiye tumhe?
manyata looked at him straight in the eyes and said- hume aapki kursi chahiye sir...!!
uday felt as if someone has just stabbed him...



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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
wonderful update kasturika,
please next time do a long update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
Nice update!! Do continue soon!!:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
Loved it. But it was short 😔
Oh well it's okay because it was awesome 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
awesome update...👏
after reading the last line i was like WHAT???😲
ur FF is soo interesting i love it aloot plz update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
Nice one.cont soon n thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59

thank u for the pm...
loved the update... cont soon...
Posted: 12 years ago
#60
thanks kashu for the pm next time pls jaldi update kARNA N LONG UPDATE BHI KARNA
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