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Posted: 11 years ago
Hello my lovely readers...Thnks  a lot 4 ur lovely comments n lyks..I hope u'll lyk dis update as well...Enjoy..

VirMan...Tum Ho Mera Pyaar...Part 17...

~Recap~


Vadhera's had their breakfast with their new Choti Bahu, Maanvi Viraat Vadhera. After having their breakfast, VirMan left towards Rishkesh, for Maanvi's Pak Phere's rasam.


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VirMan were standing in front of the Chaudhary house.

Viraat: (looking at Maanvi) Andar chale, ya yahin se wapas jaana hai?

Maanvi: (looking at him) Haan toh chalo na, maine kab mana kiya hai?

Viraat: Chalo.

Both walked towards the main entrance. Dabbu excitedly opened the door as he heard the door bell.

Dabbu: (smiling widely) Maanvi Di. (shouting) Beeji, Maa, Papa, Badi Beeji, dekhiye Maanvi Di aa gayi.

Maanvi: Dabbu...(spreads her arms out for him to hug her)

Dabbu and Maanvi hugged while Viraat was looking at them with a smile on his face.

Viraat: Agar Bahen milaap ho gaya ho toh thoda apne Junior Jiju se bhi mil lo Saale Sahab.

Dabbu: (breaking the hug) Jiju...(hugs him)

Pinky Chachi came towards them smilingly, with a aarti ki thal in her hands, followed by Beeji and Madhan Chachu.

Pinky Chachi: (smiles) Haye meri Bacchi aa gayi. Kitni soni lag rahi hai saree mein.

Beeji: Pinky baatein baad mein karna pehle aarti toh utar.

Pinky Chachi did VirMan's aarti, applied tikka on their forehead and threw some rice and flower petals on them.

Maanvi: (hugs Chachi tightly) Chachi, kaisi ho aap?

Pinky Chachi: Main toh first class hun, (breaking  the hug) tu kaisi hai meri Bacchi?

Maanvi: Main bhi thik hun Chachi.

Maanvi walked towards Beeji and hugged her, while Viraat hugged Madhan Chachu and Pinky Chachi.

Beeji: Thik hai na mera Baccha?

Maanvi: Haan Beeji, main bilkul thik hun.

Maanvi walked toward Madhan Chachu, while Viraat took Beeji's blessing.

Madhan Chachu: Kaisi hai meri Mannu, tabiyat thik hai na?

Maanvi: (breaking the hug) Haan Chachu, ek dam thik hai. (turns towards Badi Beeji, smiles/walking towards her) Aur meri Badi Beeji kaisi hai?

Badi Beeji: Aur kaisi hogi. Tu thi toh mera mann laga rehta tha, aur ab toh jaise yeh ghar kaatne ko daudta hai.

Maanvi: (hugging her tightly, after sitting on her lap) Haye meri Badi Beeji ko meri yaad aati hai. Abhi toh mujhe gaye huye ache se ek din bhi nahi hua na Badi B.

Badi Beeji: (teary eyes/hugging her back tightly) Haan toh, yaad toh aaye gi hi na.

Maanvi: (breaking the hug) Waise ek rasta hai jisse aapko meri yaad nahi aayegi.

Badi Beeji: (looking at Maanvi, questionably) Kaisa rasta?

Maanvi: Aap na mere saath dahej(dowry) mein chaliye, wahan main aapke saath hi rahun gi.

Badi Beeji: (hits on her arm) Dekho toh iss Chudail ko, mujhe dahej mein leke jaiye gi.

Viraat: (touching Badi Beeji's feet) Pairi Pauna Badi Beeji.

Badi Beeji: (hand on his head) Khush raho. Arey tu apni Biwi ko kuch samjha kar nahi laya kya?

Viraat: Kya karun Badi Beeji, samjhane ki koshish karta hun toh main khud bhul jaata hun.

Badi Beeji: Haan, yeh toh pakki baat hai, isse samjhane ke chakkar mein khud ka nuksan ho jaata hai.

Badi Beeji and Viraat hi-5d and laughed at Maanvi's irritated face.

Maanvi: (frowns cutely) Aap meri Badi Beeji ho ya iss Chep ki?

Badi Beeji: Pehle teri thi, shadi ke baad dono ki ho gayi hun.

Viraat and Badi Beeji again laughed and hi-5d. Maanvi got up and ran towards Beeji, just like a little kid.

Maanvi: (hugging Beeji sideways/pouting) Dekhiye na Beeji, yeh dono mujhe pareshan kar rahe hai.

Beeji: (hand on her cheek) Arey mera Baccha. (looking at Viraat and Badi B) Koi tang nahi karega meri Bacchi ko.

Viraat: (holding ears) Sorry Beeji.

Beeji: (smiles/looking at Maanvi) Khush?

Maanvi: (hugging her tightly/smiles widely) Bahut.

Madhan Chachu: Mannu, Viraat tum dono bahut lambe safar se aaye ho, bhook bhi lagi hogi tum dono ko, chalo hum khana kha lete hai.

Badi Beeji: Haan haan chalo.
Pinky Chachi: Main khana lagati hun. (walking towards the kitchen)

Maanvi: (walking towards Pinky Chachi) Chachi main aapki madat karti hun.

Pinky Chachi: Na meri Bacchi, main karlungi, tu na bas araam se kha lena.

Chachi walked away, towards the kitchen, leaving Maanvi surprised.

Maanvi: Wow, pehle toh Chachi apne kamar dard ke bahane baanne mein koi kasar nahi chodhti thi, aur ab, sab kaam akele kar rahi hai? (smiles widely) Wah, agar mujhe pata hota ki shadi ke baad aisa hone wala tha toh main bacchpan mein hi shadi kar leti.
Dabbu: Aap toh kar leti Maanvi Di, par aapko Viraat Jiju nahi milta tab.

Maanvi's heart skipped a beat, she looked up at Viraat, who was looking at her with a cute smile on his lips.

Badi Beeji: Yeh tune bilkul sahi kaha, agar teri shadi bacchpan mein hi ho jaati na, toh tujhe Viraat se pyaar kaise hota, aur yeh shadi kaise hoti.

Maanvi unknowingly blushed, while Viraat stood there, thinking about how his life would've been without Maanvi.

Madhan Chachu: Yeh baat se toh main bhi bilkul sehmat hun.

Beeji: Main bhi.

All went towards the dinning table as Pinky Chachi called everyone after setting the table.

Maanvi: (looking at the foods/excitedly) Wow Chachi, sari meri favorite dish, kya baat hai.

Pinky Chachi: (smiles) Haan mere Bacche, ab teri Chachi tere liye itna toh kar sakhti hai na.

Viraat: Um, Chachi, don't mind but, Maanvi zyada oily aur spicy khana nahi kha sakhti.

Maanvi: (looking at him angerily, yet cutely) Kyun nahi kha sakhti? Main khaungi, meri Chachi ne meri liye itne pyaar se banaya hai, main kahungi.

Viraat: Tum nahi kha sakhti Maanvi, yeh tumhari health ke liye thik nahi hai.

Maanvi: Tumhe kaise pata? Doctor ho kya?

Everyone was just looking at this newly wedded couple fighting, smilingly.

Viraat: Doctor nahi hun, par maine puri research ki hai, tum yeh sab nahi kha sakhti (sternly) and that's final.

Maanvi: (hands on her hips) What Final, main khaungi, tumhe jo karna hai tum kar sakhte ho.
Viraat: Maa...

Pinky Chachi: Haaye Rabba, bas bhi karo, Maanvi Bacche, tumhe Viraat ki baat maani chahiye, woh jo bhi keh raha hai tumhare bhale ke liye hi keh raha hai.

Viraat: (looking at Maanvi/loudly) SUNA?

Pinky Chachi: Aur Viraat Putar, Maanvi yeh khana kha sakhti hai, isme maine kam teel(oil) dala hai aur mirch toh bilkul bhi nahi daali hai. Usski tabiyaat ko koi nuskaan nahi hoga.

Maanvi: (looking at Viraat/loudly) SUNA?

Everyone laughed at VirMan.

Viraat: Woh, sorry Chachi, main bas..

Pinky Chachi: (smiles at him) Koi gal nahi Putar, balki mujhe khushi hai ki meri Bacchi ko itna pyaar karne wala jeevan saathi mila hai.

Beeji: Sach mein, Maanvi ne tumhe apna Jeevan saathi chun kar bahut hi acha kaam kiya hai.
Madhan Chachu: Haan Beta, tum jis tarah humari Mannu ka khayal rakh rahe ho, mujhe pura yakeen hai, humari Maanvi bahut jald thik ho jayegi. Woh kehte hai na, Pyaar se badi iss duniya mein aur koi takhat nahi hai, aur tum dono ka pyaar toh bahut hi taqat(strength) hai.

Maanvi's cheeks were bright red due to her continuously blushing. She looked up at Viraat, who was already looking at her lovingly. Her heartbeat increased as her eyes met with his. They both moved their eyes away from each other as they heard Dabbu's voice.

Dabbu: (teasingly) Jiju, kal thik se dekha nahi tha kya Di ko, jo aaj aapki nazar hi nahi hath rahi?

Viraat: (blushing/looking everywhere but Maanvi) Woh..woh..um, Chachi, khana bahut hi tasty lag raha hai, hum shuru kare?

Pinky Chachi: (laughingly) Haan haan.

Dabbu: (teasingly) Jiju sharmaiye mat.

Maanvi: (hits Dabbu on his arm, who was standing beside her) Dabbe, tu kuch zyada nahi bolne laga hai, chal khana kha. (sat down on the chair, along with everyone else)

Dabbu: (rubbing his arm) Main toh Jiju se baat kar raha tha, aapko kyun mirchi lag rahi hai.

Maanvi: Dimaag khane ko nahi bola maine, khana kha.

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Maanvi: (hands folded) Beeji, please na.

Beeji: Nahi Maanvi.

Maanvi: (poutingly) Par kyun Beeji, main roz roz thodi aaungi yahan.

Beeji: Nahi, main janti hun agar tu jaiye gi toh wapas aane ka naam nahi legi.

After having their lunch, everyone were sitting in the main hall. Maanvi, who was sitting beside Beeji, was begging her to let her meet her Panters.

Maanvi: (cutely) Please.

Beeji: (sternly) Kaha na nahi.

Maanvi: (pouting cutely) Aisa mat karo na Beeji, please.

Beeji was kind of irritated of Maanvi's pleading and those cute faces she was making, which actually melted  her.

Beeji: Thik hai, par ek shart par.

Maanvi: (getting up to leave) Ok bye.

Beeji: Pehle shart sun.

Maanvi: (frowns/turns around) Kya?

Beeji: Viraat tere saath jaiye ga.

Maanvi: Kyun? Woh wahan jaa kar kya karega Beeji, woh toh kisiko janta bhi nahi hai.

Beeji: Main kuch nahi jaanti, tu jaiye gi toh Viraat ke saath warna nahi.

Maanvi: Thik hai, main Viraat ke saath jaungi.

Viraat: Oye tumhe kisne kaha ki main jaunga tumhare saath?

Maanvi: (walking towards him) Please ab tum mat shuru ho jaana, aaj jitna please kaha hai utna bas hai.

Viraat: (lying on the sofa) Forget it, main nahi jaunga.

Maanvi: (sat infront of him, as she reached there) Viraat, kyun itna Chep ho rahe ho yaar, bas bahar hi toh jaana hai.

Viraat: (eyes closed) Not interested.

Maanvi: (pulling him up, by his hand) Kyun nakhre dikha rahe ho Viraat, chalo na, mujhe apne Panters se milna hai.

Viraat: Ok, but pehle, (smirks) pyaar se please toh kehna.

Maanvi: (gritting her teeth/smiling sarcastically)Sure..PLEASEEE..

Viraat: (hand on his ears, while turning it towards her face) Sunai nahi diya, thoda zor se.

Maanvi: (irritatedly) Pleaseee...

Viraat: (smiles) Better. (getting up) Chalo. Beeji, hum thodi der mein aate hain.

Beeji: (smiles) Thik hai Beta.

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It has been more then half an hour, Viraat and Maanvi was sitting on the stairs of ganga ghat, waiting for her Panters.

Viraat: (irritatedly) Yahan baithane ke liye laayi ho? Wahan koi problem thi?

Maanvi: (looking behind her) Thodi der aur na Viraat, woh log aate hi honge.

Viraat: Maanvi, pichle andhe gante se yahi dialogue sun raha hun, mere toh kaan pak gaye hai.

Maanvi: (looking at him annoyedly) Thodi der wait nahi kar sakhte kya?
Viraat: Tumhari thodi der ke chakkar mein yahan raat ho jaye gi. Agar tumhe yaad na ho, toh main yaad dila dun, ki hume wapas bhi jaana hai Chandigrah.

Maanvi: (sweetly) Yaad hai na Viraat, bas thodi der. (looking behind/smiles) Woh dekho, aa gaye.

Viraat turned around and saw group of kids coming towards them.

Viraat: (looking at the direction Maanvi was looking) Itne chote bacche tumhare hi friends ho sakhte hai.

Maanvi: (looking at Viraat) Tarif kar rahe ho ya taana mar rahe ho?

Viraat: (smiles) Tumhe kya lagta hai?

Maanvi: (smiles) Tarif.

Viraat: (smirks) Main toh taana mar raha tha.

Maanvi: (irritatedly) Ullu Chep.

The group of kids, or should I say, Maanvi's Panters reached where VirMan were sitting. All of them ran towards Maanvi and gave her a big group hug, except one kid.

Sid: (10 year old boy) Maanvi Di, humne aapko kitna miss kiya aapko pata hai.

Chinky: (6 year old girl) Haan Maanvi Di, maine toh aapko, (hands spread out) itna miss kiya.

Maanvi: Maine bhi tum sabko bahut miss kiya.
Adi: (looking at Viraat) Woh kaun hai?

Maanvi looked at Viraat and smiled.

Maanvi: Intro khud doge ya main dun?

Viraat: Ok..(smiles at them) Hi Bacchon, main hun Viraat.

All of them were looking at Viraat as if he was an alien.

Viraat: (whisperes to Maanvi) Maanvi, yeh sab mujhe aise ghoor kyun rahein hai?

Maanvi: (laughingly) Tum ho hi itne daravne...
Viraat: Not Funny.

Maanvi: (still laughing) Tha toh.

Viraat: Chup karo. (looking at the Panters) Baccho, main tumhari Didi ka Husband hun.

Pooja: (5 year old girl/cutely) Hashbandh ki honda hai?

Maanvi looked at Viraat, with a smirk.

Maanvi: (cutely) Hashbandh Ki Honda Hai Viraat? Batao na.

Viraat: (calling her towards him) Yahan aao.

Pooja hasitatedly walked towards Viraat.

Viraat: (hand on her cheek) Kya naam hai aapka?

Pooja: Poo..Pooja.

Viraat: (smiles) Pooja, bahut hi pyaara naam hai, bilkul tumhari tarah.

Pooja: (smiles) Thank you.

Viraat: Tumhe husband kya hota hai nahi pata?

Pooja: (pouts) Nahi.

Viraat: Husband matlab Pati, yeh pata hai?

Pooja: (smiles widely) Haan.

Viraat: (smiles at her) Haan toh main tumhari Maanvi Di ka Pati hun.

Pooja: Ohh.

Viraat: Haan, (looking at the Panters) toh mujhse dosti karoge aap sab?

Adi: Hum ajnabiyon se dosti nahi karte.

Maanvi: Exactly Viraat. Hum ajnabiyon se dosti nahi karte.

Viraat: Arey par main toh ajnabee hun hi nahi na, main toh tum sab ka Jiju hun, (looking at Maanvi) not urs Maanvi.

Panters were looking at Viraat and then at Maanvi, thinking whether to accept Viraat as their friend or not. They looked at each other and smiled.

Viraat: So friends?

Pooja: (smiles) Friends.

Viraat: Thank You.

Maanvi looked at one of the boy, standing in between her Panters, who was continuously staring at her.

Maanvi: (smiles, looking at him) Tum kaun ho? Maine tumhe pehle kabhi nahi dekha.

Viraat looked at the direction Maanvi was looking.

Chinky: Maanvi Didi, yeh Pranav hai, yeh abhi jaldi yahan aaya hai, aap do hafte se yahan nahi thi na, toh aap isse nahi janti.

Pranav: (9 year old boy) Hi Maanvi.

Pooja: Pranav Maanvi Didi kaho, woh tumse badi hai.

Pranav: Nahi, main Didi nahi kahunga, main toh inhe pehli nazar mein pyaar karne laga hun.

A shocked and amused Maanvi looked at Viraat, who was looking at Pranav with a WTH look.

Viraat: Um, Pranav Beta, woh tumse bahut badi hai aur unki shadi bhi ho gayi hai. Tumhe nahi lagta ki tumhe apne umar ke ladkiyon par line marna chahiye.

Maanvi: Viraat, kya sikha rahe ho, Baccha hai woh abhi.

Viraat: (looking at Pranav/pointing at him) Yeh Baccha hai?

Pranav: Main Baccha nahi hun, aur mujhe Maanvi bahut pasand hai. I Love You.

Maanvi: (smiles) Aww, I Love You too Baby, tum bahut cute ho. (kisses on his cheek)

Viraat looked at Pranav and Maanvi with wide open eyes, he was actually jealous of him.

Pranav: (cutely) Toh hum shadi kab kareinge?

Viraat: (jealous) Kabhi nahi, woh shadi shuda hai, meri Patni hai woh.

Maanvi: Viraat, ek mintue. (looking at Pranav/sweetly) Pranav, sorry par meri toh shadi ho chuki hai, agar mujhe yeh Chep nahi milta toh main zarur tumse shadi kar leti.

Viraat: (shocked) Kya?

Maanvi: (looking at Viraat/finger on her lips) Shhh...

Pranav: Toh isse chodh do na, (smiles) main aapke saath shadi karne ke liye taiyaar hun.

Viraat: Oye..
Maanvi: Viraat, Baccha hai.

Viraat: (irritatedly) Koi Baccha nahi hai, tum par line mar raha hai woh.

Maanvi: Main samjha rahi hun na.

Viraat: Haan toh samjhao na.

Maanvi: (smiles at Pranav) Pranav, main iss Chep ko chodh deti, par main aisa nahi kar sakhti na. Tumhe toh koi aur bahut achi aur bahut pyaari ladki mil jayegi, bilkul (hands on his cheeks) tumhari tarah.

Pranav: (smiles) Sachi?

Maanvi: (smiles) Muchi.

Pranav: Aap usse pyaar karti ho?

Maanvi looked up at Viraat, her heart skipped millons of beats as Pranav asked her that question. She was confused, she didn't know what to say, she wanted to say no, but words were not coming out of her mouth. Her mind was froze, as if they didn't wanted to respond.

Maanvi: (looking down) Um,,main woh...Ahh,,,(looking at the Panters) Arey Panters hum (pointing at the mandir) wahan mandir mein ghumne chalte hai na.

Adi: Haan Maanvi Di, chalo.

Maanvi with Adi, Sid, Pooja, and Chinky went towards the mandir, leaving Viraat and Pranav behind. Pranav was looking at Viraat, who was looking at Maanvi walking away from them.

Pranav: Bahut achi hai na.

Viraat: (giving him a deadly glare) Woh meri hai.

Pranav: (turns to face him/hands on his hips) Aapko sharam nahi aati Bacche se jalte ho?

Viraat: Tumne toh abhi kaha tha ki tum Bacche nahi ho.

Pranav: Arey ladkiyon ke samne aise nahi kehte, (fixing his hair) impression kharab hota hai.

Viraat: (smiles amusedly) Bada chalun Baccha hai.
Pranav: Pyaar karte ho na usse?

Viraat: (looking towards the mandir) Kisse?

Pranav: (sits beside Viraat) Meri wali se?

Viraat: (looking at him) Oye kaha na meri hai woh.

Pranav: Toh ussi ke hi baare mein puch raha hun na.

Viraat: (looking at him with narrowed eyes) Tumhe kyun bataun?

Pranav: (hits his palm with his head) Uff...Usse nahi keh sakhte ho toh kam se kam mujhse toh keh do.

Viraat: Tumhe kisne kaha ki maine usse nahi kaha.

Pranav: (smiles) Baccha hun, par sab samjhta hun.

Viraat: Chal, bada aaya.

Pranav: Arey ab jalna band karo. Bahut khoobsurat hai, par meri type ki nahi hai.

Viraat: (smiles at him amusedly) Acha, toh kaun hai teri type ki?

Pranav: Thi toh Maanvi ki type ki, par ab badal liya. (frowns) Usski shadi jo ho gayi hai na, pategi nahi mujhse.

Viraat: Itna chota sa hai, par bada chalu hai.

Pranav: Shakal ya height par mat jao, dhoke khaoge.

Viraat: Haan pata hai.

Pranav: Ab toh bata do, pyaar karte ho ya (smiles) mere chances hai.

Viraat: Sochna bhi mat, bahut pyaar karta hun usse.

Pranav: Toh kehte kyun nahi? Darte ho usse?

Viraat: Nahi, usse nahi darta, ussko khone se darta hun.
Pranav: Nahi jaiye gi kahin, (smiles at him cutely) woh bhi shayad pyaar karti hai aapse.

Viraat: (raised eyebrow) Tumhe kaise pata?
Pranav: Kaha na, Baccha hun par sab samjhta hun.

Viraat: (laughingly) Ya right.

Pranav: Haan. Maine abhi usse bola tha toh uss ne bhi mujhse bola aur kiss bhi kiya. Aap bhi bol do, aapko bhi ek kiss mil jayegi.

Viraat: (ruffling his Pranav's hair) Oye sharam kar.

Pranav: Nahi, agar sharmata hi raha toh aapke hi jaise ho jaunga. Mujhe aap jaisa nahi banna.

Viraat: Oye tu mujhe nahi jaanta, (proudly) mujh par hazaaron ladkiyan marti hain. Agar main ek smile de dun na unhe toh mar miteingi mujhpe. Tarasti hai ladkiyan mere muh se I LOVE YOU sune ke liye.
Pranav: Woh ladkiyon ko chodho, aap toh apni khud ki Biwi ko I LOVE YOU nahi keh sakhte.

Viraat: (embarrassed) Haan, woh..woh toh bas...
Pranav: Kitne darte ho aap. Chalo main hi Maanvi par fir se chance marta hun, usse yeh bhi keh dunga ki aapko woh pasand nahi.

Viraat: Sochna bhi mat, warna..

Maanvi: Viraat, tum fir bechare ko daant rahe ho?

Maanvi, who came back with her Panters, heard Viraat giving warning to Pranav.

Viraat: Nahi Maanvi, main toh...

Maanvi: Kuch nahi sunna hai mujhe. Hume ab chalna chahiye, bahut late ho gaya hai, Chandigrah ke liye bhi nikalna hai.

Viraat: (cutely) Par...

Maanvi: Chalo Viraat. Acha Panter log, ab main jaati hun. Tum sabko milke bahut bahut bahut acha laga, khaskar tumse Pranav. (smiles/hands speard out) Welcome to our group.
Pranav: (smiles) Thank You, Maanvi...

Viraat: (smiles sweetly at him) Beta, Didi bol.

Pranav: (smiles) DIDI.
Maanvi: (surprised) Arey wah, issne tumhari baat maanli?

Viraat: Haan toh, tumhe kya laga hum dost nahi ban sakhte?

Pranav: Haan Maanvi Di, ab hum dost hai, aur Jiju bhi.

Viraat: That's like a good boy. (gettiing up, along with Pranav) Ok then Bacche log, aap sab se milke bahut acha laga. Hum fir kabhi mileinge, abhi hume jaana hai. Bye...(waving his hand)

Panters: Bye Viraat Jiju...Bye Maanvi Didi..(waving their hands)
Maanvi: Bye Panters. (waving bye)

Panters ran away, while VirMan made their way towards their car.

Viraat: (smilingly) Bahut cute hai na.

Maanvi: Haan, (proudly) mere jo friends hai.

Viraat: I'm actually surprised, itne cute bacche tumhare friends kaise ho sakhte hain.

Maanvi: (smirks) Khud ke baare mein bhi yahi sochte ho kya Chep?

Viraat: Nahi, main kyun khud ke baare mein aise sochne laga, main toh hun hi cute and sweet.

Maanvi: Kyun ki tum bhi toh mere dost ho na, aur cute and sweet..NO WAY...
Viraat: (laughingly) Acha?
Maanvi: (smiles) Haan.

VirMan smiled at each other and went back to the Chaudhary House. After bidding good bye to the Chaudharies, Viraat and Maanvi made their way back to Chandigrah.



Such an long update...I hope its gud enough...Plz leave ur comments n hit da lyk button if u lykd it..Thnk u..tc, LUV Aartii...

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hey Artii so sweeet update.. aweee manvi blushing so cute... i loved whole ganga ghat punters wala scene... nd pranav he is adorable nd cute... loved pranav nd virat convo.. nd also virman convo at the end... thanks fr such cute update... Edited by sreshta90 - 11 years ago
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Awesome update yaar..
Too good pleasee update soon...
Thanks for the PM...
Cant wait for your next update and PM...
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Originally posted by: sreshta90

hey Artii so sweeet update.. aweee manvi blushing so cute... i loved whole ganga ghat punters wala scene... nd pranav he is adorable nd cute... loved pranav nd virat convo.. nd also virman convo at the end... thanks fr such cute update... 

  Hey Sreshta...Thnk u sooo muchhh...glad u lykd dat part...n their convo...ur most wc..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chandiniebinda

Awesome update yaar..

Too good pleasee update soon...
Thanks for the PM...
Cant wait for your next update and PM...

  Thnk u so much...will update soon, n ur most wc..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lolzzz this is too good virat was getting jealous frm pranav...dailoges was fab as all ways...full on entertainment...cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Cute update... Can't wait till she realizes...
Thank you!
Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update thanxz for THE PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow this was really goood nd sweet ..loved it :-)
manvi confused abt virat haan ...;-)
thanx alott for the pm :-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG kasam se that was jus too gud this update was cute n funny n everythin else
i was glued to the screen readin this
pranav is soo sweet n cute bt very badmaash lolz kaise openly flirt kartha hai shaadi shuda ladki se
n jealous virat was damn cute
really hope virat says i luv u to manvi soon nw cuz even she luvs him bt she needs to realise it
really cnt wait for the update nw plz update it as soon as u can thanx for the pm😊