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mel seriously yaar i did not think tat you will end it so soon but the end was beatiful loved it

Originally posted by: rsroopali

omggg

i hv a daughter

haiii nice name Mayapariii

n my cat name is maya but we call her mayapuri

n haiii my devil sis got married 

n is duniya keee almost all animals must have come 

im 100% sure

n wowww a tiger in suit 

superbbb

hum dono duniya badal rahe haiii

dekha animals also need clothes 

we r campigning for that

yeah superb plannn

n maaneet sallyyy sada Ruchs ke ff padh kekhush rahooo

n ruchs movie mein MSK n GSK haiii naaa...

n sara awe sooo cute maan geet daughter superbbb

n Music_girl ka kya hua??????

waiting for her alsooo

n agent ajeen congooo

luved ittt

superbbb

muahhh

oh really how cute😳
😆 what is your guys next move animals should go to school😆
of course who else will she cast😆
oops I forgot wait I will edit thx for pointing that out.

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

who said i m angry

main to bas teri kati ki hai

or dirty revenge ki to tu baat hi mat kar

waha to starting se hi maam ne maan ki vaat laga rakhi hai

I never said you are angry I said your the only one whom never gets angry at me whatever I do. acha seems like dirty revenge ke paas bhi empty post mile ge but hey you're maan's daughter in that ff and check you scrap

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

dil ke tukde tukde   kar ke

aur yeh ff bhi band karke

yeh toh muskira kar chal diye

jaate jaate

yeh to bataja kur kahi hum mile 

kiske liye

🤣 wah kya poem that me totally fida will you write poems for dirty revenge (puppy eyes) love ya

Originally posted by: jyoti_l

cant believe it ended...

loved the end n the epilogue...

thnx for giving us this story...

loved reading it...

will miss this one...

aww me feel flattered😳

Originally posted by: sdlife19

mel seriously yaar i did not think tat you will end it so soon but the end was beatiful loved it

 

thx for pm

thank you sweets

Originally posted by: mel420

I never said you are angry I said your the only one whom never gets angry at me whatever I do. acha seems like dirty revenge ke paas bhi empty post mile ge but hey you're maan's daughter in that ff and check you scrap

Originally posted by: mel420

🤣 wah kya poem that me totally fida will you write poems for dirty revenge (puppy eyes) love ya

awesome ending!
loved it!

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

chal hat

as i said D R ki baat mat kar

waha par to maam ne 

baap bati ko paada hone se pahle hi alag kar diya

pata nahi mere dear daddy ko pata bhi hai ya ke nahi ki uski

itni lovely

beautiful

sweet 

caring

naive

simple

beti bhi hai

naive caring simple, sweet, lovely 😆 sun re ho babaij kitna jhoot bole ri hai🤣

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

okkk

but on one condition

first make my dear father sing poem for me in night

okay done pakka but I will write that one😈
Edited by mel420 - 12 years ago