FF ~YOU ARE MINE~ PART 8 [PAGE 31] 4.7.2012

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Posted: 2012-04-26T09:34:31Z

 hiii everyone Smile


i have started a new ff and i am writing an ff for first time so please bear my spelling mistakes and if you find it silly please tell me...
 
INDEX...
PART 1 PAGE 1
PART 2 PAGE 3
PART 3 PAGE 6
PART 4 PAGE 10
PART 5 PAGE 15
PART 6 PAGE  20
PART 7 PAGE 27
PART 8 PAGE 31


PART 1






DELHI

PRIYA is sitting in the drawing room of her house. She is in deep thought and thinking  HOW???? Her life changes in past few years.

She then sips her special ginger tea and finds it salty as her tears get mixed in it.

At that time someone knocks the door and she wipe her tears

Get up to open the door and find a lady dressed in simple saree with a simle on her face is in front of her.

P; namaste aunty!!!

Aunty; put her hand on her head and say

SADA KHUSH RAHO!!!!

Priya gives a feeble simle..

P ; arre aunty aapne taklif kyun kii

Mujhe bula lete.

aunty; no problem beta. Tere ghar aane ke bhane thodi walk ho jati hai

P; aunty andhar aao'.

Aunty and priya sit on the sofa

P; aunty kaise aana hua;

A; ye tune jo papers mangvaye the wohi dena aai thi

Priya open the envelope and read it carefully

A; beta are u sure about it..

P;ji aunty I am sure..

Put her signature on the paper

Aunty gets up and kiss priya head and goes from there

Priya bids good bye to her and afterwards goes to her  balcany and sit on a chair  with her eyes closed '..

 

 

 MUMBAI

AT BEACH A BOY AND A GIRL ARE MAKING A CASTLE WITH SAND AND AT A DISTANCE A MAN IS CAPTURING THEIR PICS'

AND SIMLING SEEING THE KIDS

How? They are making the castle and then the wave of water mix with it

He just turn and gazes at sun which is ready to meet the sea'..

Suddenly girl started crying as her elder bro is pulling her hair

RAM ; RAJ apni bhen ke baal chodh do..

Raj; isne mera toy le liya hai

Ridhi;[is still crying and say ] mera toy hai main nahi dungi

Ram then take the toy in his hand and say ye ye toy tum main se kisi ko nahi milega.

Both of them stares at him..

Ram; tum dono acche bacche hona

[Both of them say] yes hum acche bacche hai!!!!!!!!

Ram; toh acche bacche apne toys share karte hai..

Raj and ridhi says hum bhi apne toys share karenge

They both run with their toys and give to a poor kids and come back to ram and says humne toys share kar diye'

Ab hum bahi acche bacche hai na

Ram gives a  bright simle and feel proud on them

He hugs them and says tum dono duniya ke sabse acche bachhe ho''

Ab ice cream kise khani hai

Both raise there hands and then they all went towards ice cream parlour

Raj and ridhi are  holding each hand of RAM AND WALKING silently''.

 

Edited by SWEETETIKA - 2012-07-04T08:32:08Z
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Posted: 2012-04-26T09:35:51Z
good one Etika Clap Clap Clap keep continue.
Edited by jakther - 2012-04-26T09:40:22Z
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Posted: 2012-04-26T09:42:29Z
Arey wah! Kitne talents hain tujhmein? Kabhi student, kabhi bhai ki caretaker, kabhi marriage counsellor. Ab toh tu FF writer bhi bangayi ho! Cool
Nice FF. Yeh dono bichad gaye hain kya?
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Posted: 2012-04-26T09:42:55Z
Good one Ram priya ke bache wow continue soon waiting for your next part for how they seprate?
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Posted: 2012-04-26T10:06:18Z
kya FF?? Eti FF bhi likh sakti h?wahTongue
will comment back after readingEmbarrassed
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Posted: 2012-04-26T10:17:22Z
Nice one Etika...please continue it when u get time...mujhe bahut pasand aaya...SmileClapBig smile
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Posted: 2012-04-26T10:37:56Z
whoaaa shayari AND ff!!
you are so talented girl!!

ClapClap

update soon!! Day Dreaming
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Posted: 2012-04-26T10:54:45Z
Continue soon dear... its different and a nice start...
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