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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Ddhi
guys... main apni ff ka kya karoon...
previous parts to 1st fc me reh gaye...

Well copy paste all the part here.. if ya want 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

@Loney & Deepak : thank you guys...i hope i was not rude

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@Deepak : yup..I m updating my FF in 5 minutes😉

the part 5 of ur FF was AWESOME...really looking forward to Jayra's trip now..

I m excited to read some romantic moments😳

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Ddhi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Here,

i present to u a new...

JayRa Fanfiction created by

Deepak...

Title:- ISHQ

INTRODUCTION:

JAY SONI...

jay, a rich,handsome,sensible,young guy studying in a college in Delhi. He hd lost his parents in a very early age. his parents hs left him with so much of money. He hs everything in life but no true love. he hs many friends. Jay loves Ragini but never felt about it... He hs one younger brother in his life..

RAGINI KHANNA

Ragini is a simple,beautiful,middle class girl who studies wid Jay. She hs a family consisting of her parents.She is full of life & a very intelligent student. She is best friend wid Jay & secretly she loves her a lot but hasnt have d odassity to confess her love...

JENNIFER WINGET

Jennifer is a spoilt brat who just looks after money. she is very close to jay just because of his money. She hates Ragini..

SANAYA IRANI

Sanaya is Ragini best friend.she knows ragini love for jay. so she always try to make jay & ragini feel each other love..

KARAN

Karan is jay younger brother who respect his brother a lot as he brings him up. He wants his brother to marry ragini & thus helps sanaya in uniting jay-ragini.

SUPRIYA

Supriya is ragini mom. She loves her daughter a lot & understands her love for jay... Jay also respects her a lot.

WILL INTRODUCE OTHER CHARACTER AS NEEDED.

Part-1

SONI MANSION:

Jay coming down for breakfast

karan:Good morning bhai...

jay: Good morning karu(karan)... chal bahut late ho gaye hain college k liye. ragini k ghar se use bhi pick up karna hai...

karan: ok bhai.. chalo chalte hain...

KHANNA HOUSE:

ragini:maa mein college jaa rahi hoon jay aur karan aa gaye honge...

supriya:Beta ruko nashta to kar lo...

Ragini:Nhi maa, bahut late ho gaya h, jay mera wait kar raha hoga...

supriya:itna pyaar karti ho jay se ki usko thoda intezaar b nhi karva sakti....

beta usko bata kyun nhi deti.. m sure wo b tjhse pyaar karta h...

ragini:nhi maa main jay se ye nhi keh sakti..pata nhi wo mere baare me kya sochega.. aur wo waise b jennifer se pyaar karta h..

Jay arrives in khanna house wid karan...

jay:namaste aunty,hii ragi...

karan:namaste aunty,hii ragi...

supriya:namaste beta,lo abhi abhi tumhare hi baat kar rahe the hum

jay:ye zaroor meri buraai kar rahi hogi...

ragini:are nhi DODO(jay)... main nhi kar rahi thi... ab chalna nhi h late ho rahe h...

jay:ohh ya... bye aunty

ragini:bye maa...

supriya:bye beta aur sambhal ke car chalana...

part-1 finish

hw ws it guys

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Ddhi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

HERE,

IS THE SECOND PART

VALENTINE DAY

Morning in SONI MANSION

Jay: Good morning karu...

Karan: Good morning bro...

Jay: aaj itna sajh dhaj ke kahaan ja raha h. kya plan hai bhai...

karan: bhai dont tell me ki aapko nhi pata ki aaj kya h😲

jay: aaj k din mein aisa special kya h... wait!!!! kahin Madona tjhe body massage to nhi dene wali...😆

karan: kya bhai aap bhi na... dukhti rag pe haath rakh dete ho...

kaash aisa ho pata...😍

jay: ohh madona k deewane... madona k sapne dekhna band kar aur chup chap gadi mein baith...

karan(while sitting in car): bhai aapko janna nhi h ki main kyun itna sajh dhaja hoon...😭

jay: no kahoonga to nhi batayega kya😆. chal phut ab...

karan: bhai aaj VALENTINE DAY hai...

jay: to kya karoon main laddoo pede baatoon... tu to jaanta ha na ki main valentine day mein nhi manta... i mean agar koi kisi se sacha pyaar karta h to sirf ek din hi kyun usse pyaar jatata hai...

aur waise b mjhe mera pyaar abhi mila nhi h...

nd u know main sirf Ragi ko flower deta hoon nd wo b yellow...

karan: par bhai aapko to bahut saare flowers milte hai har valentine pe nd sabse zyada to us jennifer se milte h jo aap par attack karne k liye everready rehti h...😆

jay: karu, tu jaanta h ki jenny sirf meri achchi dost h... main maanta hoon ki tum sab use pasand nhi karte... nd main bhi use sirf dost maanta hoon aur kuch nhi...

karan: arre bhai aapne right turn kyun le liya ..., Ragi ko pick nhi karna kya...😲

jay: nhi wo aaj sanaya k saath aayegi...

karan: ok...

AT FLOWER SHOP

Ragini: bhaiya ek red rose & ek yellow rose dena...

sanaya: ragi, tu har valentine pe ek red aur ek yellow rose kyun leti h?? aur yellow jiske liye leti h use saath me red b de diya kar...

Ragini: matlab kya h tera???

sanaya: matlab ye ki tu jay ko kyun nhi bata deti ki tu usse kitna pyaar karti h... kab tak sirf yellow rose deti rahegi , ab red pe to pahunch... sach me yaar tu to indian local train se b slow chalti h...😆

ragini: shut up!!!! tu jaanti h na ki main nhi bol sakti...

sanaya: kyun,agar tu bol degi to tjhe tax bharna padega kya...

ragini: yaar tu jaanti h ki jay jennifer se pyaar karta h... maine agar ye bol diya to kahin main jay ko kho doongi...

sanaya: tjhe kisne bol diya ki jay usse pyaar karta h??

ragini: bolne ki kya zaroorat hai... jis tarah se dono milte h usse pata chal jata h...

sanaya: us angle se to tu aur jay aise chipke rehte ho ki lagta h ki husband-wife khare h...😆

main kuch nhi jaanti aaj tjhe bolna padega aur agar tu nhi bolegi to phir dekh lio...

COLLEGE

jay: yaar karu ye ragi aur sani kahaan reh gayi...

karan: wo dkho bhaiya , aa gayi dono...

jay smiles while seeing ragini in red dress...

jay: kahaan reh gayi thi tum dono...

sanaya: are kuch nhi ... ek dodo doosre dodo k liye flower kharid raha tha...😆

karan: matlab???

sanaya: matlab ki ragi jay k liye flower kharid rahi thi...

as ragini ws abt to give jay the red rose... jeniffer screams: jay...

jay: arre jennifer...😊

ragini kept her red rose & give yellow rose to jay...😭

jennifer: jay tumhare liye aaj main yellow nhi red rose layi hoon...

jay: matlab???

jennifer: matlab ye ki I LOVE U JAY... & THEN SHE KISSES JAY...😳

ragini seeing all this & getting very sad...😭

jay: behave urself jennifer ... main tumse pyaar nhi karta & aage se mjhse milne ki koshish mat karna...😡... lets go guys...

jennifer feels really humiliated & thinks to take revenge 4m jay...

COLLEGE CANTEEN

Ragini seeing jay angry & ask: jay kya tum sach me jennifer se pyaar nhi karte...

jay: what??? kya tumhe lagta tha ki main jennifer se pyaar karta hoon, ragz i thought ki tum to mjhe samjhti ho... main pyaar nhi karta jenny se...

ragini feeks really happy

sanaya: chalo yaar aaj valentine h to kuch party shaty to banti h...

karan: haan yaar party to banti h & isliye maine surprise plan karke rakha h...

ragini: kya surprise h??

karan: abhi nhi shaam ko pata chalega...

part 2 ends here...

hw is it??

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Ddhi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

HERE,

IS THE THIRD PART

TITLE PARTY TIME

Soni mansion

jay: chal karu jaldi kar yaar late ho raha h...

karan: aaya bhai... waise aapko itni jaldi kyun h... aapko kiske saath valentine manana h...

jay ws about to say ragini but stops... he is recognising that ragini hs got special importance in his life...😳

karan reads his bro mind & he is confident that he(jay) & ragini both will not confess their love so easily... so he said: bhai aap chalo main aa jaoonga...

jay: par yaar main akela kaise jaaoon...

karan: are aap ragini ko le jao coz wo b akeli h kyunki sanaya mere saath baad me aayegi...

jay said ok & leaves...

karan dialling sanaya no.

karan: hii sanaya,sun tu ragini se keh ki mjhe thoda kaam h to wo akeli chali jaye bhai k saath...

sanaya: chal thik h, waise ye tera plan h kya...

karan: yes, chal ok bye...

KHANNA HOUSE

sanaya: wow ragi tu to yaar item lag rahi h...

ragini: shut up!!! waise jay ko pasand to aayegi na ye dress...

sanaya: dress ka to pata nhi par dress pehnne wali zaroor pasand aayegi... are jay se yaad aaya ki abhi karan ka phone aaya tha... use kuch zaroori kaam h to tu aur jay akele pahuch jana party me... hum dono baad me aayenge... aur haan dumbo is akelepan ko utilise kariyo...

HORN BLOWING

ragini: lagta h jay aa gaya... chal thik h bye... jaldi aana...

JAY WS WAITING FOR RAGINI IN CAR & AS RAGINI CAME IN FRONT OF HIM, HE LOST HIS SENSES... GOSH SHE WS LOOKING EPIC BEAUTY IN RED SALWAAR KAMEEZ...

ragini: kya hua aise kya dekh raha h...

jay is still staring her beauty...

ragini: jay...jay...jay...

jay gets out of his dreams & said: mjhe nhi pata tha ki tu itni sunder h... u r looking so beautiful...

ragini: thnxx ab chale

jay: yes chal...

outside the party area jennifer hs all planned up to take revenge 4m jay by giving photo of jay to gunda's & asking them to beat him...

jay & ragini reaches d destination & jay opens d door of ragini & offer her to come out... jay ws clear dat he hs some feelings 4 ragini but he ws not able to confess it... same goes wid ragini...

then when they were having an eye lock & jay ws about to confess...

somebody hits jay head 4m back...

ragini screams jay... but dey dnt stop...

den karan & sanaya reaches the destination thinking that jay & ragini both surely hs confessed...

they were shocked to see d gunda's hitting jay & ragini screaming helplessly...

karan runs & save hi bro...

then ragini get down to jay & takes his head in his lap... & muttered...

jay tumhe kuch nhi hoga... main tumhe kuch nhi hone dungi...

she ws crying very loudly & sanaya & karan ws watching this & they too getting too emotional...

suddenly ragini says...

open up d eyes jay... open up... i cnt live without u jay...

I LOVE U JAY... I LOVE U... PLZ OPEN UP D EYES JAY... I LOVE U JAY

Jay open up d eyes & ask:

sach...

ragini ws shocked to see jay open up his eyes & talked to her...

they both stands up...

ragini: tu natak kar raha tha jay... tu behosh nhi tha...

jay: nhi main to sirf ye janna chahata tha ki tu b mjhse pyaar karti h ya nhi...

ragini: means??? ki tu b ... mjhse...😳

jay: yes, I LOVE U TOO RAGINI...

ragini ws very happy & ws not able to say any word as she is so overwhelmed...

jay get down on one knee & proposed ragini by offering her the red rose...

& said: will u be my valentine... for ever & ever & ever...

ragini teasingly said: NO, tune kyun nhi kaha mjhse pehle... main aise ladke ki valentine nhi banoongi jo feelings express na karna jaanta ho... aur jo itna ghatiya mazzak kare behosh hone ka...

looking all this karan said: are yaar tum dono kya kar rahe ho. ek to ini mushkil confess kiya h aur ab dono lad rahe ho...

jay: are main thodi lad raha hoon, ye ladkiyon ke nakhre hi aise hote h, zara sa publicly i love u kya bol do , inke bhaav bad jaate hain...😆

ragini ( shockingly): kya main nakhre kar rahi hoon...

jay: aur nhi to kya main kar raha hoon...

fight continues... then sanaya interferred & said: chalo chodo ab ye ladaai... yaar aaj valentine day h aur tum dono ek doosre k valentine hote hue aise lad rahe ho... are tum dona ko to hug karna chahiye & kiss karna chahiye... dekho aise...

& then sanaya kisses karan & karan ws all shocked😲

ragini & jay forget the fight & start coming close to each other

& then they hug each other & then they kiss each other...😳

AND THEN EVERYBODY SCREAMS...

HAPPY VALENTINE DAY

PART 3 ENDS

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

HERE,

IS THE 4TH PART,

TITLE PYAAR HUA,

IKRAAR BHI HO GAYA

KHANNA HOUSE:

Ragini is on 7th sky & finding her favourite dress... while her mom enters...

mom: kya doondh rahi ho beta...

ragini:wo maa meri favourite pink dress jo aap laye the na pichli diwali par... wo doondh rahi hoon...

mom:wo dress tjhe aaj hi kyun pehni h... bahut time ho gaya tune wo dress nhi... jab bhi main kehti thi to tu ye keh kar taal deti thi ki kisi khaas occassion pe pehnoongi... to phir aaj kya special h...

ragini blushes & fumbly says: wo maa... aise hi... bas...

mom: ok samajh gayi... jay k liye pehan rahi h na...

ragini gets surprised & ask her: aapko kaise pata???😲

mom: beta main teri maa hoon, apni bachhi ki har khushi ko jaanti hoon... bata jay b tjhse pyaar karta h na...

ragini smilingly & blushingly says: yes maa, jay b mjhse bahut pyaar karta h, aur main aaj bahut khush hoon... both hug each other...

horn blows...

ragini:o mar gaye maa, jay aa gaya... jaldi dress do maa...

jay waiting 4 ragini outside his house... ragini comes... my words she looks gorgeous...😍

jay looks her & smiles & says: welcome maam, ur servant is at ur service... ab chale...

then they both sit in car & left 4 college... supriya ws seeing this 4m balcony & feels really happy...

IN CAR

jay: waise tu aaj itna saj dhaj ke kyun aayi h... teri shaadi h kya aaj???

ragini teasingly says: haan... aaj meri shaadi h...

jay suddenly stop d car & screamingly ask: kisse???😆

ragini: hai koi handsome,smart,dashing boy jo ki mere liye kuch b kar sakta h... jo mjhe bahut pyaar karta h...

jay in anger: kaun h wo jisko apni jaan pyaari nhi h... uska naam to bata...

ragini: uska naam h ... jay...

jay feels a sigh of relief... & suddenly start leaning on ragini... they both hd a eyelock...then after 2 min. jay said: do min k liye to meri jaan hi nikal gayi thi... aisa mazzak dobara kiya na to phir...

ragini: to phir... kya karega???

jay: main phir apni jaan de doonga kyunki tere bina main nhi ji sakta ragi...

ragini & jay gets emotional & then ragini asks: itna pyaar karte ho mjhse??

jay nods his head & then he further leaned & kissed her forehead & then they both hug each other...

IN COLLEGE

karan: yaar bhai n ragi kahaan reh gaye

sanaya: are samjha kar... dono naye navele pyaar me pade h to thoda time to lagayenge na...

karan: ye lo aa gaye... bhai kahaan reh gaye the aap... chalo forget it... aapko ek good news sunani h

jay: good news... kya??/

karan: bhai apna college tour pe jaa raha h aur wo b OOTY...

JAY: what!!!!! dats a gr8 news...

everybody ws happy but ragini gets sad...

PART 4 ENDS

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loney

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Hmm..i'm so bored..blah.. 🤢

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Ddhi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

HERE,

IS THE 5TH PART,

COLLEGE CANTEEN

Ragini ws sitting sadly in the canteen. jay enters & ask:whts happen ragi

ragini: kuch nhi jay...

jay: kuch to baat h jiski wajah se tum udaas ho..

ragini: nhi aisi koi baat nhi h... main to bas aise hi...

jay: ragi... ab tu njhse jhooth bolegi???

ragini: nhi jay...

jay: chal bata na ... ab to main tera future husband hoon...

ragini: jay main nhi aa sakti trip pay...

jay: but y???

ragini: jay tu jaanta h na... papa ke jaane k baad maa ne mjhe kaise pala h... itni mushkil se ghar ka kharch nikalta h aur uske upar main maa se ye trip ke kharch ki baat kaise karu...

jay: ohh to ye baat h... chal mere saath...

khanna house

jay & ragini entrs... jay screams: aunty...

supriya: haan jay... kaise ho beta...

jay: main thik hoon aunty...

supriya: aaj tum dono itni jaldi kaise aa gaye??

jay: mjhe aapse ek permission chahiye tha...

supriya: permission... kis baat ki??

jay: aunty actuaaly... main jaanta hoon ki ragini aapse koi baat nhi chupati... to isne aapko ye to bataya hi hoga ki hum dono ek doosre se pyaar karte hain...

supriya: haan bataya h... aur main bahut khush hoon... main to hamesha se chahati thi ki tum dono ek doosre ki feelings ko samjo...

jay: to aunty... main ye kehna chahata tha ki...

actually aunty humara college ooty jaa raha trip par... to main ragini ko saath le jana chahta hoon

supriya gets anxious & saw ragini... she too become anxious...

jay: aunty ragini par gussa mat kijiye ga... usne mjhe sab kuch bata diya h... aur aunty aap kyun pareshaan hoti ho... main ragini se pyaar karta hoon aur aapko humse koi prblm nhi h to phir main ragini k trip ka kharcha utha sakta hoon na as her future husband aur aapka beta hone k naate...

supriya feels happy... & said: theek h jao tum dono trip pe...

ragini jumps with joy & hugs her mom...

jay also feels really happy & he also hugs supriya ji with ragini...

outside khanna house

jay: so maam aapki ye prblm b maine solve kar di...

ragini: yes... u r d best...

jay: ya... thts i know... but ye sab karke mjhe kya mila...

ragini blushingly: kya chahiye tjhe...

jay: hmmm a kiss...

jay comes closer to ragini... but she stops her... & smilingly hugs her tight...

jay: chal thik h... but ready rehna ye trip humari zindagi ka sabse khoobsurat trip hoga...

part5 ends