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Posted: 12 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: Rmuk

Wow I am first...
beautiful start dear.
I loved each and every part of it.
arrgh...dippanita, jay and t are really mean.
I think abhay slept with piya in guest room. I am really eager to know their reaction in morning.
Thanks for the pm.
pls update soon.
u are a awesome writer dear.


Thank you so much for liking it dear.
You've guessed it right it is piya but remember abhay hasn't fallen asleep yet.
I'll update soon.
Thanks for calling me an awesome writer.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: anjali0111

nice update!!!!!!!!!๐Ÿ‘โญ๏ธ

liked the raichand family.๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ...the way u portrayed each n every character was nice.

all the elders r nice except Dipanita๐Ÿ˜ก ...she is so evil.๐Ÿ˜ˆ

n jeh๐Ÿ˜’...i pity on him..i feel he is not evil like his mom ...poor guy caught betwen his mom's plans for gaining power n money...the way he stare pia...i guess that he likes her...but not mixing up wid her due to his mom.๐Ÿค”

sid is adorable...truly a responsible big bro.

misha is cool๐Ÿ˜Ž, T is bimbo๐Ÿคช n pia is of reserved nature n sweet as always.๐Ÿ˜Š

abhay is quite different...a pampered young bro, fun person n irresponsible son...hmmm...interesting.๐Ÿ˜‰

so i guess abhay has accidently landed in pia's room๐Ÿ˜ณ...what a first meeting ๐Ÿ˜†waiting for their reaction.๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰

continue soon.๐Ÿ˜Š



Thank you for this lovely comment.
You've understood the characters really well especially Jeh.
Yes he is in piya's room- i won't hide this everyone knows.
I'll continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: lost_in_love

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Lovely start tez...๐Ÿ‘the whole family ws beautifuly described...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ T is as usual brainless ๐Ÿ˜† jay a dumb ๐Ÿฅฑ...dancng to hs mothr's tunes n dippanita...urrgh...less said the bettr..!!!
Lovd pia...she's sweet n calm...abhay's nice yet naughty fun lovng boy...though he's diffrnt still lykd hm already...๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜ณ haw...abhay landed straight at pia's room n tht too n hr bed!!! ๐Ÿ˜ฒHaha...it will b really fun to watch bth of their reactns n d mrng...!!๐Ÿ˜† Wat an entry...๐Ÿคฃ 1st meetng is realy gonna b rockng...๐Ÿ˜‰
lukng forward to abhiya meeting...cntinue asap..
Thanx 4 the pm...tk.cre.. ๐Ÿ˜Š

-Indu


Thank you Indu.
You're right about the characters that's exactly how they are.
And remember abhay has not fallen asleep yet.
I'll update soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: abhayfan_dishu

wow thats an awesome update. and abhay ne entry maari to seedhe pia ke saath bed pe ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿคฃ


Thanks
You know its Piya? It could be T... just joking it is Piya.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

Okay lovely first chapter... Liked how Misha teased the bimboshree ๐Ÿ˜† Dipannita appears to be a first class villain... Abhay on the bed first thing ๐Ÿ˜›continue soon!


Thank you.
I don't know how bimboshree came to my mind- its weird. I don't remember if they used this term in the show. Yep Dipz is villain and I sent Abhay straight to bed.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: abhiya0006

loved the first update!! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘


Dipanita looks to be evil and T is a real Bimbo!!๐Ÿ˜ก

Looks like Abhiya wil meet soon๐Ÿ˜†

thanx for the pm and do continue soon๐Ÿ˜Š


Thanks for loving it.
That is exactly what Dipz and T are.
Abhiya meeting I had already written but I thought it's a right point to stop.
I'll continue soon.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: abhiora

wow!!awesum update taz!!rofl!!t is such a bimbo..luving the charctr of abhay already..haha he goes straight 2 da room where piya is ..cntnu asap:-)


Thank you!
I'm glad you're loving Abhay and i'll continue asap.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: shivanipandit29

totally loved it omg Abhay went into piya's room n slept there. wanna see there reactions๐Ÿคฃ in the morning. loving Abhay already seedhe piya ke room main . kya entry mari .๐Ÿคฃ
thanks for the pm


Thank you so much for loving it!
But Abhay is not asleep yet.
You're welcome.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

awsum start.evryne in d family is gud except dipanita.i lvd dat line-t was busy checking dipanita's lipstick...dis cracked me up. Abhay has arrived & landed straight in pia's room...can't wait 2 read d nxt part.


Thanks for your lovely comment.
Yes Abhay went straight to Piya's room.
I'm glad you want to read on, i'll continue it soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70

Thanks๐Ÿ˜Š

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