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mchandel

@mchandel

Senior Member

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Absolutely fantastically superb!!

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jtammareddy

@jtammareddy

Senior Member

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

👏👏👏 Wonderfully done. Very emotional. U r a wonderful writer. Plz do continue ...

Thank u for sharing.

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DarkDove

@DarkDove

Goldie

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Hey Simran!!!

this is cute and hot at the same time!!

i loved how arnav kept asking her if she loves him!!

and then.. the kiss!!!! aahhh!!! it was amazing!!!

i wish this would happen in the show!!! i mean, cant arnav see that khushi is soo innocent! why would she want to be with shyam!!?? arnav must think about this!!!

i love how he made her confess!!!

lovely os

xxx

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-FarwiiDobaara-

@-FarwiiDobaara-

IF-Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Awesome OS...!!! Edited by SweetFarwii - 12 years ago

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Sukirti Singh Raizada

@sukirtiraizada

Goldie

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

luved it...

u shuld continue...

thanx for the pm..

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Ishrafan11

@Ishrafan11

IF-Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Great os loved it aww they kissed so cute. Thanks for the pm.

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dumas

@dumas

IF-Stunnerz

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

loved it very beautifully done well written and perfect thanks for the pm

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Bless

@Bless

Senior Member

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

beautifully written !!!!

Thanks for the pm dear!!!!

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sRistee

@crazy44

Goldie

Posted: 12 years ago

#49

that was so so awesome simran and very cute too !! i loved it <3

you should write more of it , you are an awesome writeer!! and i love reading your work 😃

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

IF-Stunnerz

Posted: 10 years ago

#50

what to do with him
this man is too much
well things worked out though

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