FF: YEH DOORIYA...

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Posted: 2012-04-21T03:59:50Z

SO FRIENDS, A BIT OF  CLASH IS GOING BTWEEN RAM AND PRIYA
SO TAKING THE REFFERENCE I ANANYA IS GOING TO GIVE MY NEXT  OS

 

THE EPISODE STARTS WHEN,,, PRIYA MADE KARTIK TO CAME OUT OF THE JAIL
PAYING A DOUBLE OF MONEY,,NOT FOLLOWING RAM'S DECESION,, WHICH RAM
CAME TO KNOW WHEN HE REACHED POLICE STATION WITH NATASHA AND NEHARIKA,,
WHO WERE WASHING RAM'S BRAIN AGAINST PRIYA FOR NOT LISTENING TO HER OWN HUSBANDS DECESION
AND KEEPING THE SIDE OF KARTIK,,, ON THE OTHER HAND,, RELEASING KARTIK BOTH OF
KARTIK AND PRIYA WENT TO SHARMA VILLA,, WHERE THEY ALL WRE SO HAPPY TO SEE KARTIK BACK AGAIN,,
AND THANKED RAM FOR THE BAIL,, BUT SUDHIR WAS QUIET GOOD TO UNDERSTAND SOMETHING FISHY,,, AND FOUND HIM
RIGHT...
 
SUDHIR : KAHI HUMNE EK KO BACHANE KE LIYE,,, KOI DUSRE RISHTE KO TORTO NAHI DIYA????

SHIPRA : MUJHE GARV HAIN PRIYA PE... and she hugged her,,, priya on one side when tightly hugging her
   mother,, on the other side her eyes wre firm on her father ,,, and on the deepest corner of her heart,, her mind waas fixed on RAM...

PRIYA : MA,, I THINK MUJHE AB CHALNA CHAHIE... SAB MUJPE WAISE HI NARAZ HAIN,, AUR AGAR GHAR DER SE POHOCHITO,,, PATA NAHIN...

SUDHIR : PRIYA ... RAM KO KYA KAHEGI TU...???

PRIYA : PAPA... UNHKO APNI BAHEN PE BHAROSA HAIN,,, AUR MUJHE APNE BHAI PE... AUR SABSE BARI BAT MUJHE AP LOGO PE BHAROSA HAIN,,,,
             ISSE MR.KAPOOR KO KOI PROBLEM NAHI HONA CHAHIE ... HA GUSSA TO WO HONGE LEKIN ... I DON'T KNOW... JAATI HUN... WARNA AUR BHI GUSSA KARENGE...

...

SHE ARRIVED KAPOOR MANSION...PRIYA WAS ON HER WAY TO THE ROOM,,WALKING THROUGH THE STAIRCASE
WHEN SHE WAS BACK SPOKEN BY NEHARIKA... SHE SHOUTED AT PRIYA FOR HER SUCH BEHAVIOUR,,, AND CREATED A SCENE IN FRONT OF RAM EMBARRASING PRIYA
AND CREATING MORE MISUNDERSTANDING BETWEEN RAM AND PRIYA,,,,,,AS BECAUSE WHEN NEHARIKA WAS SAYING SOMETHING AGAINST KARTIK.,,, PRIYA WAS NOT A SISTER TO STAY QUIET
RE-ASSURING HERSELF THAT ITS HER IN-LAWS HOUSE,, AND  HER SUPPORTING WORDS OF HER BROTHER,,,, PINCHED RAM LIKE A NEGETIVE WORD AGAINST HIS SISTER...
SO HE ALSO WAS DISTURBED AN DISGUSTED OF PRIYA... HE BURSTED

RAM : WILL YOU GUYS PLEASE KEEP QUITE???? MA.,, PLZ I REQUEST YOU TO STOP THIS MATTER,,, AND YES PRIYA YOU... HOW DARE YOU SAYING SOMETHING AGAINST CHHOTI,, I KNOW HER ,,, I TRUST HER...AND YOU ARE NOT PERMITTED TO SAY ANY BITTER WORDS AGAINST MY SISTER STANDING IN MY OWN HOUSE...

PRIYA : (HIS SUCH WORDS CAME AS A BIG BLOW TO PRIYA,,, SHE CAN'T BELIEVE HER EARS THAT  RAM IS SAYING SUCH THINGS,,, GIVING HER DOMINANCE AND TRYING HER TO REALIZE HER POSITION IN KAPOOR MANSION,,,JUST AS A WIFE OF RAM !!!!)
                MR.KAPOOR ,, THANX FOR RE-ASSURING ME THAT ITS NOT MY HOUSE...

RAM :(NOSTALGICLY) WHAT ?? WHO SAID SO ????????????

PRIYA : (IN A LOW MANNER ) YOU ,, MR.KAPOOR ... JUST NOW...

RAM : I MEANT THAT...

PRIYA :( INTERRUPTED ) I KNOW WHAT YOU MEANT MR.KAPOOR...

RAM : PRIYA ,, STOP JUST ANNOYING IT...ITS REALY DISGUSTING OF YOU...

PRIYA : YES , I AM , I AM A DISGUSTING PERSON... APKO YEH KAHENE KI ZAROORAT NAHI HAIN,,, I KNOW ... IKNOW IT MR.KAPOOR...

        WHAT YOU SAID... I DONT HAVE THE RIGHT TO SAY ANYTHING ABOUT OR AGAINST NATASHA RIGHT ??? OH!! MISSED IT... STANDING ON YOUR HOUSE (SHE STRESSED YOURS )
         OK WILL NOT... BUT YOU KNOW WHAT  I AM GOING TO SUPPORT MY BROTHER,, WHOM I TRUST... PATA HAIN NATASHA KYA... VISHVAS TO MEIN TUMHE BHI KARTI HUN... LEKI TUMSE ZYADA MEIN APNE PAPA PE KARTI HUN...AUR AGAR UNHONE KAHAN KI KARTIK NE TUM PE PHYSICAL TORTURE NAHI KIYA... TO I KNOW USSNE NAHI KIA... YES I DON'T BELIVE YOU...I AM NOT GOING TO BLV YOUR SISTER,,,AND IN YOUR FRONT MR.KAPOOR
 I ADMIT THAT I WILL SUPPORT KARTIK AND ISKE BAAD MERI AGAINST KAN BHARNE KI BHI KOI ZARURAT NAHI PAREGI NIHARIKA JI...

THE LAST WORDS AGAINST NIHARAKA ...MADE HIM TO BURST...
RAM : MIND YOUR LANGUAGE PRIYA ,, DON'T DARE TO TALK WITH MY MOTHER LIKE THIS...
PRIYA : FROM NOW ONWARDS... I AM NOT GOING TO UTTER A SINGLE WORD MR.KAPOOR...
(PRIYA ON A HURRY...WENT UP AND TOOK HER PURSE OUT AND CAME DOWN WITHPUT UTTERING A SINGLE WORD WENT TO HER CLASSES )

WILL BE CONTINUED ...

               

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Posted: 2012-04-21T04:40:06Z
CryCryCryCryCryCry...poor priya !!!!! oh update soon pls pls pls...cant bear to see her in this condition...do update asapStar
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Posted: 2012-04-21T04:45:21Z
very nice continue soon
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Posted: 2012-04-21T04:48:27Z
whoa ! awesome beginning Clap i hope Priya stay this strong always
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Posted: 2012-04-21T06:39:13Z
Nice update Ananya behen...pls continue soon...
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Posted: 2012-04-21T07:01:01Z
Oooh Great dear
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Posted: 2012-04-21T07:11:26Z
that was great, hope to see same scene if separation does comes

just-a-suggestion- plz mention in the title that its an "OS" and don't use CAPS LOCK, bit problem to read, hope u don't mindEmbarrassed
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Posted: 2012-04-21T07:25:04Z
Wow...tensed drama. Loved Priya standing up to niharika. Welcome baaack Priya...

Nice work...pls continue
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