ManVeer SS: Fallen Angel - Chapter 21 - pg. 145 - Page 61

Originally posted by: udaymanyata07

👏👏thanks...well done...fabulous...superb...👏👏

Originally posted by: xxDaydreameRxx

Sshhh Shana! your exposing me in front of everyone..God you know me so well 😆

Watch a reader scroll down, read this and get a heart attack 🤣

And yea Shanu..its sucks being good doesnt it?

Thanks so much and you update first! 😡 What happened to updating on Sunday?

Originally posted by: fia21

Finally finally finally I get to witness this awesomeness 😛

Really thanks to you! You're my motivation baby 😉
Beautifully written as usual. Really loved it. And it is my honest opinion as usual. You are really not ever giving me a chance to criticize 😡 . Hahaha just kidding. I am actually very glad to see that I still haven't gotten a chance to criticize you in anyway!

😃 You know I await the day because honestly I would love to improve as much as I can and especially if Im improving for you 😉
The entire dining table scene and the confrontation that follows later ------> PURE AWESOMENESS! 👏👏👏 . I could imagine the whole thing playing out infront of my eyes and it was written so well, it almost looked like I am watching the episode itself. I don 't know why, but that particual scene felt so real because you described each and everything in so much detail, without going too over the top with the descriptions.

*sniffles* Fi you're gonna make me cry..Like honestly!

As soon as breakfast finished however and everyone had started to leave, Uday's eyes pierced right through Manyata and she knew that she dared not budge from her chair or run away and hide as planned in her mind.

Now this is what I love about this guy. The authoritative personality. Not in a bad way ofcourse. But he doesn't need his "Prince" tag to get things to work his way. It's his aura that naturally posses the attributes of a true born leader. Just one glance, and people get the message. Be it his workers, or lady love 😉 . And what makes it even better is that Manyata knows him SO WELL. She knows exactly when she is not supposed to mess with Uday. You must be thinking why I am going on and on about some lines that probably won't even matter to others 😆 . But honestly, I love this little hints that you keep on dropping that describe a particular character's qualities. Whether it is Uday, Manyata or Ranvijay!

🤣 I found it so hilarious that you think I'm some sort of a hint-dropping genius when in fact many times I don't even think twice before writing such stuff. I think the genius is in YOU..really Fi I think you should consider joining C.I.D. or Crime Patrol! Don't take this as a joke. I'm dead serious. 😳Like screw accounting...

"Why did you lie Princess?" Udayveer asked calmly still holding onto her hand.

"Wh-what lie Uday?" Manyata asked taken aback from his blunt question.

"Ranvijay did this."

This part really touched me. Their bond is so strong that they don't need any words to explain their feelings. He saw bruises on her skin and instantly realized that she had been lying about the whole Ranvijay-didn't-force-himself-on-me thing. And the way he bends down on his knees and pulls back her sleeves was so cute 😍

OMG Thank God you or anyone else waasn't confused and you understood this part! 😃 Because that was basically what I wanted to show. That their connection is just too deep! 😳

She had spent a lot of time doubting his intentions, thinking and rethinking about his words, weighing his actions but she finally realized that some conclusions couldn't be reached. Not everything can be explained. Some things are just meant to be felt.

This was just simple BEAUTIFUL. I have no other words to express it. And it is true, not everything can be explained. Some things really need to be just felt. Oh Ranju this was amazing. It really touched my heart 😊

Awww Fi!!! You know when I write things like this I expect people to doze off or skip through, but whenever you appreciate these philosophical type things, it makes me soo happy! 😃 But really it needs a deep and good-hearted person like you to really understand the depth of such things! 😳

"Manyata bhai, get a room'please!" Vijay teased.

"Whyyy? Is he your next romantic interest?" Manyata asked Vijay, highly irritated.

🤣🤣🤣

Seriously couldn't stop laughing at this par. Lmao. Poor Vijay. The gay tag just won't leave him 😆

HAHA! Thank God this made you laugh, otherwise I highly doubt my comic abilities

Now comes my favorite part. I am sure you already know what it is 😛 . Lol.

"Uday it doesn't matter what he feels or not. He could never take the place in my life that you hold!" Manyata shouted and Uday hearing her, turned around.

"I always used to get annoyed by you, because hating you was the only way that I wouldn't be like all those other girls and fall all over you'" Manyata started taking steps closer to Uday.

"You were my first best friend'since I was born and even now I would lie if I said that I had a true friend in my life before I met you," Manyata continued while slowly advancing towards him.

"I hated seeing you with Sheena. It made me cry. A lot." Manyata said almost accusingly and Udayveer felt the urge to smile. She now halted a foot away from him.

"Everything I said when I was drunk was true. You do look very hot in black," Manyata admitted with a shy smile and by now Udayveer couldn't help a smile and was trying to suppress his laughter remembering the drunk Manyata.

"And'?" Udayveer asked.

"What and?...That was it!" Manyata said purposely cutting short her speech.

"You forgot to mention how much you loved our first kiss Princess," Udayveer reminded her and this time he took a step forward, making Manyata stare at him wide-eyed.

OMG this has got to be the best and the most unique confession ever. Seriously loved it to bits. Even without using the "love" word, she very clearly poured out her feelings infront of Uday and he even understood them, without forcing her to say "I love you" . Like seriously, how could someone be so adorable? 😍 . And Uday rubbing in about the kiss to Manyata was EPIC 🤣 . My personal favorite line was this "Everything I said when I was drunk was true. You do look very hot in black," . Omg I cracked up here 😆 . This was so utterly cute and funny. Poor Manyata would have never imagined that she herself would confess that infront of Uday. Lmao.

Oh man...Gosh are you smart or are you smart? "Even without using the "love" word..." Damn Fia, you got some brilliant brains here. You just KNEW that Manyata doesnt completely realize her love yet but she still has to show him that she feels something for him! Clever clever...👍🏼 And LOL of course he had to rub in the kiss...after all this is Uday, we're talking about 😉 he's just like you! 🤣

And yes I can never get over the whole hot blackness thing 😆 its actually my very personal opinion 😉

LOL Manyata hasnt imagined a lot of what shes goign to do in the upcoming chaps 😉

Everyone comes in this world with a perfect match. Ranvijay just hasn't found his soulmate yet. He will very soon.

Once again Ranjana this was utterly awesome. I am liking the way you think. All hopeful about perfect soul mates and all 😉 . Lol. Uday always gets all the clever and smart dialogues 😆 . So you are gradually introducing that the perfect girl for Ranvijay is on her way. Can't wait to finally meet her 😃

You got me Fi 😉 I'm too much of a dreamy person..no seriously someday i shall tell you what kind of stupid mistakes I make while I'm lost in own dream world. 😆 On a serious note, I really do believe in love stories, soulmates, and all that other gushy-mushy stuff. 😳 LOL thank god you didnt find it something too cheesy to come out of Uday's mouth..shit..now that I think of it, it's pretty unusual for UDAYVEER to say somethign like that 😲..but then M's love has changed him right? 😉

And omg omg omg that entire kissing saga was so HOT ☺️ . I was seriously blushing like an idiot the entire time I was reading it. And Manyata's reactions were amazing. Hahaha she's falling for his charms 😛 . Lol.

AHAHHA Fi! Mental Note to myself: someday I have to write a hot romantic OS on UV and YOU! 😉 He can betray Manyata for his hot 5'9 model for one day! 😆

"True'After seeing your blushing face anyone can guess that you are finally going to confess your love to your Princess," Unnati winked.

"You're right Unnati. I don't know how many months or years I have waited for this day," Uday admitted.

"Years, Dada!?" Unnati asked surprised.

"Yes Unnati'years. The day I realized my love for Manyata I also realized that it wasn't something that just happened in a couple weeks. I can truly say that I have loved one person and only that person for an entire lifetime."

"Awww!! Dada that's sooo cute. Oh my God can't wait for you to tell her. I'm so excited!!" Unnati exclaimed nearly jumping up and down.

I was just awww-ing the whole time. And my reactions were pretty much same as Unnati's 😆 . Seriously Uday was So adorable in this scene! Sigh, I want him 😒

Lol trust me..I was AWWW-ing too while writing this 😳. I want him too

"Oh come on Vijay bhai, there's nothing wrong with being gay. Woh toh mai kabhi kabhi Uday ko leke possessive ho jati hoon warne seriously koi aur hota toh mai aapke liye yuhin kurbaan kar deti, haan nahin toh!"

EPIC 🤣

😃😃😃

"Manyata I think you need to see Ranvijay one last time before you go to Uday. You need to tell him that you do care about him a lot, but Uday is like your shadow. And we can never part ourselves from our shadow, no matter how much we try," Vijay said.

Aptly described 👍🏼 . No more explanation needed on why Uday is Manyata's true soul mate and not Ranvijay. Which reminds me, I was right about Uday being Manyata's shadow thing in my last comment right? 😃

Fi...I FULLY STOLE THAT LINE FROM YOU 🤣 (and you're asking me about being right 😆)

And now comes the part that hints at more misunderstandings between Manyata and Uday in the future!

She could never be happy after crushing Ranvijay's dreams. She needed him to meet him and make him understand that she still cared, that she didn't forget him. She had to deal with the loose ends of her past before she could move on with her future, her Udayveer.

When I was reading this, I got reminded of the episode where Manyata does the foolish act of running away from her wedding to say a final goodbye to Akash and Uday misunderstands thinking that she ditched him and betrayed him. Same is going to happen here, only difference is that it's going to be Ranvijay, and she isn't really going to say goodbye to him. Just to tell him that her heart does not belong with him. I am already feeling bad for Ranvijay .

*Slaps hand on forehead* - Literally. You and your Ranvijay!! *shakes head*

You better bring a really awesome girl for him 😈 . I want him to fall in love again, but with the right person this time. Oh and I couldn't stop laughing thinking that this has got to be the worst timing of the best advice by Vijay Bhai 😆 . Poor Manyata. Her intentions are good, but Uday obviously wouldn't know that and would feel cheated. Sigh. Can't wait to see this play out.

About your last message, is that even a question to ask? OFCOURSE I would love to read the whole of Ranvijay's story. You know how much I like him 😳 . You can take both the love stories together simultaneously. But remember, ManVeer's story has to be better otherwise people will throw chappals at you 😆 . But do make Ranvijay's love story as interesting. Pretty please 😳 .Woah my comment has turned out to way too long. I better stop, you must be bored of reading my bullshit 😆 . Anyway once again fabulous job with this update Ranju. Can't wait to read the next part. AAAHHH *hyperventilates* . Love you baby 🤗

HAHAHA! I was thinking the same thing...that I need a killer girl for RV but at the same time ManVeer needs to be just a tad better! Oh man this is going to be intresting to write..a real challenge but I'm actually really excited for it and glad that you are too! 😃 And yea you guessed right..its pretty obvious that theres gonna be loads of drama coming up 😉

Originally posted by: mahi0809

Its nicely done!! ManVeer made up so soon?... Wonder what RV's mystery girl would be like?

Originally posted by: -JEHAN-

amazing update ranjana...loved it!!

really wanna read more...and yeah wanna read about ranvijay too...but yar M kyun ja rahi hai abhi ranvijay ky pass...ufff...uday is waiting for her na!!!this girl!!

Originally posted by: shana0127

I am already writing it dear par wo kya hai na I am one of the loving behna of Ashu so am also busy choosing a right girl for my bro😃

Kafi badi jimmedari hai u see,

saahi ladki ko choose kiya to ghar me mera rehna narak kar degi aur agar galat choose karli to mere pyare ashu ka rehna narak kar degi🤣 🤣

But I think I will choose sahi ladki for my ashu after all his happiness comes first 😆😆

Originally posted by: Inkpen4877

seriously amazing!