OS: I held her heart

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Varsha

@Psychedelic

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Arnav's POV! Those two fateful days in his life.. Loved how you described it!!

P.S. Even I have exams in May but am unable to stop myself from logging in to IF and reading all these wonderful OS and FFs.. Good luck with your exams! :)

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kiran1992

@kiran1992

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

SUPERB SUPERB SUPERB!!! 👏 👏 👏
I really enjoyed read'g ur OS...
Plz add me in ur PM list...

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Zania

@zaniax

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Wow!!! tht was B.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L ❤️

It's always a pleasure to read ur work..:)

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CrazyAbtTV18

@CrazyAbtTV18

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

well very described.👏 the emotions that he went through in the both occasion has been bought out so very beautifully. loved it.

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savvz

@savvz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

am sure that was what arnav was thinking...

beautiful

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ItsPearl

@ItsPearl

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

In the middle of a lecture.. will be back with a proper comment.. till then - I loved it..!!!

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Nanna

@SmileForMeester

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+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Lyraa, I am getting to read your work after so long and I loved it so much ⭐️

Arnav's emotions were beautifully penned down 👏

An amazing job dear 🤗

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Kay Dee

@PollyTrolly

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

I love your each and every piece. You are so good. Masha Allah! :)

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603840

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

thanks so much very romantic. aww

xxx

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aakriti

@aakriti120

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#20

aww..

awesome update..

the emotions are so beautifully described..

loved how you depicted arnav's emotions during the wedding...it was never me who held her heart...that was soo sad...poor arnav ..

very well written..

thanks for the pm..:)