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Etika yaar yeh kya hai?! itna suspense mein rakh diya hai!!!
update sooon!!!!!
fantastic story by the way!!
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RAM COMES OUT OF THE AIRPORT AND WAIT FOR HIS CAR?..
PRIYA IS STANDING NEARBY WAITING FOR A CAB AND STILL IN DEEP THOUGHTS??
Suddenly wind starts blowing [don't ask how???] and priya comes to her senses and start walking and ram coming towards her .
Priya dupata comes on her face and she is unable to see and bump in ram and ram get hold of her and then again winds blow and priya dupata removes from her face and ram sees her and lost in her beauty and thinks ahe is so simple but yet so beautiful and priya has her eyes closed?.
Then after 5 minuts standing in that awakard position priya open her eyes and feels uncomfortable and she says in mind [ hey!!!! Ram ji kaha fasa diya]
She stares at ram who is lost in her angelic eyes and thinking { I can swim in this eyes]
AT K.M.
KIDS ROOM
Raj and ridhi are on bed and anjali is telling them story..
About "how raja and rani met"
They are listening it sincerely but they want their papa nearby to tell them story
They both ask her "when will be papa come home?"
Anjali ; papa aajaenge who kisi kaam se bahar gaye hai.
Aap dono so jao
Papa se kaal milne na
But both want to sleep with their papa??
AT AIRPORT
Priya; stand on her feet ans says " aap ko sharam nahi aati ladki ko chete hue
Ram; kya? Main aur aapkjo cheth raha??????????
P; ji haan ,sakal se toh sharif garh ke lagte hai..
R; lagta kya matlab aapka?
Main sharif ghar se hi hoon?.
P; aapki harkte dekhar toh nahi lagta?
R; aap mujhe galat samaj rahe hai. Main yaha aapni maa ko lene aaya tha..
P; aur koi bahna nahi hai jo aapni maa ko iss main involve kar rahe hai..
R; {in anger} kya? Pata aamir ladka dekh kar aap jaan mujhkar mujh par gir gayi?
P; main aise ladki dikhti hoon aapko;
Ram; kisi ki shakal pe thodi likha hota hai uske maan main kya chal raha hai?.
P; apse baat karna bekar hai..
She moves but her feet get twisted and again she falls in ram's arm
Ram; ab aap khud mujh par gir rahi han
P; aapne mujhe haath kaise lagaya. Leave me?
R; pakka ????
P; haan pakka
Ram left her and she fall on the ground
P; akal nahi aapke paas mujhe gir diya
R; tumne hi toh kaha tha Leave me!!!
P; DHAKKAN KAHI KA!!!!!!!!!!
R; kya mujhe dhakkan kaha aur tum kya ho BANDARIYA!!!!!!!!!
HUMESHA GIRTI PADTHI RAHTI HOO??
PHELI MULAQATH MAIN KUCH AISA HUA EHSAAS
KI HUM BYAAN BHI NA KAR PAAYE
AAKHRI MULAQAT MAIN KUCH TO KEHANA HI THA UNSE
YEHI SOCH KAR UNHE TANHA CHHODH AAYE
AT K.M
KIDS WERE IN DEEP SLEEP??
Anjali tip toped to her room and stands near the window and suddenly two pairs of arm surrounds her waist?.
Sid; hi jaan I am sorry aaj phir late ho gaya
Aaj mujhe maaf kardo aagaye se aisa nahi karunga???.
Anji; aaj ya hamesha late ho jate hai
Aaj bacche aap ko baar baar yaad kar rahe thae
Jo kaam aapko karna chaiye who ram bhai karte hai
Sid; bhai toh sab ka kahyal rakhte hai par unki zindgi main unka khayal rakhne wali kab aayegi
Anji; who bhi jald aajayegi??.
Originally posted by: jineejiggs
@Etika
firstly let me congratulate you for presenting us such a gud FF and secondly what a thought! what an interesting imagination, superb, good going, please continue dear asap, very nice and a fresh thought
Originally posted by: Nancy_NUTS
<font color="#993300">oye hoyye that was complete Ekta style😆</font>
<font color="#993300">chalo glad u revealed the big secret, till i reached the end, pta nahi maine kya kya soch liya tha(Ekta ka asar!!)😆😆</font><font color="#993300">n Eti, it was too short, u better update longer next time😡😡</font>
Originally posted by: ravichitra
<font size="2"><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Thanks Etika madam, finally ye suspense ka unveiling ho gaya ki Anjali is Sid's wife. Thank u thank u thank u. Aur RaYa ko bhi mila diya. Wahin tripping and teasing.👏</font></font>
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