Arhi: Dark night dawning Part - 25 updated pg 149 - Page 29

👏👏thanks...great job...amazing...brilliant...👏👏

awesome update thank u for pm me

very touching, thnx for the PM,keep them coming.

wow!!! fell in love wid ur fabulous update
this surajkund mela part totally ROCKED!!

and i loved the fact that u brought out the beautiful bihu dance of Assam so well😊.i am from Assam and the part wer khushi was wearing the gorgeous muga silk saree( we call it mekhela chadar- its actually like a two piece saree wer the mekhela is the one worn above the petticoat and the chadar is the long drape which is draped like a saree over the shoulder n then the othr end is brought around the hips n pleated in a vertical manner.actually this pleat is the part which differentiates it frm a saree).
 
khushi dancin the bihu dance made this part even more beautiful. i cud actually picturize her dancing the steps. n why not she's such a superb dancer who can pick up any step of any dance! also loved the golgappa part, the merry go round kiss n the one wer arnav plays a secret admirer to khushi to come up on stage.
simply fantastic part all in all.applause to u👏keep up the good work

wow
nice update
gaint wheel kiss was so...gud
bihu dance also rocked
thanks 4 the PM
update soon

wow so beautiful update

Originally posted by: poojasidd123

wow!!! fell in love wid ur fabulous update
this surajkund mela part totally ROCKED!!

and i loved the fact that u brought out the beautiful bihu dance of Assam so well😊.i am from Assam and the part wer khushi was wearing the gorgeous muga silk saree( we call it mekhela chadar- its actually like a two piece saree wer the mekhela is the one worn above the petticoat and the chadar is the long drape which is draped like a saree over the shoulder n then the othr end is brought around the hips n pleated in a vertical manner.actually this pleat is the part which differentiates it frm a saree).
 
khushi dancin the bihu dance made this part even more beautiful. i cud actually picturize her dancing the steps. n why not she's such a superb dancer who can pick up any step of any dance! also loved the golgappa part, the merry go round kiss n the one wer arnav plays a secret admirer to khushi to come up on stage.
simply fantastic part all in all.applause to u👏keep up the good work

Yay! I did it, Kavi. I read all chapters and thoroughly enjoyed them. 👏 It's good that I read them in one go because I could actually assess the flow- it was definitely smooth sailing. And I did notice that your story kept improving tremendously, becoming more polished with the progress of each chapter. 👍🏼 Edited by Chimpsy - 12 years ago

Awww!!! It was so cute n beautiful!!