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Originally posted by: lovelymani
kishore thanq for such a sweet story ...do write more
@lovelymani
Thanks a lot...😃
Originally posted by: lovelymani
kishore thanq for such a sweet story ...do write more
Hey kya likha hai! Amazing...wonderful...the best part i liked was when the baby cuddles and priya's comparing ram and him...very funny and nice...and also really really liked the ending when priya sheds a tear...amazingly put kishore! Well done and keep it up...waiting for next part...now you are FF writer for the baby..!!
bhai... u also write imaginations...
i didnt knw that...will comment after reading... 😊
Originally posted by: ravichitra
Saly, sangath ka asar hain. aur Kishore bahut sweet imagination hain
Originally posted by: ravichitra
Saly, sangath ka asar hain. aur Kishore bahut sweet imagination hain
So beautiful Kishore. Truly very touching. You write wonderfully Kishore.please continue writing. The line
"he should not become another man who does not realise what mother's love is..." is so heartrending..Beautiful Kishore , extremely beautiful
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