COZ V R MNT 2 BE...(KRIYAANSH FF)..Chpter 2..PG 10 - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
awsum concept...pls cntinue

ps: i dint comment on ur other ff coz of xam i hope u understand n i cn't comment till 10 may
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
nice concept...continue it!n thanx 4 da pm!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
i lyk d cncpt,,,,,thnkx 4pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
Chapter 1
Hey guys herez d 1st chpter'hope u al lyk it...

N note al d jodis xcpt kriyansh r a couple...n alsorinni is reyamz assistnt...

At d mumbai airport a girl wid her arms open feels d fresh air n says..."wow ds iz sooo gud'feels great 2 be back..."(ds grl is none oder dan our dear kriya ghai'😳)

Sayin ds she start wlking 2 her ryt 2 gt a cab 4 hrslf'bt on her ways she dashes a guy who hd a cofee in hs hand wch got droped(no prizes 4 guesng who it iz'.😉)

K:sorry sorry m rly sorry'..

Rey:WTH...andhi ho kya...cnt u c n wlk...idiot fool...(aND he strts wlkin away'kriya gts vry angry n follows hm n catching hold of hs shoulder she makes hm turn')

K:(shouts..)who d hel do u thnk u are...chilla toh aise rhe the jaise wo is duniya ki akhri coffe thi...n uske baad cofee ki ek boond bhi nai milne wali tume...n tum mje kya andhi bol rhe ho...u r blind n saath me gawar bhi...wo tumhare peechey hai na use cafeteria bolte hai'u gt coffe der...jake odr karoge toh mil jayega...ful stock me pada hai waha pr coffee...n agr paise nai hai na doosri cofee kharidne k liye den temme il pay...

R:lstn u me tum jaisi ldkiyo ko achi tarah se jaanta hun...u jst w8 4 a chnce 2 cum close 2 a guy'

K:shtup u'frstly me aisi ldki nai hun n agr hoti bhi na toh tumhare peechey apna tym wste nai krti'n secondly tum kya apne aap ko kahi ka prince chrmng smajte ho...handsome ka h bhi nai hai tum me...

R:yea ryt h nai h..a..n..d..s..o...m...e...sb hai mjme'

K:hahaha..(givin a sarcstic smile..)jis din tum handsome ho jaoge na us din earth revolve krna band krdegi...

R:wel in dat case zara space me jakr dekh lo...earth mst hav stoped revolvng by nw...

K:wake up dude...oh sry nt dude'gawar' cum out of ur dreams'

R:m nt dreaming gawarin...u r..poochlo yaha pr kisi ko bhi..

K:wel zarurat nai hai kyuki yeh sab'..(whyl sayin 'yeh sab' she luks 2 hr ryt n is shocked 2 c evry1 staring at both of dem'she is embarsed n strts lukin here n der')

R:(as she stops sudnly rey also luks in d sme dirctn n realises dey wer too loud' he shouts at dem..)wat koi free entrtainmnt chal rha hai yaha...'go away'

K:(in a low tone..2 rey..wid an irrit8ed luk..)unhe kya chilla rhe ho..tum jaisa joker khada hoga toh log dekhenge hi na'tumhe adat hogi in sb ki..mje nai hai..apne saath saath mera bhi mazak bana diya..stndardless gawar'

R:shutup..mje nai hai in sbki adat...'nakchadi gawarin'

K:watevr..(n dey move in opp dirctn'kriya goes straight..sits in d cab n leaves d place...'4 rey a car has been sent d driver cums n tkes hs luggage...'he cals swayam')

Sw:hi rey u rched car mila na'

R:yea I got d car...m cumin 2 d office drctly'2nd model k baarey me baat krni hai'

Sw:yea fyn cum soon'

(rey reches d office evry 1 vry happy 2 c hm dey hug hm n welcum hm...swayam n rey den go 2 reyamz cabin'...pls note both hav d sme cabin big enuf as if 2 cabins r combined in2 1')

Sw:yaar rey 2nd model ka kya kre...humare earlier models ka contract khatam ho gaya hai..n I dnt wanna resign dem kch khaas nai hai wo'ny idea wt 2 do'

R:yep...'tune kriya ghai ka naam toh suna hoga na...shez in mumbai'use sign kr..

Sw:wel theekey'...bt wo manegi'

R:ofcourse'...dazlers poorey wrld me famous hai'n being a part of it'it's a grt thng'...tu pooch toh sahi use'

Sw:rey bt agr tu sydlyn ho gaya toh'...

R:dude me n u'v r d boss here'hume koi sydlyn nai kr skta'

Sw:vry true'(he cals rinni thru d intrcome')

Ri:swayam cn I cum in'

R:chalo acha hai sir bula ne ki adat toh choot gayi tumhari'

(rinni smiles')

Sw:acha suno kriya ghai ko contact karo'...she is in mumbai..ofer hr 2 be our 2nd model'...n if she agrees ask her 2 cum n meet us'...2day 5pm'

Ri:ohk fyn il do dat'...rey shud I get smthng 4 u'tired lag rhe ho..

R:no itz k..me nywayz ghr jaa rha hun frsh hone'

Ri:ohk..

(n she leaves')

R:chal bhai il cum back by 4..

Sw:ohk fyn'

(he leaves n in d lft tlks 2 hmslf')

R:so finly kriya ghai..hum saath kaam krne wale hai'...gt ready 4 d new experience'

So here it is...hope u lyked it...

sry itz short bt isse zyada ud8 krti toh maza nai ata...😊
Pls giv ur valuable comnts'n hit d lyk button 4 pms'😊

nxt upd8 vl tke sme tym as i need do 1st ud8e d nxt chpter of my oder ff😊

Edited by mishtika_diva - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
Great start loved da fight
Dey r so cute
Thnx 4 da pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
rey didn't recognize kriya...!!!!!!!!!!!😲

ab toh gaye donon...

fullon rey is get sidelined as kriya se panga liya😆

waiting for next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
chilla toh aise rhe the jaise wo is duniya ki akhri coffe thi...n uske baad cofee ki ek boond bhi nai milne wali tume...n tum mje kya andhi bol rhe ho...u r blind n saath me gawar bhi...wo tumhare peechey hai na use cafeteria bolte hai'u gt coffe der...jake odr karoge toh mil jayega...ful stock me pada hai waha pr coffee...n agr paise nai hai na doosri cofee kharidne k liye den temme il pay...

hahaha...that was too rude 😆😆😆

nice update 👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
Amazing one😊
thanx for d pm😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
Nice part...
Fighting scene was amazing..lovd it
thanx 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
Awesome...loved kriyansh's cute fight...eagerly waiting for the next part

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