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HEY GUYSS M A NEW MEMBER IN D FORUM!! M SUFII!! AND I LOVE EHMMBH!! BASICALLY VIRIKA.!! WELL FRANKLY M NT A GOOD WRITER BT THOUGHT OF TRYINGG.!! HOPE U GUYSS WILL LYK IT.!! BFR STARTING WILL GIV U A INTRO PARA ABT WAT I THOUGHT.!! 😊
SO GUYSS D STORY NAME IS "AN ANGEL IN LIFE" HERE ANGEL MEANS VIRIKA'S DAUGHTER.! WELL WHN U WILL READ D STORY U WILL GOT TO KNW ABT DAT!! BUT WeLL FOR NOW SAY U HV TO WAIT AND WATCH.!! AND ALL TYPE OF FEEDBACKS.! GOOD, BAD ALL OUR WELCOME.! THOUGH I THINK BAD WILL CUM.! 😆
plz ignore spelling mistakes.!
PART - 1
(angel was now 3 yrs old) and she can speak a bit.!!!
all of dem sitting in d hall with virika's baby (for now dey havent thought any name but viren call her angel and so every1 for now call her baby only! 😊) dey al were chatting dat d telephone rang and d call was frm rishikesh! :
vanshika: helleo!
beeji: namaste vanshika ji! kaisi hai aap?
vanshika: arre beeji aap!! mein achi hun aap sab kaise hai?
(jeevika exitingly looking at vanshika)
beeji: vanshika ji agar aap bura na mane to mein aap se ek cheez puch skti hun?
vanshika: ji beeji zarror .! boliye na .! ye koi puchne ki bat thodi na!
beeji: jab se viren aur jeevika ka bacha hua hai hum me se koi unse mil nhi paya to agar aap bura na mane to kya jeevika thodi dino ke liye rishikesh aa skti hai??
vanshika: jii beeji kyu nhi! mein ek bar didi aur bauji se puch ke apko btati hun!!
every1 looking at vanshika wat happend.! vanshika told everythingg to d family and every1 agrees except viren! he was quite sad coz his angel ws going along with her princess(jeevika) every1 went to dere rooms .! jeevika cud easily understand dat viren is nt so happy so he asked him:
jeevika: viren ji agar apko angel ke saath rehna hai to mein mana kr deti hun mein bad mein chali jaungii!
viren: nhi nhi! aisi koi baat nhi hai! mujhe pta hai tum dono se dur rehne mere liye mushkil hai lekin tumhe bhi to unki yad aati hogi!
jeevika: ati to hai par apko aise chod ke?
viren : arre tum chali jao leking jaldi aana.! plz!
jeevika:jii!! mein jaldii aungii kyunki mujhe pta hai angel ke papa usse bht miss krenge.!!
viren: wo to mein krunga.! aur tumhe bhi! 😉
jeevika: (blushingg) viren jiii!!
viren: hmm
jeevika: aap bhi chaliye na? apko yaad hai na apne promise kiya tha ki aap bhi mere saath rihikesh chalenge?
viren: umm chal to skta hhun.!! ek bar dadaji se puch ke aata hun! jab tak tum meri angel ko sula do raat bht ho gye hai!
jeevika : ji!
viren came back sadly after tallking to dadaji!
jeevika: viren ji kya hua?
viren: dadaji ne btaya ki 2 din tak meri important meeting hai!
jeevika: aww.! ab kya kre.!?
viren: kuch nhi kl tum chali jao! fir mein tumhe lene aunga na.!
dey both slept! early in d morning angel start crying jeevika woke up and make her sleep again and asked viren to wake up so dat he can get ready for his meeting.! dey al get ready and were in hall saying good bye to both jeevika and angel,! as d last prsn standing ws viren as jeevika went to him she can clearly see sadness in viren's eye.! viren hugged angel and asked jeevika to take care of herself and angel.! jeevika said bye to every1 and left and so a viren left for his office he was nt able to concentrate on everythingg ..!! he was really frustrated with out both his angel and princess.! meanwhile dadaji came and give oone more file to him.!he was fully irritated.!! and dat tym jeevika called him:
viren: helleo
jeevika : heleo viren ji! kya hua? apki awaz
viren : kuch nhi bht kam hai kuch nhi .! bad mein bat krta hun!
jeevika:aise kaise acha usniye aaj apko pta hai angel apko bht miss kr rhi hai!!
viren: mein bhii!!
jeevika ws telling him sumthingg.! viren was highly pissed of by seeing so much files pendingg.!!! and he shouted on jeevika>!
jeevika: aap chila kyu rhe hai! bol dete mein bat hi nhi krti!
viren: (angrily) to kisne kha kro tum to chali gye na apne ghar maze kro! mujhe kyu bar bar pareshan kr rhi ho!
jeevika: PAReSHAN? theek hai to fir mein aapse baat hi nhi krti! mein hi sari pareshani khadi krti hun na.!
as she cutted d phn viren was lyk arre yr ye maine kya kr diya??
he went home and virat came to him ya aap ne kya kr diya apne bhabhi pe kyu chilaya.!
viren: tujhe kaise pta?
virat: manvi ka phn aya tha.! jeevika bhabhi bht naraz hai!
viren: arre yr virat bhai wo dadaji ne itni files de di.! wo to thodi naraz kal hi ho gye thi jab usne mujhse rishikesh chalne ko kaha aur jab mein dadaji se puch ke aya to unhe mana kr diya fir subah se files bht ho gye hai bht sara kam pendingg tha usme jeevika ka cal aa gya to ...
virat: ohh to ye baat hai.! ok bhai whn virat is here nt fear.! i will do sumthingg.!!
on oder hand manvi ws pacifiyingg jeevika.! ki jeju mst be busy dats y or else hav u ever saw jeju talking lyk dat!
jeevika: to pyaar se bhi to bol skte the chilane ki kya baat thi!?
manvi : arre di tension mein honge..!
jeevika: nhi mujhe unse baat hi nhi krni.!
viren continuosulyy calling jeevika! whn he tried for d last tym she picked up d phn and said:
jeevika: mujhe apse ki bat nhi krni .!! aapko na mera kuch hai na angel ka.! kaam ke chakar mein apne mujhse itne zor se baat ki!
viren: arre jeevika tum galat samaj rhi ho!
jeevika: apne shi kha mein galat hi samajti hun!!
viren: arre jeevikaa.!!
jeevika: rehen de jiye .!
she cutted d phn!!
virat came running said dat he asked dadaji dat u can leave for rishikesh tommo morningg.! viren was happy! and virat informed manvi dat viren is cuming dere so she asked virat to join too!! dey all wil hav fun.! virat said nice idea.! he asked viren said sure chal na.! manvi said done den.! mein ghar mein sabko batati hun except jeevika di nhi to jeju surprise kaise dengee.!! haan haan theke bandariya mein rakhta hun.! han theke chep.!!
d nxt day both brothers dere in rishikesh.! manvi asked viren to go upstairs jeevika and angel r dere in d room! viren said hows her mood.!? manvi said better.! all d best jeju! all d best bhai virat said ..! thank u both of u!
he went saw angel saying .!
angel: mujhe papa se bat krni hai!
jeevika : kyu? chup chap bethi rho!
angel: papa aap se zyada ache hai wo dat te nhi hai!
jeevika; to apne papa pas ruk jati fir.!
angel: (screamed) papaaa..!!
jeevika looked around! and was shocked seeing viren dere!
viren: aww my angel kaise ho.! pta hai i missed u alot.!
angel: apko pta hai papa.! mummy bht naraz hai apse.!
viren : pta hai mujhe.! ab aap mano na apni mummy ko!
angel: nhii papa aap hi mnao mein mannu pas ja rhi.!!
angel shouted and ran out of d room!! mannnuuu.!!
jeevika: aap yha kyu aye? jab apko mujhe problem thi?
viren: wo tumhe bhi pta hai aur mujhe bhi ki mein uss tym bht thaka aur gusse me tha.! m sorry! mrs.vadhera.! pplz.!! aap mujhe plz maaf kr dijiye.!
jeevika: mr.vadhera apko itni asani se mafi nhi milegi!!
viren: to btaye mein kya kr skta hun!?
jeevika: wo mein hi dkehungi ki mujhe kab apse bat krna hai!
and she left d room!
will continue if u all willl lyk it.!! thank you! do leave feedbacks.!
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