Arhi FF |Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| *Complete!* #2

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

batgirl67

@batgirl67

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#161

really liked how she realizes the feelings! and anjali i thought you would be smart enough to think about what might your husband be doing!

Quote

Ashi

@TheThoughtCrime

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#162

I've been reading through your fan fiction.

Really good work. Highly charged and very emotional.

Thanks. :)

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

blue_sapphire

@blue_sapphire

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#163

wow...i read ur FF at one shot...and god u write amazingly...u give every detail so flawlessly..that u actually have me glued to the screen...i would love to know what happens next!!

could u plzz PM me when u update!!!

thanks a lot

Quote

jenshad

@jenshad

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#164

Awww, The Sister Scene Was Cuteee :) 🤗 This Is Getting Good; The BESTTT Point, Arnav Realizing His Love 😳

Quote

suadvani

@suadvani

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#165

Wow - simply amazing - gosh the emotions simply ooze out of your words!!

I just read 26, 27 and 28 (been awol for a while.. been reading non IF stuff like the hunger games and shades of grey trilogys..) in a way am glad i did as i get to come back and read multiple chapters in one go.. and seriously i have no words..

the words your wrote - Arnav describing how he felt - wow.. the broken grass and injury.. whole dragonfly episode.. bringing humor to a really intense situation.. amazing.. Khushi reading maa's etter and really getting it.. getting arnavs words and feelings .. wow...

I love your writing - wish it would go on and on and on...

cantw aut for the next!

Quote

randomiesta

@randomiesta

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#166

I absolutely loved your ff...your vocabulary is phenomenal and you've described Arhi's emotional turmoil with such clarity as i had previously deemed impossible...the long updates are great...i hope you're not considering winding up the ff anytime soon...please keep the awesome work coming...btw good luck with your r exams!!

Quote

667300

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#167

Finally caught up on everything! Loved the updates and Khushi slightly more accepting of Arnav's touch. Love how you interwove the letter and Khushi's changing ideas about Arnav :D

Quote

smileyhug7679

@smileyhug7679

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#168

Oh my god just stumbled upon ur FF

So amazing...

Man u such a vivid and creative writer

We so much of insigh n both Arnav's and kushis feeling in each chapter

Wow u got me stumped there...

I am simply amazed and was so thrilled while reding the chapters. U have given the characters so much depth truly grateful I wish our ipkknd shows this depth in the story ...

Pls pm me when u update

Love ur cynical jokes inbetween serious convo I mean with Kushi character as well as Arnav lved the one liner from Arnav

This thing keeping ringing always at the wrong time..

Ha ha that was so funny I was laughing like crazy... In such heat of moment that line was a stress reliever...

Lve how ur story has shaped up so eager to know why has Anjali chnaged and is Kushi going to completely accept Arnav now that she has realised and believed wat arnav feels for her...

Quote

ashna27

@ashna27

Navigator

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#169

so i read the entire thing in the one sitting...great work :)

and i really do love the persistence of arnav in this...and i also like his dialogue...the cvs could definately do with taking a page out of your book :)

keep it coming...and do add me to your PM list