Originally posted by: gadhadada
buddy plz dunt hurt ur eyes again... its only a dumped scarape[/DIV]
Originally posted by: maggi.masala
Wow it was marvelous ⭐️ 😃 👏 👍🏼
Kya Dada itni to awesome hai aap bhi na...
Full of interest
Amazing story
Rich of Knowledg e 👏
Wat more a reader wants...
Originally posted by: p.rvaidya
Aahhh!!That was just amazing story dada... ⭐️
Perfectly 'A suspense' story...Loved it... 🥳
and ur search is really praiseworthy... 😃
Jst a lil thing...M too agree with Vis di...
Originally posted by: guglu-baby
thx fr ur advice buddy bt it's useless now as i'v already read d whole thng(n hence hurt my eyes again)..
Abt d story- yes! it waz gud n interesting..d plot waz cleverly written.. i'm not aware of dis daksh case, jst took him to be yet another criminal..
@bold: 'scarape'?? Wht is dat?[/QUOTE]ohhh i m really sorry for ur eye strain AGAIN...😆GUGLU I was trying to give my aspect but dunt ruin the original story... but i think i mishandled😡... chalo koi nahi... chalta hay BOSS...😉bundles of THANK U...😳i dumped it in scrape then again rewrite it again...
Originally posted by: 9846102477ms
Sorry DADA 4 late rply.. Nice story,.. Taarif ke liye words kam padh raha hai.. (My cell betrayed me..) Thnx 4 PM.
nice story dada...👍🏼
i've read half of it...will complete it soon...shuruvat to acchi hai...😃👏yakeen hai anta bhi acchi hi hogi...😃thanks for PM🤗
Originally posted by: sherdilali
HEY DADA exams se pahle story maza aa gya abhi to sirf oopar oopar se parhi hey jaisey CLG TEST se 5 minute pahle test repeat kartey it seems very nice..
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