KRIYAANSH OS-TU HI MERA -PART 2 PG 7 - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
super akshu😊very well written... keep writing like this... loved the concept👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Gr8 wrk...luvd it...:)
thnx fr d pm...:D
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
heya plz add me to ur pm list
plz
n dis was really awsm 
continue
n keep updating
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
awww dat was sooo sweet OS akshu mindblowing yaar...n plsss post nxt part asap
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
 

hey guys thanx for liking the os m cont it so here is the 2nd part
sorry if the second part is not as good as the first sorry
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after this rey goes to kria n says

rey:kria chale hum late ho rahe hai

they go to n get the conforence done but they tell them tht they will have another one in mumbai so after 2 days they have to leave

kria goes to her mom n convinces her

p.s=kria's mom dosent knw tht rey is their new boss

a day beofre they are leaving for the conf to mumbai they are in the old store room to find sum files they needed

rey:mili file

kria:nahi sir

rey:kria maine tumhe kaah na call me rey

kria:rey?????whts wrong wid u dnt u get it ki maine tumhe bataya tha ki maine tumhe use kiya fir bhi

rey gets dam pissed her just holds kria from her shouler n pinns her towards the wall

he was very close to her but he was very angry

rey:tum apne app ko kya samjhthi hoon ha
tumhe kya lagta hai ki tmne muhe bol diya ki tumne mujhe use kiya hai aur mai beleive kar lunga??????
whts wrong wid u kria I LOVE U DAM IT DNT U GET IT KYU HURT KAR RAHI HOON MUJHE BHI AUR APPNE APP KO BHI

kria:rey main ape app ko nahi tumhe hurt kar rahi hoon get it

rey gets more angry he moves more close

rey:dnt u get it kria tum sayad pure duniya ko fool kar sakthi hoon but not me get it
 
kria:rey move
 
rey:nahi kria bolo na us sdin tum mujhe nazre chrake baat kar rahi thi par aj mere akho main dekhar bolo
 
kria:rey plzzz dnt go this to me
 
rey:me losssn the grip kria tum meri ho meri baatcutter tum agar mujhse ab jhoot bolgi toh mjhe bahout hrt hoga n i knw ki tum muhhe hurt nahi dekh sakthi ise liye meri nazro main tumne apne app ko ganga dikahay so tht i will move on tumne aisa socha bhi kaise kria ki main tumhe chodkar move on karunga
 
kria':ha main manti hoon maine jhoot bola tha par its too late rey i have fallen for sumone else she jerks hism hands n leaves from there
 
she goes into the washroom
 
kria:sorry rey but i had to do this😭😭😭😭😭
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she reaches home n her mom looked very angry
 
kria:kya hua mom
 
mom:kria tum rey ke sath conf pe jarahi hoon na mumbai
 
kria:mom woh ...
 
mom:ttht's it kria tum ja sakthi hoon mumbai par yaad rakhna mumbai ane ke baad tumri shadhi hai
 
kria":wht??????
 
mom:ha bahout acha ladka hai i knw ki tum use pasand karoogi
 
kria dosent say anthing she just goes in her room  n starts cying
 
kria tells her best firend abt it n her best firnd goes n tells rey his
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IN MUMBAI
 
the conf was over they were gng home but rey takes her to sum toher place
 
kria:rey tum yeh kya kar rahe ho hum toh us rase jana hai na
 
rey stops the car he gets out n goes from there
 
kria was scared at it was nite so she got out of the car n moved in it was all dark as soon suddenly the lights are switched on n ppl screamt welcome back
 
it was non other than her team the weakling team !!!!!!!!!!!111
 
they ran n hugged her
 
kria:guys tum log
 
neh:kria tum hame chodkar kaisi chali gayi😭😭😭
 
vishaka:ya kria u knw how much we missed u
 
bharat:ha yaar kyu kiya tune aisa
 
amar:klia maine tumhe bahout yaar kiya
 
swayam was must staring n smiling at her
 
even the dazzlers hugged her
 
neha:kria dnt worry ab tum mumbai main hi rahogi
 
viahsak:ya tumari shadhi cancell
 
kria was shocked
 
kria:tum logo ko kaise pata?????
 
swayam":main baat tha hoon
 
FLASHBACK:
 
after rey cumes tio knw abt rkia's marriage he goes n meets kria's mom
 
mom:tumari tini himmat ki tum yaah aye
 
rey:m sorry aunty i kwn u hate me mere wajhses app rkia ko yaha laye i knw everythng but plzzz atlest app mere wajese kria ko mat punish kijiye plzzz app chathi hai ki main kria se door jao i will go par plzzz app use force mat kijiye shadhi ke liye wen she is not ready plzzz aunty
 
FLASHBACK ENDS
 swa:is tarah rey ne tumari mom ko manaliya aur tumari mom bahout sorry hai bahout guitly feel kar rahi hai woh rey ko galat samjhne ke liye aur tumare dreams ko na sajhen ke liye
 
sha:ya kria n here ur mom wants to talk to u
 
kria:mom app
 
mom:kria m sorry i dint understnd ur dream m sorry ek baat kria rey abhout acha hai plzzz use sorry bolna n ya tum ab mumbai main rehkar apna dance ka sapna pura kar sakthi hoon aur ha rey aur tum fir se ek hojoa kria bye
 
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rey is in the balcony looking at the moon
 
P.S=REY DOSENT KNWE THT KRIA'S MOM HAS ACCEPTED HIM TOO
 
rey:kria ki mom ne finally meri baat man gayi ab tak kria ko pat chal bhi gaya hoga m very happy ki rkia is happy
i love u kria sayad tumri mom hame ek nahi hone dengi par tumari khushi main main ji lunga love u alot
 
kria cumes from behind rey tursn n sees kria
 
kria:thanx rey meri mom ko samjhane ke liye
 
rey:its kkk kria ab tum jao its very late
 
kria runs n hugs him
 
rey :kria whts wrong????
 
kria:rey why do u love me so much
 
rey:kria n makes her break the hug n makes her look at him
i just want u to be happy
 
kria:rey thanx alot for wht u did for me meri shdhi rok kar tumne mere liye bahout bada ehsaan kiya hai
 
rey:no kria ehsaan nahi apna pyaar jataya hai
 
kria:rey u knw wht mom ne tumhe accpet kar liya hai
 
rey shokced n happy:wht?????are u serious yuppie he picks kria up n twirls her
 
he gets her down they were lost into eachother
 
rey moves close to her
 
rey:kria i love u
 
kria:i love u too rey
 
rey moves her her hair from her face n pins it behind her hair kria closes her eyes she was lost in his touch after soo long they were toghther soo close
 
he moves more close they were inches apart no air could pass thorugh them rey looks at kria weather she was comfortable or no he sees her eagerly waiitng
 
he moves more close n kisses her on her sweet lips she respondes he kisses her with the same passion of love,understanding,trust...
 
 
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
Awesome..loved it...hope am d 1st to comment
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
mela aakshu  aka rasmalai !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
 jaan u hv ritten awsam jaan !!!
kuddos !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
luv u lods jaan !!
puchchi
muah !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
It was amazing...I literally lved it...muuuaaahhh!!!:):):)<3<3
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
wowww akshu its too good dear
love it soo much
finally kriya ki mom man gyi
yipeee
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
main bahar hun acche se comment baad mein dungi..

abhi ke liye..

loved it